Deustodo Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 The person that said it is necessary to make an Effect Monster Card to make a good card is wrong. Now I ask you, what is wrong with this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 nothing is wrong about this card. it's a very good vanilla. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Thanks for your comment, Giovanny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I agree, there's nothing wrong when you make a good vanilla :). Sometimes, one sentence can say a lot more than a 6 sentence boring effect. Anyways, I like the card :) 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 It's name should be blank. The description said he had no name! That's what's wrong! HA! I can haz cookie? ^_^ (Nice card by the way, it does look almost professional) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Yes, he HAD no name, now he has. So no cookie for you. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Le Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 well..there is no he had..its just that that long ago a man with no name, bonito.. so queen was right ^^ if you'd made a "."..instead of a "," you'd be right..muahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 He is still not getting cookies. It says a long ago, meaning now he has a name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 But the lore says that he was named like that long ago, too but he had no name long ago.well..now only i deserve a cookie xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Yes, he had no nome, long time ago, now he has. Lets cut with this discussion. It is a perfect card, period. Now have a cookie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 cookies are great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 As a vanilla expert I have to say that it is simply an average vanilla. Your lore needs more work, it doesnt create enugh of an enigmatic image at first to contrast with his real name. You also use the wrond form of the dative, it should read "to those who deserve it" HOWEVER I am on your side, I love vanillas, I love the art of creating a good one, i think in some cases they are harder to make than effects. Vanillas are always underrated and dismissed keep making a name for them, for they are the backbone of YGO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 As a vanilla expert I have to say that it is simply an average vanilla. Your lore needs more work' date=' it doesnt create enugh of an enigmatic image at first to contrast with his real name. You also use the wrond form of the dative, it should read "to those who deserve it" HOWEVER I am on your side, I love vanillas, I love the art of creating a good one, i think in some cases they are harder to make than effects. Vanillas are always underrated and dismissed keep making a name for them, for they are the backbone of YGO.[/quote'] that from somebody who makes rare vanillas...O.o his card is good, man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Long ago what? Long ago a man with no name.. what? then, without explaining, it skips from past to present. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 It is because From past to present is so FTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosuke Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Good card .. for be a vanilla, no? 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Really, Rosuke, what is missing on the card for you to take 3 points of the rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 It is because From past to present is so FTW. What a great explanation.:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Your explanation for God of War is great as well, your point? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 It is because From past to present is so FTW. What a great explanation.:? I understand what the card maker was trying to do with the past equalling no name and the present equalling a name and a purpose, however the way he goes about is is quite poor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Well, excuse me for having a short text, but if you have a better one to add, I will go and add it, it is better to point out the errors than just talking about them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 This is what I think the card authour was trying to say: "Long ago; a man with no name wandered aimlessly from town to town searching for a purpose. From the dust of his past, emerges the pristine Bonito Carvalho, bringing swift and brutal justice upon those who deserve it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 @duestodo: Well excuse me if you're starting to piss me off. whatever I say you have somekind of annoying way to answer me, tryin' to get on my nerves or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 This is what I think the card authour was trying to say: "Long ago; a man with no name wandered aimlessly from town to town searching for a purpose. From the dust of his past' date=' emerges the pristine Bonito Carvalho, bringing swift and brutal justice upon those who deserve it."[/quote']Now, Thanks to you, I edited it. Thank you for you help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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