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[Yugioh DQ] Elemental Priestess Gwen [edited EARTH]

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It's been a while since I last posted here....before YCM turned into a Facebook....

 

I hope u like this card!

 

Elemental Priestess Gwen wo Synchro Shoukan!

 

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[spoiler=Effect]1 Tuner + 2 non-Tuner monsters

Depending on the Attributes of the non-Tuner monsters you used as Synchro Material Monsters for the Synchro Summon of this card, this card gains the following effects when this card destroys a monster in battle and sends it to Graveyard.

●FIRE: Inflict damages to your opponent equals to the destroyed monster's Level X300.

●WIND : Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

●WATER: Your opponent randomly sends 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard.

●EARTH: This card inflicts piercing damage.

●LIGHT: Draw 1 card.

●DARK: Remove from play 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard.

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:o A chizu card. Must give very detailed rate ;D.

 

A Level 10? Lets see, Gale + Bora + Kalut? Not good in Blackwings. Maybe, Plaguespreader + Zombie Master + Zombie Master? Zombies looks good. Lightsworns? Plaguespreader + Lyla + Lyla? Lightsworns not as good. PlantSworns? Spore + Lumina + Ryko + Lyla? Seems ok. Lets try this. Infernity Beetle, Infernity Archfiend, Infernity Archfiend. I think that would be easier.

 

So, TCG wise, this card isn't as playable at the Level 10, as you can see how I demonstrated. The only really decks that it can work in are Zombies and Infernities. Problem is, Zombies aren't as good this format and everybody and their mother is running anti-Infernity cards. I can be able to give this a different rate in your Element Priestess archetype (if there is one) if I can have the link. But, now lets go one with the rest of the card.

 

Alright, lets go through every effect on this card. Imo, the way you get the effects is very abusable at times. You could be able to fit 2 or 3 different attributes in 1 Synchro Summon, bu on a regular basis, you only get 1 for the examples I posted above.

 

FIRE: Ok just a little error to start of, an OCG error. Inflict damages to your opponent Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's Level x300. Overall, in the TCG, this helps with the FIRE monsters main deck type, Burn. Tbh, this thing card run over quite a bit, including the Level 9 Mist Wurm. Maybe tone in down to 200, for less raep.

 

WIND: Dust Tornado on legs <3. Puts Launcher, Mirror Force and such of place, without having Starlight Road giving you a little surprise :D.

 

WATER: I am not liking this that much. Against most decks this format, they don't care if monsters go to the Graveyard. X-Sabers just say Faultroll, Infernities laugh at you helplessly. it would be good if you got a Spell or Trap, but not liking anyways :/.

 

EARTH: Well, I don't think I have much else to say to this as I already explained it in the WATER effect. I only see this being usefull in a Macro Cosmos deck.

 

LIGHT: Woohoo for random +1!

 

DARK: D.D Crow on bigger legs. I am liking this a lot. Would be ncie to combine with the WATER or EARTH effects, so they are not entirely bad ;D.

 

I hope you enjoyed my opinions on your cards.

 

-LeoMence Rate:

8.5/10

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:o A chizu card. Must give very detailed rate ;D.

 

A Level 10? Lets see, Gale + Bora + Kalut? Not good in Blackwings. Maybe, Plaguespreader + Zombie Master + Zombie Master? Zombies looks good. Lightsworns? Plaguespreader + Lyla + Lyla? Lightsworns not as good. PlantSworns? Spore + Lumina + Ryko + Lyla? Seems ok. Lets try this. Infernity Beetle, Infernity Archfiend, Infernity Archfiend. I think that would be easier.

 

So, TCG wise, this card isn't as playable at the Level 10, as you can see how I demonstrated. The only really decks that it can work in are Zombies and Infernities. Problem is, Zombies aren't as good this format and everybody and their mother is running anti-Infernity cards. I can be able to give this a different rate in your Element Priestess archetype (if there is one) if I can have the link. But, now lets go one with the rest of the card.

 

Alright, lets go through every effect on this card. Imo, the way you get the effects is very abusable at times. You could be able to fit 2 or 3 different attributes in 1 Synchro Summon, bu on a regular basis, you only get 1 for the examples I posted above.

 

FIRE: Ok just a little error to start of, an OCG error. Inflict damages to your opponent Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's Level x300. Overall, in the TCG, this helps with the FIRE monsters main deck type, Burn. Tbh, this thing card run over quite a bit, including the Level 9 Mist Wurm. Maybe tone in down to 200, for less raep.

 

WIND: Dust Tornado on legs <3. Puts Launcher, Mirror Force and such of place, without having Starlight Road giving you a little surprise :D.

 

WATER: I am not liking this that much. Against most decks this format, they don't care if monsters go to the Graveyard. X-Sabers just say Faultroll, Infernities laugh at you helplessly. it would be good if you got a Spell or Trap, but not liking anyways :/.

 

EARTH: Well, I don't think I have much else to say to this as I already explained it in the WATER effect. I only see this being usefull in a Macro Cosmos deck.

 

LIGHT: Woohoo for random +1!

 

DARK: D.D Crow on bigger legs. I am liking this a lot. Would be ncie to combine with the WATER or EARTH effects, so they are not entirely bad ;D.

 

I hope you enjoyed my opinions on your cards.

 

-LeoMence Rate:

8.5/10

 

 

Thank you for the long and accurate comment..I really needed that!! Now I can modify it somehow!

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Awesome, a card that you can use with Elemental Mistress Doriado + 1 DARK something DARK to gain all effects.

 

I think all effects are good (not really overpowered), except for the EARTH one. That one's actually underpowered.

According to the way of the Graveyard playstyle of most Decks used nowadays. Giving them less Deck and more Graveyard is actually helping them. The only exception is when the Deck loss of your opponent is extreme, and it becomes risky for them to thin it any further (Deckout). Of course, there is a chance that you hit something they wanted to draw and can't take back, like Heavy Storm, but its more likeyly that they will be benefited if not for what they mill, then for making the Deck smaller and faster.

 

Anyways, card itself is very fun to play xD

 

Rutial Summon Doriado> Normal Summon Junk Synchron> Special Summon Level 2 monster with Junk's effect> Special Summon Quibolt> Synchro Summon!!! > just for the lolz, Special Summon Koitsu with Limit Reverse and play Creature Swap> ATTACK!!!

 

During that time you will:

-Draw 1 card

-Discard 1 card from your opponent's hand

-Destroy 1 S/T

-Remove from play 1 monster from their Grave

-Inflict 3000 Battle Damage + 3000 Effect Damage = 6000 total xD

-Send 1 card from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard .______.

 

^Doing all that might be a little to hard but I would do it for fun anyways :D

 

Good stuff ;) I don't like ratings but I would give a 9.9/10 :)

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Overall Pros: Oh, this is very interesting. This is one helluva boost for little-used Attributes, the strategies you can put together with this... oh, hell yes.

Overall Cons: How the hell did you make this?! It's hideous, especially compared to the YCM here! And the grammar, capitalization especially, is highly lacking and obviously not proofread...

 

Concept: 95% - Oh god the STRATEGY. YES. It's much, much better at boosting little-used Attributes than anything Konami's come out with.

OCG: 45% - not unreadable, but obviously not proofread. Points deducted for hideous third-party composition.

Balancing: 55% - the effort at balancing is obvious with its level, but as it is, its stats are far too high. Cut both by ~1000 and the balance will be just fine.

Overall: 65% - an epic, but unrefined card. If a bit more effort had gone into proofreading, and the balancing had worked out better, this card would have been excellent. That's still fixable, so hop to it and you'll have the honor of having made a truly amazing card.

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Overall Pros: Oh, this is very interesting. This is one helluva boost for little-used Attributes, the strategies you can put together with this... oh, hell yes.

Overall Cons: How the hell did you make this?! It's hideous, especially compared to the YCM here! And the grammar, capitalization especially, is highly lacking and obviously not proofread...

 

Concept: 95% - Oh god the STRATEGY. YES. It's much, much better at boosting little-used Attributes than anything Konami's come out with.

OCG: 45% - not unreadable, but obviously not proofread. Points deducted for hideous third-party composition.

Balancing: 55% - the effort at balancing is obvious with its level, but as it is, its stats are far too high. Cut both by ~1000 and the balance will be just fine.

Overall: 65% - an epic, but unrefined card. If a bit more effort had gone into proofreading, and the balancing had worked out better, this card would have been excellent. That's still fixable, so hop to it and you'll have the honor of having made a truly amazing card.

 

 

Thanks for the overall rating....And not to mention the comments you gave me.

 

I'm going to modify this a bit later....... Expect the modify version of this card soon~~!!

 

I'll do my best to make great cards to satisfy you all!!!

 

 

@Sleepy

I have another way to make Gwen gain all the effects at once!

 

1st- Ritual Summon Doriado (discards Trap Reactor or any Level 4 Dark monster)

2nd- Normal Summon Black Bomber

3rd - By Black Bomber effect, Special Summon Trap Reactor

4th Synchro Summon!!! ( Level 3 Black Bomber, Level 3 E.M. Doriado, Level 4 Trap Reactor)

 

Tadaa~~!!! Gwen has all effects mentioned!!!

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Looks better. I still think its a great card :D

sorry I would have answered sooner but took me long enough to see how to check my previews comments (the page was,,,, weird the first day of the update of YCM)

 

Piercing looks a lot better than 1 card from Deck. Its short and understandable so, I wish Yugioh cards really made it easier by just writing "pierce". Although it would remind me of "haste" "flying" and all those terms in Magic.

 

I like how its a 3200 ATK Synchro that can be used anywhere and will gain at the very least of the its effects. It not hard to make it gain up to 3 effects in fact.

Pure Awesomeness lol.

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Its a good card VERY nice pic but il give you a few pointers in the right direction.

1stly post the effect or lore under the card so people can read it if the writing on the card is small

 

2ndly Damages should be damasge on the 1st effect (the fire one).

 

3rdly Water effect: selects one card in there hand and sends it to the graveyard.

 

Lastly I don't know if this is a american term but peircing damage is Does battle damage to defence position monsters.

 

Don't get me wrong i think the card rocks and the idea is fantastic 8.5/10 :)

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Its a good card VERY nice pic but il give you a few pointers in the right direction.

1stly post the effect or lore under the card so people can read it if the writing on the card is small

Its already there, just click in the spoiler under the card, it says "effect"

 

2ndly Damages should be damasge on the 1st effect (the fire one).

damage. Battle Damage. Effect Damage. <its capitalized or not depending on which one it is.

 

3rdly Water effect: selects 1 card in their hand and sends it to the Graveyard.

fixed* intention is what matters ;)

 

Lastly I don't know if this is a american term but peircing damage is Does battle damage to defence position monsters.

Piercing = When this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

Don't get me wrong i think the card rocks and the idea is fantastic 8.5/10 :)

 

I don't intend to be mean, just pulished it a little ^-^"

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