Pterodactyl Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Hi, I'm new and I really didn't know what to make cards on so I just did these. please don't be too hard on me, this is my first set. .:neutral: img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/1957/403715.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 The 3rd and 4th cards have Fake Types. Don't do that. The 3rd card's effect is really confusing. OCG needs a bit of workBut anyway, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pterodactyl Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 more card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imperial tech Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Hi I'm New Aswell.That new card 'Delta Blaster' is quite good. You know how?Because simple is better. I think I'll agree with jk233_ultimatemaster and say 7/10My Best: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Ok, I said this to Yugizatch and I'll say the same thing here. Vanilla cards are shunned by most members of YCM. But I like them. You know why? Because they tell a story. Try to add more flavour to the text. "A bird with a broom for a beak" is very basic and just tells you the obvious. There isn't even any description, it just states what you can see in the picture. "An unusal creature that is feared by other Winged-Beasts due to the magnificently strange beak it bears", doesn't that sound much better? You get more a taste from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 I agree withjk233_ultimatemaster but i will give you a low rating. Sorry 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Vanilla cards are shunned by most members of YCM.Its not that they are shunned' date=' its just that people tend to make them like this:[img']http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5199/165606b.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pterodactyl Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Thanks for the tip about being more descriptive. This is my first ritual card and I hope that it works correctly. I also made a trap and effect monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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