Super Half Vamp Riku Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 great cards 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Very nice cards, OCG could be improved a little-example: I believe that on "Clouded Jugement" you don't have to write "(this is not optional)" and "he/she" becomes "they".Correct me if I'm wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 good new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Very nice cards' date=' OCG could be improved a little-example: I believe that on "Clouded Jugement" you don't have to write "(this is not optional)" and "he/she" becomes "they".Correct me if I'm wrong.[/quote'] The he/she is right. I'll correct that one soon as I can. The this is not optional concept I got from the archfiend option. Unlike other standby phase costs which can be ignored to remove the card, this cost can not be avoided and could lead to your own defeat if not handled properly. Thank you for the insight, it's very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 your cool for handleing this all professional Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 your cool for handleing this all professional In the words of King Leonidas, "there's no reason we cant be civil". *stabs flamer in the chest* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bangverde Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 your cool new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Sorry if this is spamming, but that I was impressed by the way that you replied.Now for the rating-9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 I have an effect for toph,If an opponents monster attacks your life points directly, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Now I've got even more cards in the set! I don't know if I can stop making these things... (sob). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 awesome cards i think i only saw 1 OCG error the rest were ok and avatar rocks awesome show love it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Now I've got even more cards in the set! I don't know if I can stop making these things... (sob). Keep making more, there very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 I have an effect for toph' date='If an opponents monster attacks your life points directly, you can Special Summon this card from your hand.[/quote'] +1 Rep for you, that was an awsome suggestion and it's been changed as of now. THIS IS WHAT I ASK FOR!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Updates: I've condensed this into spoilers now. If you have read this thread before, new cards in part 3. If your new, have fun! PS: has any seen my mind? I let it wander and it didn't come back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Postman Pat Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 These are great cards, as I might have stated before. And I saw your mind grabbing a bite to eat out of the fridge, better come and get it before it kersplodes XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 nice new cards. I Seriously can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Can't...wait for more....too much...pressure....gonna... (eyes roll back and passes out) (mind comes back after eating fudge, sees me passed out, shrugs, and goes to get the milk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Awesome new cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Looking at Part Three, you're doing quite well. You've posted SW's twice, but that's easily fixed. Let's see:~THE EFFECTS~Teachings of the Spirit Library: Maybe returned to the Deck? Possibly the bottom?Bitter Work/Friendly Instruction/An Unlikely Teacher: I like the premise, but I believe each teacher should be on the field for their respective card to activate (I.e. You can only activate this card if you control a "Katara of the Southern Water Tribe". (And here's where you can get interesting: You can use one of three effects: "Tribute 1 "Aang: The last airbender" you control to Special Summon 1 "Aang: Mastering [Element] from your hand or Deck." or without the Tribute effect. Or you can stick with the hand search effect. Either way, I say have the Seefu (or however you spell it) on the field to activate the card.)Water Tribe Soldiers: Maybe they could use Equipment Shields, like Power Tool Dragon?I'll post OCG fixes another day. But mark my words (even though they're already marked here), I will help you with the remainder of OCG for these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakesh Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 You posted Sun Warriors and Family Quarrel twice.Nice Cards.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 To bringer of cake: My thanks for your painstaking time looking over these cards. As you can see, I've used all your ideas, and I definetly think these are for the better now. Bit of a block right now, so it's gonna take me a day or two to make some new cards, but I'm happy to have an editor now!lol Everyone, keep on keepin on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinsbon Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Change "the" in Toph's effect to "this." I think that's what you're trying to say right? Summon her to cancel the direct attack? Also, if you want, you can take some of my avatar ideas from my thread cause its dead. The link is at the bottom of my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Updated bump: Part 4 has something in it now, the next wave of inspiration, but also my most conflicted set (to me that is). I know "enemy birds" has OCG, but I'm stumped how to word it properly. If it doesn't make sense, I want it to deny your opponent to look at cards in his deck if he's not drawing them. Any better way to word it? I do love "Jenomite ring", and think it makes sense, but what do I know? Hope you like the new editions! Oh and Flinsbon, thank you very much for letting me compare. Always good to meet another Avatar fan! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Here's my idea of Enemy Birds (Love that moment: These...are ENEMY BIRDS.)Your opponent cannot activate card effects that allow them to look at the top card(s) of their Deck without shuffling it afterward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summers307 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Used it verbatem. It's like you can re-assemble the chaos in my head and fix it right. At this point, I feel like I'm gonna need to make a whole deck of siggy cards for the edits you've helped me with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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