Brendano Harns Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Self Drawn. [spoiler=[size=25]RULES[/size]]Don't point out weaknesses, unless you plan to help fix them. The same goes for the picture. Also, do not tell me the effect is too simple, because it is supposed to be part of a set which I am making. Anyone who does not follow these rules shall be reported ASAP. This card is for a set that is going to be created later on, so don't say that the effect is simple. Enjoy! [spoiler=Effect]When a Rock-Type monster you control is destroyed by a Card Effect, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 face-up card on the field OR have 1 monster you control gain 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 picture looks terrible Simple but practical effect. OCG looks good too 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Good card, the image isn't the greatest, the OCG is solid, and the effect is useful. A very playable card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Neither of you followed the rules of this thread, therefore I am completely diregarding the fact that you even looked at this thread, let alone that you commented on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 It can SS itself, i think you should put an exception. And, the pic is not so good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 *facepalm* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I'm not really sure what it's supposed to look like, so I can't say anything on the pic. But I like how you hand draw all your cards. The OCG is perfect as far as I can tell. Simple effects are great in my book. Overall, I give you 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 It's supposed to be a little crystal mound with legs, basically. An eye as well, as that is a little important. ^_^ But, besides that, I'm glad you like it! Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 its ok, im guesing self drawn pic (because thier is no image credit), i give it 9/10 very practicle and original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Thank you. Also, make sure you read the first two words in the first post. ;) And yes, that has been there the entire time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Pretty solid card; I like it. Simplistic effects are the best in my book. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I personally like the image. It's very abstract and a great style :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Thanks! :D Again, if there is anything that can be fixed in this card anywhere, please feel free to say so! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Perfect OCG. I already told u about ur pics, but I enjoy them.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 It's a lot like an improved Man eater bug. I'm still debating whether the first effect is too much. Maybe if you changed it so it is returned to your hand instead? As for your picture, well, I think you could do a bit more. If you add some shading, I think it will be good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 The OCG seems fine. Well, the card is a great support for Rock-Type Decks. You could increase the ATK gain at the end for about 200 points to make it more useful. It's a card that comes back, gets destroyed. Then destroys and goes back again. Outstanding. The Pic fits the card. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 9.3/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 holy crap dont report so much cause they tried to help it not right the ocg is fine so good job on that but the pic is horrible, what is it suppose to be, it looks like a chicken with 1 eye i dont know what i have to say so you wont report this but ya thats all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 "When a Rock-Type monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon this card (replaced: monster) from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card ( remove: from your hand) to destroy 1 card on the field OR have 1 monster you control gain 500 ATK." The "new" OCG no longer states that cards are "discarded from the hand", rather simply "discarded", because cards on the field, in the Deck, in the Graveyard or the ones remove from play cannot be discarded anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 This card is part of a minority, of cards having a pic looking like a real Yugioh-Card^^The effect is a very good Rock-Type Support effect. Even if destroying 1 card on the field is way better than just increasing 1 monster's ATK. Still nice card 9/10 +0,5 for the fact, that its self-drawn 9,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 "When a Rock-Type monster you control is destroyed by battle' date=' you can Special Summon this card (replaced: monster) from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card ( remove: from your hand) to destroy 1 card on the field OR have 1 monster you control gain 500 ATK." The "new" OCG no longer states that cards are "discarded from the hand", rather simply "discarded", because cards on the field, in the Deck, in the Graveyard or the ones remove from play cannot be discarded anyway. Okay, thanks for keeping me updated. ;) I'll change the effect ASAP. This card is part of a minority' date=' of cards having a pic looking like a real Yugioh-Card^^The effect is a very good Rock-Type Support effect. Even if destroying 1 card on the field is way better than just increasing 1 monster's ATK. Still nice card 9/10 +0,5 for the fact, that its self-drawn 9,5/10[/quote'] Thank you! ^_^ I'm glad you really like the pic! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Its a bit much, since you can destroy any card (including s/t) Its not against the rules to say your picture is bad, so you can report all you want, its not going to do much :/ I respect your desire to use self drawn cards, but this is still a bad pic :/ Try working a bit more on light source, the pic looks very flat. Also, you said it is supposed to be a rock, but you left the "body" smooth. Try looking at pictures of real rocks and creating ledges and cracks and whatnot. Which then, in combination with shadows/lighting, would give you a much more realistic picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 hmm very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Its a bit much' date=' since you can destroy any card (including s/t) Its not against the rules to say your picture is bad, so you can report all you want, its not going to do much :/ I respect your desire to use self drawn cards, but this is still a bad pic :/ Try working a bit more on light source, the pic looks very flat. Also, you said it is supposed to be a rock, but you left the "body" smooth. Try looking at pictures of real rocks and creating ledges and cracks and whatnot. Which then, in combination with shadows/lighting, would give you a much more realistic picture.[/quote'] I think I'll make it a face-up card. I will report all I want. :lol: I said specifically that if they give me advice, tips, ect. about how to make it better, I don't mind if they slap me in the face and say "THAT PIC SUCKS!!!!!! DIE!!!" Thank you for the very good tip. I may even go back over this pic and do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 ok really stop reporting people cause they are trying to help and nothing is guna happen either, i rated what i thought and told you how to improve and you still reported the post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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