Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 [img]http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i465/DeathlyFiend/ZeratheForgottenTorturer-7.jpg?t=1302314815[/img] [center][i]2 Level 4 Fiend or Spellcaster-Type monsters. This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. Equip Spell Cards cannot be equipped to this monster. You cannot increase the ATK or DEF of this monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be the target of any Spell or Trap Cards. On the third End Phase after Summoning this monster, it is returned to your Extra Deck. After it returns to your Extra Deck and Special Summon the Exceed Material Monsters used to Exceed Summon this monster. You cannot Exceed Summon this monster after 3 Standby Phases have passed after this card returns to your Extra Deck.[/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 I actually love this, but imho I think it's way OP'd its attack is too high, maybe if you made it 2000-2200, 2400 at the most!.. (it's a level 4 anyways, even if Exceeds are usually powerful even at low levels ) or if you lost the SSing of the material monsters, since the way it is now this monster has no drawbacks while with effects like that it should. also you could've found a better picture Template: 10/10 Effect: 5/10 Picture: 4/10 Effort: 8/10 overall: 27/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 It has NO drawback? This card can only be on the field for about 2 turns. But if I make it lower, it would really have no use especially for an Exceed Monster. I guess maybe I could had: "After this card has be returned to your Extra Deck, you cannot Exceed Summon until 5 of your Battle Phases have passed." But the meaning of this card is, even strong monsters have no reason for staying. But I also want it to be like the name suggests it to be, when YOU forget something, everything returns to normal. I also guess I could find a better render, maybe Yin will do one! Also, I think if I lower the ATK to 2400 or even lower, it will be UP'd. But thank you anyways for your feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 [quote name='Deathly Fiend Of YMC' timestamp='1302283137' post='5122909'] It has NO drawback? This card can only be on the field for about 2 turns. [/quote] It had no drawback. So what if it's on the field for 2 turns? 2 turns is enough to inflict enough damage to win, especially when most of the Spell or Trap Cards currently ran is most decks actually target. 1 other thing that makes this card broken is that it only requires 2 Level 4 monsters to Exceed Summon. It has 2850 ATK for heavens sake. Essentially, it's the Exceed version of Goyo Guardian, minus the monster stealing effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Okay, I edited it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Returns to Extra Deck -> Immediately re-summon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Would be better if you made it third End Phase imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 No. You have to wait about 5 turns to re-summon it.Edited it to End Phase and 5 turns to resummon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 And now you made it borderline unplayable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Okay, hopefully this time I have balanced it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 hmmm, it's better.. even though you changed the image it still doesn't feel yu-gi-oh-ish, try harder if you want to make a visually appealing card. If you're using such a template you must have some sort of PS knowledge too, so you could edit pictures you find on the net as well. I find most of mine on danbooru, it's a huge anime imageboard. but let's get down to rating again. Template: 10/10 Effect: 6/10 (not OP'd anymore but kinda UP'd now.. 3 level 6 monsters? Wow, that's way too many, too hard to summon...I'd suggest you left it a level 4 and decreased the attack instead of increasing its levels. ) Picture: 5/10 (better but could be even better) Effort: 9/10 (you want to make a better card) so overall 30/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 the picture looks okay (but it doesnt look a fiend) the effect im not sure if its balanced but the card is imune to to everthing (except monster effect i believe) pretty high attack for a lv6 (but its a exceed that requires 3 lv6 of a specific type) now here the kicker (it return to the extra deck after a few short turns) then you cannot exceed summon for a small amount of time so is it balanced ??? its really hard to say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Would this be the final edit??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 okay now this version is more like it (aside from the OCG mistakes but I assume you were just in a hurry) Still, maybe you could lose the SS of the exceed material monsters after sending Zera back to extra deck. almost balanced, 35/40 no idea about usefulness since I have no idea how Exceeds would feel in a duel but by the sound of this card I presume it'd be quite useful, so yeah, a final 35/40 from me if that's your final edit. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 Okay, I said HOPEFULLY, so I will fix the OCG errors this time! And so the image is fine now? Okay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 [center]2 Level 4 Fiend or Spellcaster-Type monsters. This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. No Equip Spell Cards can be equipped to this monstrer. You cannot increase the ATK or DEF of this monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be the [b]target[/b] of any Spell or Trap Cards. On the third End Phase after summoning this monster, it is returned to your Extra Deck. After it returns to your Extra Deck, Special Summon the Exceed Material Monsters used to Exceed Summon this monster. After this card has be returned to your Extra Deck, you cannot Exceed Summon until 3 of your Standby [b]Phases have[/b] passed. There was just a spacing example and the miss-spelling of the word "target"[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Okay, thank you. I was wondering what needed work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Perfectly balanced though it seems like you are able to bump this guys' ATK to 2450. Nice card, very good effects, and decent drawback to replaying it. I like it. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Love this card Synchro fodder anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Exceeds can't be used for Synchros. They have Ranks, not levels. The spawns it leaves afterwards, however, offer a welcoming hug to almost any level 8 Synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Pretty good. I think it would make a good card. A few OCG fixes, but I can fix them for you, how YOU want the card to be: [b] The Exceed Material monsters for this card can be either 2 Fiend-type monsters or 2 Spellcasdter-type monsters. [/b]This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. Equip Spell Cards can[b]not[/b] be equipped to this monstrer. You cannot increase the ATK or DEF of this monster. This card cannot be [b]tar[/b][b]geted[/b] [b]by[/b] any Spell or Trap Cards. On the third End Phase after [b]S[/b]ummoning this monster, it is returned to your Extra Deck [b]and[/b] Special Summon the Exceed Material Monsters used to Exceed Summon this monster. [b]You cannot Exceed Summon after 3 Standby Phases had passed after this card returns to the Extra Deck. [/b]But still, nice idea and pic![img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Ah, thank you for your fixes, but have you seen Exceed Monsters? "2 Level (NUMBER) Monsters" But thank you for the other OCG fixes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Your welcome Oh ,I almost forgot. I am posting a new set of Neo monsters: can I add you as a friend so you can see them? And so that we can keep in touch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 You do not need to add me as a friend for just that reason, I am open to anyone being my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Cool. I will add you. Do you think making a deck of different neos is a good idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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