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Username:riku

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Novice lots of corrections

 

 

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Hey Riku, nice to see ya again. I'll help you with your card's OCG. ;)

 

Here's a fix:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 "Espada 6-Luppy" to the Graveyard. When this card attacks an opponent's monster, you lose 500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Grimmjaw-Pantera Form" from your _________.

 

Fill in the blank with where you're Special Summoning it from. Graveyard, hand, Deck, etc, or any combination of those locations. ^_^

 

So basically your biggest thing here is that you need to capitalize letters, like on "Normal Summoned", "Set", and Special Summoned. For Summons and Sets, you need capitals. You also need capitals for locations (like Graveyard and Deck), except for "hand", which is lowercase. Card names also need to be capitalized, like "Espada 6-Luppy". Finally, don't forget quotation marks around card names in effects.

 

Just remember those and your OCG should be better down the road. ;D

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[spoiler=effect]Each time your opponent destroys a monster you control, your opponent's monster is removed from play for 3 turns. You can skip 3 Draw Phases to draw 3 cards. This card gains 500 ATK for each card removed from play. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can skip 5 Draw Phases to have your opponent draw 5 cards.

 

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Username: ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Lord of D.". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Dragon-Type monsters cannot be targeted by Spell Cards, Trap Cards, or Effect Monster's effects. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monsters in Attack Position.

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