L.L. Set - Added L.L. Spear Girl - 3/??

[Dragon™]

[align=center]This is my new set "Lost Land Warriors", or "L.L.", reffering to "D.D." monsters. I love RFP so much I will make a Set about it. I will update this thread each day. All the L.L. monsters are destroyed each turn unless you remove from play a monster on your side of the field. Also Jazin updated his archive with over 100 mega epic images, so these images will be awesome! Check his archive out!

 

[spoiler=L.L. Brother Reka]

Lore-

You can only Normal Summon this card if you have exactly 5 removed from play cards. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if you control another "L.L." monster. This card can attack your opponent directly, but its ATK is treated as 400. Each time this card attacks directly, you must remove from play a monster card on your side of the field.

 

 

[spoiler=L.L. Brother Sueri]

Lore-

You can remove from play this card to Special Summon 1 "L.L." monster from your Deck. If you do, you can add this card to the top of your Deck during your next Main Phase 1. Once per turn, you can roll a six-sided Die. Add a removed from play monster with the same Level as the result to the top of your Deck. Each turn, during your Main Phase 1, you must remove from play 1 monster on your side of the field or this card is destroyed.

 

 

[spoiler=L.L. Spear Girl]

Lore-

You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing from play 1 Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monster in your hand. Once per turn, you can flip a Coin. If the result is Heads, add 1 "L.L." monster from your Deck to your hand. If the result is Tails, destroy this card. This card gains 200 ATK if you draw an "L.L." monster. Each turn, you must remove from play a monster on your side of the field or this card is destroyed.

 

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[TTR~]

looks interesting but the card gave me a power rangers vibe

[Dragon™]

Lol, yeah, POWER RANGERS SPD FORCE POWER RANGERS TO THE RESCUE! <<

 

Thanks for commenting ^.^

[Jazin Kay]

No, this is Kamen Rider.

 

Which one, I don't know.

[byak]

I don't see how that's going to rule the meta.

[Dragon™]

One card isn't -.-

 

The set will, and RFP alltogether. Now STFU, and give me some useful critisicm.

 

 

No' date=' this is Kamen Rider.

 

Which one, I don't know.

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Does it matter if it's Kamen Rider? Is it still a realistic card?

 

Also, please do not post unless you will rate or give contructive critisicm.

[ragnarok1945]

first sentence should be "This card can only be Normal Summoned if you have exactly 5 monsters in your removed from play pile"

 

nice drawback though, so if you control no other monsters your opponent only takes 400 damage and you lose the monster itself

 

so I'll give this 9.4/10

[Jazin Kay]

One card isn't -.-

 

The set will' date=' and RFP alltogether. Now STFU, and give me some useful critisicm.

 

 

No, this is Kamen Rider.

 

Which one, I don't know.

 

Does it matter if it's Kamen Rider? Is it still a realistic card?

 

Also, please do not post unless you will rate or give contructive critisicm.

 

It'd be Pop Culture, so no.

[wero-vasto]

The image is Pop Culture... not the Card...

 

 

OT:

 

Meh... I'll wait to see more cards =/ one just... don't explain the whole set <_<

 

=)

[Dragon™]

Thanks to all. BTW Jazin the latest card is still Kamen Rider I hope you don't mind because I don't really care if it's PC image or not, k?

 

Added L.L. Brother Sueri!

[wero-vasto]

I have no problems with the new cards....

but want to see more =]

 

BTW the pics look like the "Masked Hero" Archtype xD

[jayjack]

first sentence should be "This card can only be Normal Summoned if you have exactly 5 monsters in your removed from play pile.

No, he's got the correct ocg. There's no removed from play pile.

Should be six-sided die.

Can't say its bad. The first one is really UD though (Considering summoning req.)o.o

8/10

[Dragon™]

Thank's a lot jayjack ^.^

 

Added L.L. Spear Girl - She's a hawt killer!

[Darj]

Well, with what you got, the set is awful. Yeah, you may think "oh, Sueri and the Spear Girl let me get monsters easily, which I will then Summon and during my End Phase I will tribute them to maintain my L.L in the field", But what if that monster is not successfully summoned? Your L.L. on the field will be destroyed at the End Phase, leaving you open to direct attacks.

 

In other words, your require a lot of monsters on the field to maintain all your L.L. Even controlling 2 of them would mean that you should summon 2 monsters every turn for fulfilling their costs. If you want your L.L. to work, I suggest creating L.L. cards that swarm your field, or why not Tokens? However, to balance things out, those swarming monsters should have a drawback, such as Low ATK, or perhaps the inability of attacking, etc.

 

Or another option would be that, given their maintenance costs, you give them overpowered effects, so removing the monster from the field as a cost would be worth it.

[jack781217]

Looks good at the first glance. What I have noticed so far is that L.L. Brother Sueri should be of a lower Level and stat, which seems to fit its effects. Other cards seem to be in good shapes.

 

9/10

[Dragon™]

Well' date=' with what you got, the set is awful. Yeah, you may think "oh, Sueri and the Spear Girl let me get monsters easily, which I will then Summon and during my End Phase I will tribute them to maintain my L.L in the field", But what if that monster is not successfully summoned? Your L.L. on the field will be destroyed at the End Phase, leaving you open to direct attacks.

 

In other words, your require a lot of monsters on the field to maintain all your L.L. Even controlling 2 of them would mean that you should summon 2 monsters every turn for fulfilling their costs. If you want your L.L. to work, I suggest creating L.L. cards that swarm your field, or why not Tokens? However, to balance things out, those swarming monsters should have a drawback, such as Low ATK, or perhaps the inability of attacking, etc.

 

Or another option would be that, given their maintenance costs, you give them overpowered effects, so removing the monster from the field as a cost would be worth it.

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As a matter of fact, I was planning to make swarming Tokens with this Set. Great job for noticing it. It won't be so awful when I get my swarm out, and I will make some stupid Spell that increases monster-on-field number limits. Thank you, Frex.

 

And thanks a lot jack. To both, I appreciate your concern.

[byak]

I still don't see how these will rule the meta.

They kill your hand and field, require luck, and slow down your deck. >____>

The last one you have, is a -2 2300 beater that has a 50 percent chance of becoming a -1 or -3.

 

Also, swarming tokens won't work.

[Dragon™]

Of course swarming will work >.>

 

But since you said that.... I will make the following card w/out the RFP each turn thing, and make it more LP based. So anyway, you made me think. Strangely, thanks.

[byak]

Of course swarming will work >.>

 

But since you said that.... I will make the following card w/out the RFP each turn thing' date=' and make it more LP based. So anyway, you made me think. Strangely, thanks.

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Removing a monster is a maintenance cost. When Tokens are removed from the field, they are removed from the game (not rfp). Since you can't remove tokens from play, you can't use them as costs, iirc. :S

[Darj]

I think Tokens can be removed from play, they just change their destination when they do it. If you couldn't remove them from play, they would be immune to "Dimensional Prison" or to the effect of Caius.

 

Wrath, I was thinking in another maintenance costs for your L.L. and I got this idea: Change the cost so the monster requires the removal of a monster in your Graveyard, not the field. That will make them easier to use and you could make L.L. versions of "Snake Rain" to fill your Graveyard with material quickly, or make cards that return to the Graveyard when they are removed from play so you can use them as a recyclable material.

[byak]

I think Tokens can be removed from play' date=' they just change their destination when they do it. If you couldn't remove them from play, they would be immune to "Dimensional Prison" or to the effect of Caius.

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Those aren't costs, though. :S

[Darj]

That's a good point. The cost wouldn't be fulfilled because the Token is never removed from play. I guess Wrath would have to stick with monster swarm, or take the idea I mentioned before.

[wero-vasto]

Here is the problem.... where are you going with this set?

 

A Deck with this card would kill you =/

Take in mind the suggestions of Frex =/ if not this Set will be harmful <_<

[jayjack]

For spear girl;

Coin = coin

When you draw an l.l. monster, you're gonna have to show it to your opponent for that 200 atk boost, so it makes it a crappy effect since your opponent will know your hand and the only benefit is 200 atk.

The last effect breaks the ice from balanced to UD. It's effect isn't good enough to have a such a harsh condition for staying on the field.

7.8/10 for that card.

[Jazin Kay]

Coin is not capitalized.