summers307 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Well guys, here's some new and olds of my sets. Also, criticize to your hearts content as I'm beginning to print them to build a true Avatar deck. Hope you like em, cuz I sure do. I keep cleaning them up as I can, but I am not omnipitent. Please report SPECIFIC OCG errors to help a poor guy out.I've condensed this so it's not flooding anymore. There's no linear fashion for these, so these are all just "parts" so you don't get overwhelmed. [spoiler=Part 1] [spoiler=Part 2] [spoiler=Part 3] [spoiler=Part 4] [spoiler=Part 5] [spoiler=Part 6] [spoiler=Part 7] [spoiler=Part 8] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Change some of the names like "I was never angry with you"otherwise good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 awesome, quality work as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Cool, 10/10. But what about Aang cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Cool' date=' 10/10. But what about Aang cards?[/quote'] Here's one of the Aangs I have for you. Re-read the beginning text, added something for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 These are nice and solid. While I recommend you give Zuko an effect (all the other benders have em, why not?) I kinda like the face that Sokka is a vanilla (He IS the idea guy after all...) Other than the few name changes necessary (mostly the more verbose ones, i.e. YOU WILL NEVER LIVE DOWN THIS DEFEAT! (imo) should be SHAME AND HUMILIATION!) nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 awsome 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 These are nice and solid. While I recommend you give Zuko an effect (all the other benders have em' date=' why not?) I kinda like the face that Sokka is a vanilla (He IS the idea guy after all...) Other than the few name changes necessary (mostly the more verbose ones, i.e. YOU WILL NEVER LIVE DOWN THIS DEFEAT! (imo) should be SHAME AND HUMILIATION!) nice work![/quote'] Your ideas are wonderful. The only one I'll fight you on is Zuko's vanillaness. I made him that way because even though he's a bender, he really displays nothing extrodinary as a bender until the final chapters. To parallel the early chapters, I feel that being a spellcaster was enough for now. The new name was a great suggestion, and if you take a look, you'll see a familiar phrase in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kongerdude27 Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Pics - 10/10Effects - 10/10OCG - 8/10Not OP at all! Overall - 9.5/10!AWSOME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 these cards are awsome 10000000000000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Ratings over 100000000000/10 kinda remind me like the show "Who's line is it anyway". The site where everythings made up and the scores don't matter. That's right, the scores are like "Blair Witch 2". Nevertheless, I thank all of your for your ratings and words of niceness! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burnburn Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Not bad I like most fav is King Bumi 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Ratings over 100000000000/10 kinda remind me like the show "Who's line is it anyway". The site where everythings made up and the scores don't matter. That's right' date=' the scores are like "Blair Witch 2". Nevertheless, I thank all of your for your ratings and words of niceness![/quote'] That rating is OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL I love memes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 These are pretty cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Good, good. You're progressing, and well. But, might I suggest a change in name once again? I.e. "A ruler with Clouded Judgement" shortened to simply "Clouded Judgement (PLEASE don't attack me on the spelling of the word "Judgement"). Or "Disturbed Azula" changed to "Azula: Insane Princess". Also, the OCG (if you care about it much) needs work. "Defenders" are "attack targets". If you want to refer to that card, call it "this card", and don't use its name unless a specific effect calls for it.For Example:""Avatar State's' Attribute is also treated as FIRE, WATER, EARTH, and WIND."becomes"This card is also treated as FIRE, WATER, EARTH, and WIND."Some of your OCG seems familiar... do you play Magic: The Gathering by any chance? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Dear Bringer of Cake, why would I flame you over good advice? You've told me EXACTLY what I've been looking for. The only thing is now I've got a lot of cards to edit.....*ACK!* Yes, I did play Magic, though not for quite some time now. Guess I mix the messages from time to time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asuka Reishim Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 love the cards.love the program!Needed abetter ending though.4 / 5* *See Rating System Below. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 These are very good ocg needs a tad bit of work but you know the show very well by the looks of it ;D I iz jealous @ lol I remember when Sokka first named Combustion Man Sparky Sparky Boom Boom man or sumthing like that ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anderson the spider Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 love the cards but toph needs a better effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Great cards- only spotted one Ocg error (or it was my imagination)9.999/10The -.001 was for being the slightest OPoh yeah... tour opponent cant attack your life points directly while you have a monster on the feild, tophs effect must be changed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Great cards- only spotted one Ocg error (or it was my imagination)9.999/10The -.001 was for being the slightest OPoh yeah... tour opponent cant attack your life points directly while you have a monster on the feild' date=' tophs effect must be changed[/quote'] I'm sure you meant "your opponent". I could list a lot of monsters in the real game, and in these avatar cards I've made, that have the ability to attack an opponents life points directly, regardless of monsters you control. That being said, you are the second person now to tell me that I need to change Tophs ability. I only have so many creative juices people, and I've made over 140 cards now. Anyone want to throw in an idea instead of a completely unhelpful "make it better" comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 melon lord, nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Just for people's information:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Direct_AttackerAnd from the stuff on this page, there aren't many cards to change. You have some slight discrepancies, but that's about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Bump and update: Fixed the Avatars OCG's and posted a new card. Also, making siggy cards on request. Might do a shop if I feel that motivated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 I lurve the new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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