Guest JoshIcy Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 A dream I had I awake in a world. Having been in what seemed like an eternal stasis, locked in time. Feeling disoriented and thirsty, I step outside my prison in time, to see what now was. The box I'd been in, didn't look like a box at all. But it looked nothing like a box that I had stepped out of. Instead what lay before my eyes was a pale cloud colored blanket on a wooden floor. This was odd, as I swear I had stepped out of what seemed like a stasis chamber from one of those sci-fi cartoons you see. But no, it was like I just stood up from a nap, and the building, old. Decrepit, but well done. As if, it was a sort of rebels shack used to hide. I turn my head to the left, and see a door-shaped exit covered with a blanket. Stepping outside, first thing I notice is the color of the area. Very greenish-blue with water marks all over the walls and moss. This place was very old, maybe hundreds of years. I then take a stretch and feel a book move with my pants pocket. Looking at it, it had no name on it but well bound from age and black in color. I skim read it, and it looked like my journal. So I thought nothing of, moving along to see the rest of the area. The area was almost a perfect circle, aside from 2 doors leading out, a single center room and 1 pathway leading to hanging gardens. Which lead me to question, how could this be a rebel shack. Alas, I moved on. Towards one of the doors, I saw a man clad in Red. Looking like a modern ages Gilgamesh from Final Fantasy VIII and Vash the Stampede in one person. An odd mix, but interesting. He merely gave me a "what's up"-look. And another man, in pure black attire and a hood covering his face. For some reason, when I saw him I thought of Zexion from Kingdom Hearts, with more of a Sci-Fi flair to him. He pointed me towards the center room, as if to beckon me inside. I enter the room, which was closed off with light curtains during the day, but had its own doors. Inside it was well-adjusted to the shape. Everything made for that room, but designed to moved out at a moments notice. In the middle, a woman sat there as if anticipating me come in. I looked at her, and instinctively ran to kiss her passionately. She was wearing a thin white dress, with red-gold trip to it. And what seemed like Scene hair, but worn out. After what seemed like an eternity of being in there with her. We left for the hanging gardens. The hanging gardens had some water so I put my book, onto a nearby bench to prevent it from getting wet, and me and the woman have our fun. But I notice the man in red pick up my book and compare it to numerous others like it. A concerned and puzzled look formed on his face, as I continually check-up on him in curiousity. Suddenly, he beckoned over the man in Black, to compare his book. They both looked deeply disturbed. The man in red suddenly said, "This book isn't from this timeline."~THE END~[spoiler=Warning]Any trolls in this thread will be banned for 3days without warning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 I wish I had warped dreams like that. Sounds like you play too many video games created by M Night Shamalan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Intriguing, to say the least. Very well written also - allows me to imagine the setting and play it out in my own head. Very nice. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Signosis Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Wooow, that's weeeird! I never have dreams like this, Icy! You lucky bum. T-T Other than that, I wonder what this'll lead to? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Sounds like the prequel to a movie if ya don't mind me saying. Even reminds me a bit of Spyro the Dragon for some weird ass reason. I think it may be establishing your personality. That's just a hunch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 tl;dr Anyway I hope you stop having vivid dreams if they all are as long as this. Oh, ban me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 I wish I had warped dreams like that. Sounds like you play too many video games created by M Night Shamalan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 I find it amazing that you remembered it. =o I always have these kinds of dreams. But I never remember them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 your lucky =/ I do have vivid dreams like this but whenever I do its a nightmare ¬_¬ awell have fun in your next dream! . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 I always have the same old "nude in school" dream. My recent one was that they released a new lord of the rings movie and in the cinema I was abducted and forced to go on a long overnight hike with my abductors. Funny thing is we had to wear LOTR style clothes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 My dream was weirder. It was like a House/Touhou crossover. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Hmmm... You've probably thought about thus, but I think this dream is more self reflective than most of the dreams that people tend to have. Here's what stood out to me:Looks like your journal; is from the wrong timelinespent what felt like an eternity with herPrison in timeDesigned to move out in a moment's notice (also the nature of dreams) Also this:Almost a perfect circle The best foreshadowing I have personally ever read anywhere. The hilarious part is that you probably don't realize what you foreshadowed. (Perfect Circle is (A Band and a former meta yugioh deck XD) but in this case, the implication of circle; the female curvature (also the womb) and the "almost perfect" that doesn't make itself evident until the last line, implying more about the imperfection of where you are opposed to the imperfection of the circle at all. +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Aw. I thought it was THAT vivid <_< Eh, I always have weird dreams, sometimes I remember them, sometimes I don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Aw. I thought it was THAT vivid <_< Eh' date=' I always have weird dreams, sometimes I remember them, sometimes I don't.[/quote'] Pussy's generally don't have "that" vivid kind of dreams. no pun intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 tl;dr sounded like heaven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Aw. I thought it was THAT vivid <_< Eh' date=' I always have weird dreams, sometimes I remember them, sometimes I don't.[/quote'] Pussy's generally don't have "that" vivid kind of dreams. no pun intended. ^ Ultimate douche bag. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 My dream was weirder. It was like a House/Touhou crossover. xD I command you to tell us all. You're dream was weird, but at the same time awesome. The spoiler at the end contradicts itself. If someone is banned without warning, why title the spoiler "Warning"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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