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Name (First and Last): Andrew Moore

Age:17

Bio: Andrew

Appearance: Tall guy who is about 6'4" with Short spikey hair. He wears a black t-shirt and a blue jacket. He also wears glasses (unnecessary) and a medallion around his neck that his mother gave him before she died.

[spoiler=I decided to give you the pic.]hot_anime_guy.jpg

 

Home Country: America

Home Town/City: DC

Favorite Pokemon Type: None uses a variety of difficult to find and train.

Any Other Facts: Lost his parents to Pneumonia when he was 10. Since then he's wandered the globe with the money they left him, he is the sole heir to their multi-billion dollar company. He is extremely loyal and will protect his friends with his very life.

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Hi your fan fic is good and i have a character

 

Name (First and Last):Jayden Black

Age:11

Bio:A young boy who lives in a small town and has been interested in pokemon ever since a Magnemite Saved him from falling of a cliff when he was young.Calm and Very brave.

Appearance:Has short Brown hair and is fairly small for his age. Wears Denim shorts and has a stripy rd & yellow t-shirt.

Home Country:Australia

Home Town/City:Bellbird

Favorite Pokemon Type:Electric,Steel & Dark

Any Other Facts:Hopes to have A Magnemite as his starter.

 

Hope You like him

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Super Chaos Sonic

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Name (First and Last):Matt Hawk

Age:15

Bio:A young teenager with dreams of being a master of pokemon.After playing all the pokemon games,he thinks hes ready for the real thing.

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[spoiler=Appearance]sword.jpg

 

Home Country:U.S.A

Home Town/City:Beltsville,MD

Favorite Pokemon Type:Fighting types

Any Other Facts:Has a short temper and has a Riolu as his partner pokemon.

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YES IT IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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Really? 0.o How? 0.o

 

Here's an idea: If you can't get to the computer hand write a chapter then type it when you get on.

 

Good idea, I'll work on that. I have the comp for now, I can start writing ^_^

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[spoiler=Cold Shoulder]Luna came walked into the arena already exploding with cheers.

 

 

“Here is your winner, Renshi Tsuruchi!” the announcer yelled out

 

In front of Luna, on his knees, was a rather obese child. He seemed young; could not be more than 14 years of age. He had a very sad expression on his face, with a little tear flowing out of his eye. In front of him, lied what seemed to be a giant wasp. It had alternating yellow and black stripes on its body, with a very large, yellow stinger on its abdomen. Its arms seemed to be two very large, gray stingers. It seemed to be in pain. As Luna looked closer at the pokemon, she noticed its wings appeared to be burned. They where thin, black, and seemed like they would break if anything touched them.

 

Then Luna was distracted by a loud, threatening bark. Surprised, she looked to see what made the noise. Across the arena was a small, black dog, with what appeared to be bones across it’s back. Before she could get a better look at the pokemon, the trainer behind it pulled out his pokeball.

 

“Houndor, return” the trainer said with a slight accent. Just with the pokemon before it, the pokeball let out a beam that hit the pokemon, and returned it to the ball.

 

The trainer was a young, thin man. He seemed to be about 15 or 16. His hair distracted Luna, which was somewhat spiked, and was a very bright blue.

 

“How disappointing. I expected more from you. To have raised a Beedrill only to have to be so weak is a travesty. Your hopeless.” Renshi coldly said to the boy as he walked away.

 

As the boy got up from his knees, he brought out his pokeball

“Beedrill, return” the boy said in a rather sad, low voice. A red beam flew out of the pokeball, and hit the badly hurt Beedrill. The beam returned to the ball, along with the pokmon.

 

The announcer, noticing this, quickly tried to get the crowd behind him

 

“Come on folks, let’s hear it for this young trainer! It was a great battle. Somebody had to win. Who knows? There might be a future for this kid.”

 

The crowd cheered in agreement with the announcer. However, it did not seem to faze the boy at all. With a blank, emotionless face, he walked to the back.

 

“Well, that battle is over folks! Now it’s time for our final match of the round! Luna Mc.Johnson Vs Brittany Eggroll!”

 

“Eggroll?” Luna said to herself in a laughing voice.

 

The crowd cheered, having just watched a great battle, they where excited to see another battle, that they only hoped could be as good as the last.

 

Luna looked across the arena, and saw her opponent walking in.

 

A tall girl, who looked to be about 16, was walking in. She had very long, black hair that was long enough to reach her hips. She was wearing a white t-shirt, and ripped jeans. On her head was a blue, army style bandana.

 

“Alright folks! It’s time for the battle! Competitors….begin your battle now!”

 

Immediately, Brittany pulled out her pokeball, and threw it into the arena.

 

“Come on Starmie, lets get it done!” she yelled.

 

The ball opened to a fantastic flash of light. As the light began to ebb away, a form began to take shape. When the light show finally ended, a purple star with a glorious red jewel in the middle of it was in the place where the ball was thrown. It was seemingly standing on one of its points.

 

Looking at the beauty of the pokemon, Luna almost forgot to send out her pokemon. When she finally remembered to, she threw the pokeball, sending out her Glaceon.

 

Before Luna could order her pokemon to attack, Brittany yelled her command

 

“Starmie, rapid spin, now!”

 

The Starmie turned in the air, and began spinning faster and faster until it eventually raced toward Glaceon.

 

“Glaceon, dive out of the way!” Luna yelled in a rush

 

Glaceon dove hard to the right, evading the attack-or so it thought

 

The spinning Starmie quickly turned around and rushed, again, toward Glaceon. Again, the cat dove out of the way, only to continue to be pursued by the Starmie. One more time, Glaceon dove, however, it was not quick enough this time, and was hit by the Starmie.

 

The Glaceon cried in pain for a second, and began to limp, trying to stay off of its right back leg for a second, but regained its composure.

 

Worried, Luna yelled at her pokemon, “Glaceon, are you alright!?”

 

Glaceon replied with a meow, and turned its attention to the Starmie.

 

“Good job Starmie, lets see if we can keep this up!” Brittany said in excitement

 

In a small angry voice, Luna responded

 

“Ok Glaceon, lets see if they CAN keep it up. Attack, Ice Beam!”

 

The Glaceon opened its mouth, and appeared a small blue ball in its mouth. Then, like lightning, it quickly shot out a large, cold, blue beam at the Starmie.

 

“Starmie, Rapid Spin!”

 

The Starmie began to spin faster and faster, however, this time it did not move in any direction. The cold beam the Glaceon fired hit the Starmie dead on, but the beam began to break, and eventually shout out in all directions, almost hitting some fans in the crowd!

 

Glaceon stopped its beam, only to see that Starmie was still spinning, apparently unharmed. Then, Starmie responded, rushing again toward Glaceon. This time, Glaceon was too tried from the Ice Beam to dodge, and was hit hard.

 

Glaceon flew back, and everybody could see the amount of pain the pokemon was in.

 

“Glaceon, no!” Luna yelled

 

“Haha! Starmie, your on fire!” Brittany yelled almost as a pun

 

Glaceon got back up, and looked at Luna with a face that almost seemed to suggest something.

Luna looked back in agreement.

 

“Alright, if that’s how you want to play, well play! Now Glaceon, use Hail!”

 

Glaceon opened its mouth again, and just like Ice Beam, appeared a blue ball, this time however, it fired the beam at the roof of the arena. The beam stopped in mid air, and disappeared. Almost instantly, a gray cloud appeared and the arena began to get colder and colder. Then, out of the clouds, first fell snow, and then, fell giant balls of hail.

 

The crowd’s excitement quickly turned into panic as they all began to feel cold, and where struck by the hail.

 

Brittany looked at the cloud in amazement. “Wow, that’s some trick you got there, but I don’t think that gonna help you very-“ She stopped as she heard something like the sound of metal being hit.

 

She looked at her Starmie, and saw it being pounded by the balls of ice. As she looked closer, a look of terror appeared on her face. There, on the jewel in the center of Starmie, appeared a crack.

 

“Haha, seems like your Starmie isn’t that tough. Maybe I should help you put it down for now.” Luna said sarcastically.

 

Angry, Brittany responded

 

“Starmie, Water Gun on the ground”

 

From seemingly nowhere, a blast of water flew out of Starmie, sending it flying toward Glaceon

 

“Now! Use Rapid Spin!”

 

Still being jetted by the water gun, Starmie began to spin incredibly fast, and was aiming for Glaceon

 

“Glaceon, duck, and use Double Kick on Starmies back!”

 

Glaceon did exactly as it was told, it ducked under the Starmies attack, and rolled on it’s back, and hit the pokemon with its hind legs as hard as it could, sending the pokemon flying in the air.

 

“Now Glaceon, end it! Ice Beam, aim for the jewel!”

 

The Glaceon opened its mouth again, and the ball appeared once more, this time, it didn’t fire right away. The ball grew bigger and bigger, until Starmie’s jewel was in sight of Glaceon, and it fired, striking the pokemon right on the jewel.

 

Starmie fell to the ground with a giant, almost metallic thud.

 

Brittany was speech-less, she could not believe what had just happened.

 

“Here is your winner, Luna Mc.Johnson!”

 

The crowd quietly cheered, still afraid of the hail that could fall at any moment.

 

Luna giggled, and walked to the back.

 

“Luna, you did it! That was amazing!” Shane yelled as he ran up to Luna

 

“Hehe, thanks, it was close”

 

“Well, you pulled it out, now where both in the semi-finals!”

 

“I know, lets see who we are facing”

 

Shane and Luna walked to a wall with a TV on it. On it, it showed news of the day, and on the bottom, it showed the new matches as text flying by on the bottom.

 

“Seattle city championships…Semi-Finals contestants decided….Up coming matches… 2 Renshi Tsuruchi Vs 8 Shane Dawson….1 Luna Mc.Johnson Vs 3 Cory Yale”

 

 

 

 

 

I tried really hard at this one, I hope you all like it ^_^

 

BTW, the numbers next to the names of the people are their seed numbers ;)

 

And yes, I choose the pokemon, but you can suggest one.

 

I choose the pokemon based on your age, where you are from, and your fave type of pkm, along with alot of other things, so each persons pokemon fits them pretty well ^_^

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[spoiler=Cold Shoulder]Luna came walked into the arena already exploding with cheers.

 

 

“Here is your winner' date=' Renshi Tsuruchi!” the announcer yelled out

 

In front of Luna, on his knees, was a rather obese child. He seemed young; could not be more than 14 years of age. He had a very sad expression on his face, with a little tear flowing out of his eye. In front of him, lied what seemed to be a giant wasp. It had alternating yellow and black stripes on its body, with a very large, yellow stinger on its abdomen. Its arms seemed to be two very large, gray stingers. It seemed to be in pain. As Luna looked closer at the pokemon, she noticed its wings appeared to be burned. They where thin, black, and seemed like they would break if anything touched them.

 

Then Luna was distracted by a loud, threatening bark. Surprised, she looked to see what made the noise. Across the arena was a small, black dog, with what appeared to be bones across it’s back. Before she could get a better look at the pokemon, the trainer behind it pulled out his pokeball.

 

“Houndor, return” the trainer said with a slight accent. Just with the pokemon before it, the pokeball let out a beam that hit the pokemon, and returned it to the ball.

 

The trainer was a young, thin man. He seemed to be about 15 or 16. His hair distracted Luna, which was somewhat spiked, and was a very bright blue.

 

“How disappointing. I expected more from you. To have raised a Beedrill only to have to be so weak is a travesty. Your hopeless.” Renshi coldly said to the boy as he walked away.

 

As the boy got up from his knees, he brought out his pokeball

“Beedrill, return” the boy said in a rather sad, low voice. A red beam flew out of the pokeball, and hit the badly hurt Beedrill. The beam returned to the ball, along with the pokmon.

 

The announcer, noticing this, quickly tried to get the crowd behind him

 

“Come on folks, let’s hear it for this young trainer! It was a great battle. Somebody had to win. Who knows? There might be a future for this kid.”

 

The crowd cheered in agreement with the announcer. However, it did not seem to faze the boy at all. With a blank, emotionless face, he walked to the back.

 

“Well, that battle is over folks! Now it’s time for our final match of the round! Luna Mc.Johnson Vs Brittany Eggroll!”

 

“Eggroll?” Luna said to herself in a laughing voice.

 

The crowd cheered, having just watched a great battle, they where excited to see another battle, that they only hoped could be as good as the last.

 

Luna looked across the arena, and saw her opponent walking in.

 

A tall girl, who looked to be about 16, was walking in. She had very long, black hair that was long enough to reach her hips. She was wearing a white t-shirt, and ripped jeans. On her head was a blue, army style bandana.

 

“Alright folks! It’s time for the battle! Competitors….begin your battle now!”

 

Immediately, Brittany pulled out her pokeball, and threw it into the arena.

 

“Come on Starmie, lets get it done!” she yelled.

 

The ball opened to a fantastic flash of light. As the light began to ebb away, a form began to take shape. When the light show finally ended, a purple star with a glorious red jewel in the middle of it was in the place where the ball was thrown. It was seemingly standing on one of its points.

 

Looking at the beauty of the pokemon, Luna almost forgot to send out her pokemon. When she finally remembered to, she threw the pokeball, sending out her Glaceon.

 

Before Luna could order her pokemon to attack, Brittany yelled her command

 

“Starmie, rapid spin, now!”

 

The Starmie turned in the air, and began spinning faster and faster until it eventually raced toward Glaceon.

 

“Glaceon, dive out of the way!” Luna yelled in a rush

 

Glaceon dove hard to the right, evading the attack-or so it thought

 

The spinning Starmie quickly turned around and rushed, again, toward Glaceon. Again, the cat dove out of the way, only to continue to be pursued by the Starmie. One more time, Glaceon dove, however, it was not quick enough this time, and was hit by the Starmie.

 

The Glaceon cried in pain for a second, and began to limp, trying to stay off of its right back leg for a second, but regained its composure.

 

Worried, Luna yelled at her pokemon, “Glaceon, are you alright!?”

 

Glaceon replied with a meow, and turned its attention to the Starmie.

 

“Good job Starmie, lets see if we can keep this up!” Brittany said in excitement

 

In a small angry voice, Luna responded

 

“Ok Glaceon, lets see if they CAN keep it up. Attack, Ice Beam!”

 

The Glaceon opened its mouth, and appeared a small blue ball in its mouth. Then, like lightning, it quickly shot out a large, cold, blue beam at the Starmie.

 

“Starmie, Rapid Spin!”

 

The Starmie began to spin faster and faster, however, this time it did not move in any direction. The cold beam the Glaceon fired hit the Starmie dead on, but the beam began to break, and eventually shout out in all directions, almost hitting some fans in the crowd!

 

Glaceon stopped its beam, only to see that Starmie was still spinning, apparently unharmed. Then, Starmie responded, rushing again toward Glaceon. This time, Glaceon was too tried from the Ice Beam to dodge, and was hit hard.

 

Glaceon flew back, and everybody could see the amount of pain the pokemon was in.

 

“Glaceon, no!” Luna yelled

 

“Haha! Starmie, your on fire!” Brittany yelled almost as a pun

 

Glaceon got back up, and looked at Luna with a face that almost seemed to suggest something.

Luna looked back in agreement.

 

“Alright, if that’s how you want to play, well play! Now Glaceon, use Hail!”

 

Glaceon opened its mouth again, and just like Ice Beam, appeared a blue ball, this time however, it fired the beam at the roof of the arena. The beam stopped in mid air, and disappeared. Almost instantly, a gray cloud appeared and the arena began to get colder and colder. Then, out of the clouds, first fell snow, and then, fell giant balls of hail.

 

The crowd’s excitement quickly turned into panic as they all began to feel cold, and where struck by the hail.

 

Brittany looked at the cloud in amazement. “Wow, that’s some trick you got there, but I don’t think that gonna help you very-“ She stopped as she heard something like the sound of metal being hit.

 

She looked at her Starmie, and saw it being pounded by the balls of ice. As she looked closer, a look of terror appeared on her face. There, on the jewel in the center of Starmie, appeared a crack.

 

“Haha, seems like your Starmie isn’t that tough. Maybe I should help you put it down for now.” Luna said sarcastically.

 

Angry, Brittany responded

 

“Starmie, Water Gun on the ground”

 

From seemingly nowhere, a blast of water flew out of Starmie, sending it flying toward Glaceon

 

“Now! Use Rapid Spin!”

 

Still being jetted by the water gun, Starmie began to spin incredibly fast, and was aiming for Glaceon

 

“Glaceon, duck, and use Double Kick on Starmies back!”

 

Glaceon did exactly as it was told, it ducked under the Starmies attack, and rolled on it’s back, and hit the pokemon with its hind legs as hard as it could, sending the pokemon flying in the air.

 

“Now Glaceon, end it! Ice Beam, aim for the jewel!”

 

The Glaceon opened its mouth again, and the ball appeared once more, this time, it didn’t fire right away. The ball grew bigger and bigger, until Starmie’s jewel was in sight of Glaceon, and it fired, striking the pokemon right on the jewel.

 

Starmie fell to the ground with a giant, almost metallic thud.

 

Brittany was speech-less, she could not believe what had just happened.

 

“Here is your winner, Luna Mc.Johnson!”

 

The crowd quietly cheered, still afraid of the hail that could fall at any moment.

 

Luna giggled, and walked to the back.

 

“Luna, you did it! That was amazing!” Shane yelled as he ran up to Luna

 

“Hehe, thanks, it was close”

 

“Well, you pulled it out, now where both in the semi-finals!”

 

“I know, lets see who we are facing”

 

Shane and Luna walked to a wall with a TV on it. On it, it showed news of the day, and on the bottom, it showed the new matches as text flying by on the bottom.

 

“Seattle city championships…Semi-Finals contestants decided….Up coming matches… 2 Renshi Tsuruchi Vs 8 Shane Dawson….1 Luna Mc.Johnson Vs 3 Cory Yale”

 

 

 

 

 

I tried really hard at this one, I hope you all like it ^_^

 

BTW, the numbers next to the names of the people are their seed numbers ;)

 

And yes, I choose the pokemon, but you can suggest one.

 

I choose the pokemon based on your age, where you are from, and your fave type of pkm, along with alot of other things, so each persons pokemon fits them pretty well ^_^

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ok

 

I'll send you my character =D

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