hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Here she is, enjoy! [spoiler=Card Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner(s)While you control another monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target and is unaffected by card effects. Destroy any monster that battles this card after damage calculation. You can discard a card to take no damage from a battle involving this card. [spoiler=Card Effect]When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon 2 "Sleeping Kitten Token" (LIGHT/LV3/Beast-type/0/2000) to your side of the field in Defense position. During your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon this card instead of drawing a card. This card's effect(s) is then negated for the rest of the duel. [spoiler=Card Effect]All other "Cat", "Kitty" and "Kitten" cards on your side of the Field gain 500 ATK. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle or inflicts battle damage to your opponent, put 1 "Wise Black Counter" on this card (Max 3). You can remove 2 "Wise Black Counter"s from this card to destroy a card on the Field. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 "Wise Black Counter" from this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, if it had at least 1 "Wise Black Counter" on it, you can draw a card. She's mostly for taking out monsters in battle while taking no damage... Tried to make it as balanced as possible... Pleast rate, comment suggest and stuff! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamop CardMaker Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Nice to see a cat card around here. I'd say OCG is perfect and It may be a tad overpowered. :D 9/10 Great card. Make some more cat cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks! Can you beleive this: Years ago when I joined this website, I made a complete 40 Card Cat Deck, and my computer HAD to crash :( Well, I can always rebuild it little by little, with this as the start! If I get more good feedback from this, I'll keep making more cats :D! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Just some minor capitalization errors: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhile you control another monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target and is unaffected by card effects. Destroy any monster that battles this card after Damage Calculation. You can discard 1 card to reduce Battle Damage from a battle involving this card to 0. And, LV8 is a tad bit high. Even with the effect, it should be a LV7 or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzuku Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner(s)While you control another monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target and is unaffected by card effects. Destroy any monster that battles this card after damage calculation. You can discard a card FROM YOUR HAND to make Battle Damage involving this monster become 0. <---- I think that's right, but anyhooo. I love the picture, the effect is a tad bit overboard, tone it down a bit. overall, 8.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antist0opid Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 awwwwwwww kitty! awesome card though. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 awesome 10/10 love that cute cat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks guys for the wording fixes, and of course the rates! Also, Shin's and jk's comments kinda cancel each other out: jk says LV is a bit high, but that is because ->Shin says: Its a bit over powered. So the card is powered because it is high level, m'kay? Also, I was considering making it LV7, but I wanted to keep it even, those are usually easier to get out, no?Thanks you two for the 10's! and Yup, I love the pic. too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Good card, I like the image and the OCG is decent. It does seem a bit overpowered, considering it really can't be destroyed while you have a another monster. Maybe add that it can't attack your opponent directly. The Level doesn't fit the image very well, as a kitten is not what you usually find with Level 8 monsters. That's just my opinion. Interesting card though. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 I kinda' expected a level 6 Beast-Type Synchro Oh, and I think it needs some sort of battle-immunity effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 To both: Well, my original intention was to make it a LV6 monster, but that seemed too low for it's effect. To Armadilloz: The battle immunity is the not being able to be attacked, that way, if the other monster is removed from the field, it would be vulnerable. I didn't want to make it too powerful, huh? Thanks for feedback, all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 To Armadilloz: The battle immunity is the not being able to be attacked' date=' that way, if the other monster is removed from the field, it would be vulnerable. I didn't want to make it too powerful, huh?[/quote'] No, I ment that it has 1500ATK.So it can only really defeat monsters in Defence Position, or something with 1499ATK or less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Oh, okay. That's why I had the effect: "Destroy any monster that battles this card after damage calculation." Right? That would instantly kill any battling card. That's what you meant, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 a little too low for the atk even for this effect, make it up to 2000ish or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks for the comment, and raised the ATK to 2200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 i'd be afraid of this cat... very afraid...effect is reasonably balanced, maybe a little op'ed. ocg is good, any mistakes have been mentioned.picture is good, its matches the card.overall: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks, Sephiroth. Well, I figured people were a bit scared of "Rescue Cat" so this should make them fall out of their chair, huh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Yes! A CAT! :D Everything that I was going to point out has pretty much all been pointed out. Pretty usable effect, some minor OCG errors, and a great pic. Well done. 8.5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks alot. You're the second person to point out they like cats, so I decided to make a new one. It could be seen as very overpowered, but hopefully it's not too bad, and it's just a really fast way to get out White Ribbon Kitten. Hope you guys like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 awesome the new tuner are awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zexion888 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 those cats are so cute i have to give it a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 thanks for the rate zexion! But, I hope you liked the effects as well, not just the pictures! To shiny: I'm glad you like the tuner! If I keep getting good feedback, I'll continue it into a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks for the comment' date=' and raised the ATK to 2200.[/quote'] all right, then now I can raise the rate to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Thanks Ragnarok, although I think a 8/10 wasn't too bad, huh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 MAO!! Uh, bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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