Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 [align=center] I might add to this later... For now... Yeah. And btw: Rising Energy is the concept card for the first one, and Crush Card Virus is the concept card for the second.Third Card is a rework of Lava Golem.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosMuramasa Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I like both of them fairly well, definitely something I haven't seen before. Though, for the second one, wouldn't the last part actually go "...bottom of their Deck. Then, they draw 1 card." I'm not sure if either way is acceptable or if neither of them are wrong, just something I thought of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Umm, I might not be correct but wouldn't the first card be:"When this card is activated, decrease the ATK of all Monsters you control by 1500, Until your End Phase. As long as this card's effect is active, all monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. During your End Phase, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total ATK of monsters they control sent to the Graveyard by battle this turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chaos Pudding Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Umm' date=' I might not be correct but wouldn't the first card be:"When this card is activated, decrease the ATK of all Monsters you control by 1500, Until your End Phase. As long as this card's effect is active, all monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. During your End Phase, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total ATK of monsters they control sent to the Graveyard by battle this turn."[/quote'] No, because the ATK decrease is permanent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 OK, I wasn't sure I just thought that was what he meant.well I believe that both cards are excellent and the OCG is very nice. These cards would make a useful addition to many decks.I applaude your skill Icy, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 The second effect of Witness the Fury might be a bit pointless. Bottomless Curdle is rather weaker than CCV. Pyras Beast is rather easy easy to abuse with Swords of Revealing Light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Bottomless Curdle looks quite impressive to me. Such a killer to Zombie-Type and most Tuner Monsters (which I hate very much).9/10 Pyras Beast is so abusable. I think the direct damage part is too harsh...destroying all cards the controller controls is enough8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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