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Username: ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Lord of D.". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Dragon-Type monsters cannot be targeted by Spell Cards, Trap Cards, or Effect Monster's effects. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monsters in Attack Position.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Lord of D.". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Dragon-Type monsters cannot be targeted by Spell Cards, Trap Cards, or Effect Monster's effects [i think "cannot be targeted by card effects" would do it to]. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster in Attack Position. [from where?

 

kinda OP i think. Pic is good, altough it doesn't fit Lord of D.

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Username: Reborn Arc (due for change soon)

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During each of your End Phases, pay 500 Life Points or destroy this card. Each player receives certain effects, depending on the monster Attributes they control:

•LIGHT: You can not send cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. •DARK: You cannot Special Summon any monsters from your Graveyard. •EARTH: During your Standby Phase, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster you control. •WATER: Increase the Level of all Monster Cards in your hand by 2. •FIRE: Downgrade all Monster Cards on the field by 2 Levels. •WIND: You cannot Special Summon any monsters from your Deck.

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" you control from play while "Clouded World" is face-up on the field. This card is not treated as a LIGHT monster while it is face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects: •You can remove 2 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to destroy 1 Set card on the field. • You can flip this card to face-down Defense position to return all monsters in ATK position to their owner's hands.

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Username: ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ

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What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?:Expert

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191897g.jpg

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Lord of D.". As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' all Dragon-Type monsters cannot be targeted by Spell Cards, Trap Cards, or Effect Monster's effects. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monsters in Attack Position.

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Judging on this, I will put you in advanced

 

 

 

Username: Reborn Arc (due for change soon)

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What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: Pro

Example Of Your Work:

10zobwi.jpg

During each of your End Phases' date=' pay 500 Life Points or destroy this card. Each player receives certain effects, depending on the monster Attributes they control:

•LIGHT: You can not send cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. •DARK: You cannot Special Summon any monsters from your Graveyard. •EARTH: During your Standby Phase, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster you control. •WATER: Increase the Level of all Monster Cards in your hand by 2. •FIRE: Downgrade all Monster Cards on the field by 2 Levels. •WIND: You cannot Special Summon any monsters from your Deck.

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" you control from play while "Clouded World" is face-up on the field. This card is not treated as a LIGHT monster while it is face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects: •You can remove 2 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to destroy 1 Set card on the field. • You can flip this card to face-down Defense position to return all monsters in ATK position to their owner's hands.

 

Expert well done

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Just for future reference, your picture's "Sin Blue-Eyes White Dragon", and you've got OCG errors like "remove _____" or "remove ______ from play" as opposed to "remove from play ______", "Defense position" as opposed to Defense Position", and "ATK position" as opposed to "Attack Position". "Blue Eyes" has always tended to be hyphenated too if I remember correctly, and I assume "Dragun" was intentional as in "King Dragun", but as a BEWD counterpart, I don't quite see the need to be converting it into a "Dragun". As for "Clouded World", you've got some potential problems with people calling you out and marking you down for originality, just something to be careful about. Also, I'm aware of "downgrade"'s use in "A Legendary OCean" and possibly others, but the newer "Silent Strider" uses "reduce".

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