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My newest card :)

 

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How about you got too much points because a mod sponsor your contest? Because I can see what you did there.

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"Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, increases your Life Points by 300 for each card in your hand." The last part I don't really know.

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I think he wants it to say can, as to make it optional. Thus, he had the first part correct.

 

so like this

"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can gain 300 Life Points for each card in your hand. If this card is destroyed, it is removed from play."

 

I'm more leaning towards "Once per turn during your Main Phase, gain 300 Life Points for each card in your hand. If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play instead."

 

If the "Once per turn" has a Phase specified, the comma only goes after the Phase specified, not after "Once per turn". As for the whole removed from play thing, I'm pretty sure it's OCG but it's just from memory since I'm being lazy today. Should be right though, just sayin'.

 

 

I checked with REAL Cards on making the OCG right >.>

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My newest card :)

 

372403.jpg

 

How about you got too much points because a mod sponsor your contest? Because I can see what you did there.

@Iduck

"Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, increases your Life Points by 300 for each card in your hand." The last part I don't really know.

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I think he wants it to say can, as to make it optional. Thus, he had the first part correct.

 

so like this

"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can gain 300 Life Points for each card in your hand. If this card is destroyed, it is removed from play."

 

I'm more leaning towards "Once per turn during your Main Phase, gain 300 Life Points for each card in your hand. If this card would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is removed from play instead."

 

If the "Once per turn" has a Phase specified, the comma only goes after the Phase specified, not after "Once per turn". As for the whole removed from play thing, I'm pretty sure it's OCG but it's just from memory since I'm being lazy today. Should be right though, just sayin'.

 

 

I checked with REAL Cards on making the OCG right >.>

 

Is that so? List 'em.

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Made while drunk:

 

Solomon Air(RBH - EN 012)

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Discard 1 card to activate this card. Select 1 monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Then' date=' add 1 "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.[/i']

 

Part of the following set:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-174996.html

Is Fusioh supposed to be Fusion?

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We can do nothing if the leader of this club is not on, so I don't know what its the matter with you.

Anyway:

This is my newest card, what do you guys (of the club) think?

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1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner

In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card.

This card can only be Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by the effects of Monster and Trap Cards. This card gains 500 DEF everytime a monster is destroyed by battle. When this card's DEF is 2000 or higher, this card can attack your opponent directly.

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Made while drunk:

 

Solomon Air(RBH - EN 012)

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Discard 1 card to activate this card. Select 1 monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Then' date=' add 1 "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.[/i']

 

Part of the following set:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-174996.html

 

Any OCG corrections?

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Discard 1 card to activate this card. Select 1 monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Then, add 1 "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.

 

As Deus stated, I can't find anything wrong with it.


Speaking of OCG, I just finished this, anyone wanna correct the OCG on it?

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1 Anti-Tuner monster + 1 Synchro Monster + 1 Dark Synchro Monster

When this card is Summoned, remove 1 Synchro monster from your opponents Extra Deck from play. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the monster removed by the previous effect to your opponents side of the field in Defense Position. When the Special Summoned monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponents Life points equal to the monsters level x500

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Reborn Hero - Lux(RBH - EN 013)

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Reborn Hero Voltaic + Reborn Hero Xhamyr

This monster cannot be Fusion Summoned except by the effect of "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization". During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play, if you do, Special Summon this monster during your next Standby Phase. When this monster is Special Summoned, (excluding Fusion Summon) destroy all face-up monsters with less ATK than this monster.

 

Part of my Reborn Heroes set: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-174996.html

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"Reborn Hero Voltaic" + "Reborn Hero Xhamyr"

This card can only be Fusion Summoned with "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization". During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned (excluding Fusion Summon), destroy all face-up monsters with an ATK lower than this card.

 

1 Anti-Tuner monster + 1 Synchro Monster + 1 Dark Synchro Monster

When this card is Summoned, remove from play 1 Synchro Monster from your opponent's Extra Deck. When this card is destroyed by a card's effect, Special Summon the monster removed by this card's effect to your opponents field in Defense Position. When the Special Summoned monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x500.

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Discard 1 card to activate this card. Select 1 monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Then' date=' add 1 "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.[/i']

 

As Deus stated, I can't find anything wrong with it.

Me nither

 

Speaking of OCG, I just finished this, anyone wanna correct the OCG on it?

tys7b.jpg

1 Anti-Tuner monster + 1 Synchro Monster + 1 Dark Synchro Monster

When this card is Summoned, remove 1 Synchro monster from your opponents Extra Deck from play. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the monster removed by the previous effect to your opponents side of the field in Defense Position. When the Special Summoned monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponents Life points equal to the monsters level x500

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Discard 1 card to activate this card. Select 1 monster from your Deck and remove it from play. Then' date=' add 1 "Fusioh Chaos - Quantum Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.[/i']

 

As Deus stated, I can't find anything wrong with it.

Me nither

 

Speaking of OCG, I just finished this, anyone wanna correct the OCG on it?

tys7b.jpg

1 Anti-Tuner monster + 1 Synchro Monster + 1 Dark Synchro Monster

When this card is Summoned, remove 1 Synchro monster from play in your opponents Extra Deck from play. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the removed monster removed by the previous effect to your opponents side of the field in face-up Defense Position. When the Special Summoned monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent Life Points equal to the monsters Level x500.

People should be able to understand "the removed" monster by the previous effect. Your wording doesn't really sound right on that part. When you state 1 Position when it's Summoned, you put face-up before the name of the Position. Your opponent seems better than your opponent's Life Points. Eh...correct any mistakes I've made, I'm getting used to the new OCG.

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