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Naruto: Legend of the Kyubi Shards (chapter 116 added!)


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GOOD.

I'M HOLDING YOU TO THAT SIGGY PROMISE >:3

And the fight was good, though a little short. I dunno why Lyn glowed, but I'm guessing that'll be explained.

And Fuuta vs Zeru should be EPIC SHIZZ.

I think you forgot to make paragraph breaks in editing, stuff is clumped together.

Glad this is back, looking forward to 113.

You skipped a post for editing chapters in btw.

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Realized I skipped a post.

 

I didn't forget the paragraph breaks, fuxin YCM took them away, and I couldn't be arsed to edit xD

 

And the siggy promise shall be fulfilled!! >:33

 

 

Lyn glowed cuz of no special reason

 

I mean, she's the guardian of fire, so unleashing the seal unleashed her inner fire

 

Basically it gave her some form of radience

 

Geddit? =D

 

 

Ah screw it, gonna post new chapter now :3

 

And yes, Fuuta vs. Zeru will be da bomb :3

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Why thank you ;D

 

And yes, I thought so too XDD

 

Kira's was better. Despite her joke sucking, she mimics Takako perfectly :'3

 

 

I definitely didn't see a gaming competition coming, but when the idea struck me it was pure genius

 

And this leaves Daisuke vs. Hayate

 

Which is sure to be EPICNEZZ

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Ah yes, you deciding to NOT do Daisuke vs Ami should have been predictable, but...

Yeah, that's an interesting match-up. Daisuke should win, but he'll have a rough time of it.

And afterwards, that'd be interesting to see him fight Kira.

Inorite? I'm the cliche-breaker, remember? :333

 

Plus, Kira is fighting Daisuke for Ami >:3

 

Unless he loses :3333

 

 

New chaptah added~

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lol, I told him that.

 

And, BTW, I'd have gone with Kira's original plan.

Other than that, I laughed so hard I almost died.

..XDD

 

glad to hear it :3

 

Tho...Kira's original plan? O.o *goes reread*

 

 

@Fuse - ...not really >< But I AM workin on Vongola fic tho

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He was calm if you look at the beginning

 

But being with someone just as calm pushes his buttons :3

 

So he loses his cool

 

 

And it basically makes the water inside his body subject to being controlled by Daisuke himself. And it can only be with a sudden shock like Water Palm, since it sends a shockwave through the body.

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