Sander Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [Spoiler=Image too large][center][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/fc60jl.png[/IMG][/center][/Spoiler] [center][i]Divine Summoner Level 4 / LIGHT Spellcaster / Effect You can reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster from your hand: Special Summon this card (from your hand). You can send this face-up card you control to the Graveyard: Reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster from your hand and put it onto the field in face-up Attack Position; it’s banished during your End Phase. 1900 / 1000[/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tydog1999 Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 This card could be good if you have a God card or some other such thing. ooh maybe a yubel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 This is a pretty good card. Since the monster is placed on the field and not summoned it cannot be destroyed by the BTH or Trap Hole. The Special Summon effect is good and balanced. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Aaaaaaaanybody else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 I never really thought that temporal machines needed help but its a good card. I think the best thing is that the picture goes perfect with the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1309289261' post='5317418'] I think the best thing is that the picture goes perfect with the card [/quote] The picture is the main reason why I made this card, honestly. Such a perfect fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1309276855' post='5317048'] This is a pretty good card. Since the monster is placed on the field and not summoned it cannot be destroyed by the BTH or Trap Hole. The Special Summon effect is good and balanced. 9/10 [/quote] ^^ this But again with the level ten thing? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 You can reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster in your hand; Special Summon this card (from your hand). You can send this face-up card you control to the Graveyard, then reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster in your hand; place it on the field in face-up Attack Position. A monster Special Summoned by this effect is banished during the End Phase. slightly modified effect, revealing is a cost because it's pointless otherwise and the guy dies during "the" end phase instead of "yours" I can't find any instances of "from" being used instead of "in", so meh. overall I give it; support for a tier 3 archetype/10 awesome fit with the pic tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Milenko Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 I think you mean "Remove from play" not "Banished" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/ rep me for being nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [quote name='Inexplicable Madness' timestamp='1309378741' post='5320184'] ^^ this But again with the level ten thing? 9/10 [/quote] If you would pay any freaking attention, this card was posted [i]yesterday[/i]. And if you still don't get it, these cards are meant to be [b][i]support[/i][/b] for Level 10 or higher monsters. As I said in the other thread, cards, this will be turned into a theme. [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1309378951' post='5320198'] You can reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster in your hand; Special Summon this card (from your hand). You can send this face-up card you control to the Graveyard, then reveal 1 Level 10 or higher monster in your hand; place it on the field in face-up Attack Position. A monster Special Summoned by this effect is banished during the End Phase. slightly modified effect, revealing is a cost because it's pointless otherwise and the guy dies during "the" end phase instead of "yours" I can't find any instances of "from" being used instead of "in", so meh. overall I give it; support for a tier 3 archetype/10 awesome fit with the pic tho [/quote] Thanks for the FB, cba to edit the PSD atm tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted June 29, 2011 Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 *blink* [s]i was paying attention[/s]... yea nvm wasn't... sorry didn't mean to offend you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 "Transcending five thousand years time, the doors of the underworld will open once more. May our souls be the food of the new world! Advent, Earthbound God Aslla Piscu!" - Dark Signer Carly, Japanese 5d's Love the concept Just a few nit picks, 1. You can use book of moon to keep the card on the field. (Most rulings I know, such as [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_Rulings:Return_from_the_Different_Dimension"]those on Return fromt the different dimension[/url] are constant with this). Maybe have it be banised instead if something tries to flip it face-down? 2. [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_Iron_Wall"]Imperial Iron wall[/url] is also an issue. Maybe add "If you cannot, return it to the deck instead." After the part about banshing it? Or better yet, add "This banishing is unaffected by the effects of other cards"? (There is not a real card with a wording like the second wording, any help on finding the best wording to use is apreciated.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Why not just say discard it to place on the field? You basically do that anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1309430452' post='5321851'] Why not just say discard it to place on the field? You basically do that anyways. [/quote] the ss effect means you can stop it with warning/ swarm for fodder/ general aggro revealing is so you can mind crush/ dustshoot /w/e Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1309430452' post='5321851'] Why not just say discard it to place on the field? You basically do that anyways. [/quote] Meant to bypass the Summoning requierments on Level 10 or higher monsters if they have them (and as we know, most of them do). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='Godfather Zandaa' timestamp='1309431742' post='5321870'] Meant to bypass the Summoning requierments on Level 10 or higher monsters if they have them (and as we know, most of them do). [/quote] wait wat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Hence I kept the "place on the field" and din't say Summon. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1309431198' post='5321864'] the ss effect means you can stop it with warning/ swarm for fodder/ general aggro revealing is so you can mind crush/ dustshoot /w/e [/quote] so yeah, all of this wasn't planned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1309432141' post='5321873'] wait wat [/quote] The monster that gets onto the field with Divine Summoners effect is never Summoned, technically. It's just put onto the field. May need to change Divine Charity's effect a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcher boyz Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='Godfather Zandaa' timestamp='1309432380' post='5321879'] The monster that gets onto the field with Divine Summoners effect is never Summoned, technically. It's just put onto the field. May need to change Divine Charity's effect a little. [/quote] The guy wasn't talking about changing the putting thing, he was talking about changing all the other stuff. Your post made no sense as a reply to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='marcher boyz' timestamp='1309432506' post='5321883'] The guy wasn't talking about changing the putting thing, he was talking about changing all the other stuff. Your post made no sense as a reply to that. [/quote] Yeah, I figured that. Embarrased, I am, but I can't do anything about it now. Ignore my stupidity, summer time, staying up late, 6 hours of sleep = stupidity for me. [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1309430452' post='5321851'] Why not just say discard it to place on the field? You basically do that anyways. [/quote] You mean discard Divine Summoner? Actually, I don't know why I made it like this. Probably liked this version better. And maybe because it's a 1900 beatstick pretty much out from nowhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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