Fusion X. Denver Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Ah yeah, you're behind.So if you're lagging this much with a fic, how long does it take you to read a book chapter :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Book chapters are not as long as yours... And even then, I read books slowly, but I have more time to read if they are IRL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Well, that's certainly an interesting development you've got going on there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 DL, my book chapters are not as long, pretty sure they're shorter >__> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renaldy Widanto Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Nice story.. I can't read all your story.. Because it's too long.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 @Fusion - I took FOREVER to finsih percy Jackson. I just procrastinate WAY too much when reading. @DMG - Sure is. <3 @Renaldy - Lol, it is quite long, isn't it? Also, new chapter is more than halfway done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 New chapter added. Next chapter around 40% done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 You and Cortez, releasing your chapters earlier and earlier <3That'll be cool to see Jin vs Kai, never thought of that match-up, but still sounds exciting. Though Jin using genjutsu is a surprise, he seemed like he only had a Naruto/Sakura fighting style, but good to see he's set himself apart.One question, you had Hikaru telling Ami something, was that supposed to be Hayate, or did Hikaru suddenly emerge on the scene? If it was the latter, there wasn't really a transition..And Kyo using emerald powers is...unexpected actually.I guess "Chaos Emeralds", but...we'll see how that works out.Good to hear the next chapter's progressing well :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 I...meant Hayate. Thanks for catching that. Jin rarely uses genjutsu, but he will, in certain times. And yes, Kyo uses emerald powers. What was your guess as to how he fought? Speed? xD And next chapter might be finished soon, because it's transition, but it's...easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Finished soon? Sweet.I thought he would use something with speed..or with HB.But then I remembered you never really got into that.I guess it fits. Something out of left field isn't always bad, and it can lead to something unexpectedly cool.Like with me and my wind powers >> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Oh, it'll definitely lead to something cool. :3 And notice Fuuta never uses water jutsu when he clearly demonstrated he could in chapter 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Wait...he used Water jutsu?I thought he just..faded into the water when he escaped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Wait... did Ryujo strap that guy to the tree? Or was it really his own team who'd done that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 @Fusion - Well unless he has water affinity, I dun see how he could dissapear into the water @_@ @DMG - His own team :3 Shisuke is such a badass, he ties the weaklings up as bait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 New chapter added. The length is nice, because I got too into the Jin vs. Kai fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 You know, I've always wondered that myself. Why the Kuchiku were gathering the shards.So wait, is Fuuta the leader now that Aketsu and Madara are out of the picture? Don't think it was ever officially decided..Good chapter, though I expected more from Kai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 You'll find out ;3 And it was never decided, officialy, but I mean, it makes sense. He was the 3rd member to join, and he is the most intelligent, and capable (probably) Also, you expected him to do more than MATCH A HOKAGE in combat? >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Not what I meant, I meant we didn't get to see him do anything besides defending himself with fire .__. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Oh. Well I kinda...didn't want to dwell too much on their match. And he had done damage to Jin previous to the cut-to-scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Well, we'll see how things progress in the actual tournament, won't we? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Mhmm. I'll try to get to workin on the new chapter today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Chapter 7 added. Enjoy~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 ... Takako is gonna have to start carrying a gourd of sand. If he had that, he might have stood a chance. I still don't like Hikaru too much, though. You were wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Since my last post and read it was good. Still is, but I want to know why I'm out of the damn tournament and going to see a family? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 See DL, I told you it was OOC for Ninjew to bail on the tournament.When I read the chapter, I thought Hikaru was gonna win so you'd troll El for not reading KS recently xDBut yeah, Takako needs to win this. It sucks that Hikaru was bullied in his childhood, but Takako has to advance >:V Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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