Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 I have a 2nd review: Aissa the Enticing One by Cyber_CommanderThis cards effect is simple, but good. I'll do the crash course in it. When it battles an opponent's monster, you may actually want to keep the monster alive. If the opponent's monster is still alive, you get to take contol of it. Some awsome combos with this are Wobaku and other things that make you take no damage. That is about it =/ Yeah, Like I said, it's going to be small, sry, but i'm having a hard few days, and Cyber_Commander would know... Ratings:Name: 6/10 It's ok, but, well, it can be alot better, concidering this is Cyber_Commander (Yes Cyber, this is the better name XD) Picture: 9/10 Very good XD Effect: 7/10 It is very plain for Cyber_Commander, but still very nice. Grammar: 7/10 Why is it that when I say it outloud, it just sounds wrong? =/ Star Sence: 7 : 9/10 Very good ^_^ Rarity Sence: Rare : 4/10 Not exactly a great choice =/(Cyer, I had alot of choices, but I try not to review special rareity cards, it makes it a bit wierder for me =/) Overall: 42/60 or 7/10 Grade: C- To me,this card would be LIMITED Good card Cyber_Commander ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 I have a 2nd review: Aissa the Enticing One by Cyber_CommanderThis cards effect is simple, but good. I'll do the crash course in it. When it battles an opponent's monster, you may actually want to keep the monster alive. If the opponent's monster is still alive, you get to take contol of it. Some awsome combos with this are Wobaku and other things that make you take no damage. That is about it =/ Yeah, Like I said, it's going to be small, sry, but i'm having a hard few days, and Cyber_Commander would know... Ratings:Name: 6/10 It's ok, but, well, it can be alot better, concidering this is Cyber_Commander (Yes Cyber, this is the better name XD) Picture: 9/10 Very good XD Effect: 7/10 It is very plain for Cyber_Commander, but still very nice. Grammar: 7/10 Why is it that when I say it outloud, it just sounds wrong? =/ Star Sence: 7 : 9/10 Very good ^_^ Rarity Sence: Rare : 4/10 Not exactly a great choice =/(Cyer, I had alot of choices, but I try not to review special rareity cards, it makes it a bit wierder for me =/) Overall: 42/60 or 7/10 Grade: C- To me,this card would be LIMITED Good card Cyber_Commander ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Thanks for the review ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Thanks for the review ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 No prob ^_^BTW, good review Cyber_Commander ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 No prob ^_^BTW, good review Cyber_Commander ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Hehee. Thanks, Yankee. And thanks for the "crash course." The enticing one? Really? O.O I posted the Embodiment of Loveliness. And yes, the grammar was kinda icky.... Also, how come you didn't use the Holo Image? And the Rarity is just Rare-I hate Ultimate Rares...Gold is not my color. But thanks anyways, I shall improve!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Hehee. Thanks, Yankee. And thanks for the "crash course." The enticing one? Really? O.O I posted the Embodiment of Loveliness. And yes, the grammar was kinda icky.... Also, how come you didn't use the Holo Image? And the Rarity is just Rare-I hate Ultimate Rares...Gold is not my color. But thanks anyways, I shall improve!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 lol, I know you will, you always do, good card Cyber ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 lol, I know you will, you always do, good card Cyber ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 [align=center]Hello everyone. I'm Glasstin10. I'm a scout for this thread and I would like to review' date=' under the permission of Yankeefan, one of his own cards. [img']http://i6.tinypic.com/8e7q68y.jpg[/img] Here's my review : The picture : Yankee did an incredible job with this picture, and this is probably the highlight of this card. Everything is about perfect in this picture except for one thing. On the left hand side of the picture, you can see some slight writing which looks like it says, phoenix. When choosing pictures for your cards, be sure to edit all words and other extras, to make the picture look like a real yugioh card, to obtain a perfect one. Picture Rating : 8.9 / 10 The Effect : He did an incredible job with this. Some corrections are to be made though : 1st Sentence : Could be reworded ; When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove this card from play.2nd Sentence : A tiny correction ; During the End Phase of a turn that this card was removed from play by it's own effect, Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field.3rd Sentence : Tiny Correction ; During each of his'her Standby Phase, the controller must pay 500 Life Points. - ( I'm not sure if this is right, but I tried... :/ )4th Sentence : I can't spot any mistakes, so good job with this sentence! :) Effect Rating : 8.5 / 10 Originality : Except for the corrections that I have stated, this card is pretty much perfect. One suggestion is that, this card looks more of a level 6 monster, not a level 4 monster. I know you have your reasons, but this is just a suggestion. This card is very original and unique, so good job! Originality rating : 9.5 / 10 Overall Rating : 8.97 / 10 Other Comments : Excellent job. I hope you make more! Congrats on getting one of your cards reviewed! Your prize : One Rep! :D[/align] "When this card is destroyed, it is removed from play. During the End Phase of the turn that this card was removed from play by its own effect, it is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card must pay 500 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points." Just thought I'd say =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 [align=center]Hello everyone. I'm Glasstin10. I'm a scout for this thread and I would like to review' date=' under the permission of Yankeefan, one of his own cards. [img']http://i6.tinypic.com/8e7q68y.jpg[/img] Here's my review : The picture : Yankee did an incredible job with this picture, and this is probably the highlight of this card. Everything is about perfect in this picture except for one thing. On the left hand side of the picture, you can see some slight writing which looks like it says, phoenix. When choosing pictures for your cards, be sure to edit all words and other extras, to make the picture look like a real yugioh card, to obtain a perfect one. Picture Rating : 8.9 / 10 The Effect : He did an incredible job with this. Some corrections are to be made though : 1st Sentence : Could be reworded ; When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove this card from play.2nd Sentence : A tiny correction ; During the End Phase of a turn that this card was removed from play by it's own effect, Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field.3rd Sentence : Tiny Correction ; During each of his'her Standby Phase, the controller must pay 500 Life Points. - ( I'm not sure if this is right, but I tried... :/ )4th Sentence : I can't spot any mistakes, so good job with this sentence! :) Effect Rating : 8.5 / 10 Originality : Except for the corrections that I have stated, this card is pretty much perfect. One suggestion is that, this card looks more of a level 6 monster, not a level 4 monster. I know you have your reasons, but this is just a suggestion. This card is very original and unique, so good job! Originality rating : 9.5 / 10 Overall Rating : 8.97 / 10 Other Comments : Excellent job. I hope you make more! Congrats on getting one of your cards reviewed! Your prize : One Rep! :D[/align] "When this card is destroyed, it is removed from play. During the End Phase of the turn that this card was removed from play by its own effect, it is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card must pay 500 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points." Just thought I'd say =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Um, ok, Bhim, thanks, i'll fix that later, i'm gonna go soon =/Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Um, ok, Bhim, thanks, i'll fix that later, i'm gonna go soon =/Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 PLEASE rate this card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 PLEASE rate this card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lurker77 Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Do you review Pop Cultre cards, or only realistic ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 He only does realistic ones...Pop Culture is awful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 lol, yeah, sorry man, but I only think that realistic cards are able to be reviewed, due to the fact that they are better, meaning my name of the thrad, card of the day =/Hope to see you make some realistic cards however, you will be on here ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 He only does realistic ones...Pop Culture is awful... Hey I have some cards in pop culture that got great ratings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 We mean overall. More often than not, bad card are made there, and people that are bad at ratings go there =/ But still, I only do realistic =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Sry, i'm back on this, I just didn't have a ton of time to review cards =/ now I do ^_^Sry if I made people mad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vulture Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Can you review this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 This is what was supposed to be Thursday's review: Spell Chapter 9 - Prequel to the End by Kei-KunThis card effect is very good, but goes in alot of different directions. It's tough to keep track. First of all, there is only 1 way to summon it, by the "Lost Chapter", another card of the set. Then, this is the point that I get confused. It says you can only activate it's effect if you have summoned "Spell Chapter 8 - Evoked Chaos" before in the duel. Ok, then it goeson to say when it is treated as a Spell card by the effecs of "Tome the Sealed Magik", you get to Special Summon The 1th spell guy. So, as you can see, it can get a bit confusing, and it is random, but cool. Name: 8/10 Nice name ^_^Picture: 10/10 I simply adore this pictureEffect: 4/10 If you look at it, when you summon it, it is pointless, unless you have the others, and it's increadibly tough to play and do.Grammar: 6/10 I belive that parts of the effect can be worded differenly =/star Sence: 9: 8/10 I guess it works, but I know it's only 9 because of it's name.Rarity Sence: Ultra/Ultimate: Ultra: 9/10 Ultimate: 6/10 I think it is good if it is ultra, but I can't tell. The rarity on yCM doesent show alot of difference =/Overall: 45/60* or 7.5/10** means with it being Ultra RareGrade: C Good card Kei-Kun, I just wish the effect made more sence, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 This is what was supposed to be Thursday's review: Spell Chapter 9 - Prequel to the End by Kei-KunThis card effect is very good' date=' but goes in alot of different directions. It's tough to keep track. First of all, there is only 1 way to summon it, by the "Lost Chapter", another card of the set. Then, this is the point that I get confused. It says you can only activate it's effect if you have summoned "Spell Chapter 8 - Evoked Chaos" before in the duel. Ok, then it goeson to say when it is treated as a Spell card by the effecs of "Tome the Sealed Magik", you get to Special Summon The 1th spell guy. So, as you can see, it can get a bit confusing, and it is random, but cool. Name: 8/10 Nice name ^_^Picture: 10/10 I simply adore this pictureEffect: 4/10 If you look at it, when you summon it, it is pointless, unless you have the others, and it's increadibly tough to play and do.Grammar: 6/10 I belive that parts of the effect can be worded differenly =/star Sence: 9: 8/10 I guess it works, but I know it's only 9 because of it's name.Rarity Sence: Ultra/Ultimate: Ultra: 9/10 Ultimate: 6/10 I think it is good if it is ultra, but I can't tell. The rarity on yCM doesent show alot of difference =/Overall: 45/60* or 7.5/10** means with it being Ultra RareGrade: [b']C[/b] Good card Kei-Kun, I just wish the effect made more sence, lol Yay! One of my cards got reviewed! Thanks alot! ^o^ Thanks for pointing out that error for me. I just noticed that I had 2 of the sentences in reverse, so it's why it kinda confusing ^^; As for pulling it out, yes it is hard, but that's because Chapter 10's effect is basically a game ender if you look at it. So, I had to make it hard to summon and still keep the theme to the set. Either way, I am glad one of my cards got up here. Maybe another will and I'll get a higher score. I am now off to fix this card and work on some more ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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