Merged MCM -Master Card Makers & OCGC-Official Card Grammer Club

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Yes there is.

 

BTW congrats on the sticky mate!

 

Your welcome

 

 

Yeah' date=' how did this happen?

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Probably this was a really good and know thread, Flame Dragon decided to stick this thread

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

If there is no "Reborn Hero - Voltaic" in the Removed From Play Zone or face-up on the field' date=' destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent can Normal Summon twice during his/her turn. Negate your opponent's first Normal Summon of a monster and destroy it.

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"Removed From Play Zone" has never been used ever and "his/her" has been old for a while.

 

Acien Tower

If there is no "Reborn Hero - Voltaic" either removed from play or face-up on the field' date=' destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent can Normal Summon twice during their turn. Negate your opponent's first Normal Summon of a monster and destroy it.[/i']

 

Needs fixin.

 

I'm thinking "Destroy this card unless there is a "Reborn Hero - Voltaic" that is removed from play and/or face-up on the field. Once during each of your opponent's turns, your opponent can Normal Summon 1 additional time. Once per turn, negate the Normal Summon of your opponent's monster and destroy it."

 

Referenced "Destroy this card unless [condition]" as opposed to "If there is no [condition], destroy this card" from various "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters, "Burning Skull Head" for OCG on specific removed from play monsters, confirmation of "and/or"'s not being obsolete from "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru", and "1 additional time" from "Double Summon".

 

I used "Once per turn, negate the Normal Summon etc" because it wouldn't be optional without "you can", so they'd be forced to negate the first Normal Summon and you would still be using traditional OCG.

 

Is it "Acien Tower", "Ancien Tower", or "Ancient Tower"? You have "Acien" as your title in your post and "Ancien" on your card, so just checkin'.

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Those are a lot of corrections on that card you fixed `~ P O L A R I S ~

[Ghost Ryder]

How long has this thread been stickied? Congrats' date=' peoplez

I say we celebrate with a song

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Beast-Type and 1 Fairy-Type monster you control. This card cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. This card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. This card gains 500 ATK for each LIGHT monster in the either players Graveyard(s). This card cannot attack your opponent Life Points when its ATK is 2500 or higher. than 2500

Please correct any mistakes I've made during this correction. Here you go DMG.

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Hello Daco, haven't seen you in quite a while, and thanks for correcting the card

[Mindscatter]

Hell, it is so hard to follow this club! You all just post too fast for me to make sense of anything.

[Lexadin]

Me to, but just smile and wave to the public.

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Hell' date=' it is so hard to follow this club! You all just post too fast for me to make sense of anything.

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Then just press on reply on one of the posts and then it will be fine even if it passes by

[Deustodo]

Well if it's OCG fixes you want:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by sending 1 Warrior and 1 Fish-Type monster you control to the Graveyard. This card cannot be Set or flipped face-down. This card gains 150 DEF for each WATER monster you control and in your Graveyard. When this card's DEF is 1500' date=' this card can attack your opponent directly. [s']This card is unaffected by the effect of Spell and Trap Cards.[/s] This card cannot be targeted by your opponent's Spell and Trap cards.(way more balanced this way)

 

You didn't correct it, you just added a new effect, and The unaffected is te base effect of the "Celestial" monsters.

Also, DMG, your Celestial Card has a big DEF, Celestial monsters has a really low DEF. Also, "Removed From Play Zone" exist, but It just not showed used in any card, but the Zone itself its called "Removed From Play Zone".

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Both GHawk and Spyross "2" are now members of my club but first must post and show their work

[Sora]

That is not a different effect (Well, it has a Slight Difference) He just rephrased it. It has a slight difference since the card that you made, cannot be specifically targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, rather than an effect that does not specifically target a card. Makes it alot more balanced. Cards that don't specifically target a card is like Mirror Force.

[Mindscatter]

Or Straight Flush.

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Yeah like that.

[Lexadin]

I think it changed its effect, I know the other Celestials and I can say that they all have the imume (spelling) for a ceartan card.

[OnSlaUghT]

That is not a different effect (Well' date=' it has a Slight Difference) He just rephrased it. It has a slight difference since the card that you made, cannot be specifically targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, rather than an effect that does not specifically target a card. Makes it alot more balanced. Cards that don't specifically target a card is like Mirror Force.

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Exactly, besides, how could I have known that the Celestial monsters are all immune to s/t

[Lexadin]

You couldn't, but it isn't that bad.

[Dark Mousy]

Spots still open! Just make a card!

 

Qualifying Stage to YCM 1 On 1 Championships!

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-176500.html

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

I will vote later

PS: You realize I ain't the owner because this club and the MCM joined to be one. The name is the same, both title posts are here and he created a club called MCM before me before I created mine. So that is why he is the owner and still it has the same club name because my club has more of a post count.

[Deustodo]

That is not a different effect (Well' date=' it has a Slight Difference) He just rephrased it. It has a slight difference since the card that you made, cannot be specifically targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, rather than an effect that does not specifically target a card. Makes it alot more balanced. Cards that don't specifically target a card is like Mirror Force.

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I want it to make Unaffeted by all kind of Spell And Trap Cards. If I had written in that way you would be right.

 

Exactly' date=' besides, how could I have known that the Celestial monsters are all immune to s/t[/quote']

Celestial are immune to at least 1 kind of card (Monster, Trap or Spell).

[Mindscatter]

Yeah, being immune to all would be ridiculous.

[BulletMan]

When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can send 1 card you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Burner Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 500) to either side of the field. This Token can only be used as a Tribute for the Tribute Summon of a "Burner" monster.

 

I'm fairly sure it has 100% good OCG, but if you find an error, okay. But I'm posting this because I'm getting an idea for a new set that helps FIRE. I'm calling them "Burners", and instead of burn, they are like fire and destroy/remove cards, and replaces them with a flame. More to come. But need ideas besides OCG.

 

Thoughts?

[Shadow Zero]

pretty good card. i give it my rare 10/10 rating. good job.

 

p.s. this thread needs to get stickied.

[Dark Mousy]

Spots still open! Just make a card!

 

Qualifying Stage to YCM 1 On 1 Championships!

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-176500.html

 

Chaos Zero, it is stickied.

 

Anyone who has yet to submit their cards, please do.

 

Also, there is still more room for joining.

 

Happy Holidays!

[Shadow Zero]

hm? the one on one champo has begun?

[Dark Mousy]

hm? the one on one champo has begun?

 

It says Challenge is up.