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[spoiler=lore]3 Level 4 monsters
This card can only be destroyed by battle with another "Number" monster. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster your opponent controls; destroy the target and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK[/spoiler]


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Pretty good. Nothing really to say other than that. Oh, I can say that the "This card can only be destroyed by battle with another "Number" monster." part of the effect isn't needed, since that effect is only Anime Only, meaning IRL Xyz don't have that effect.

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[quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1311281169' post='5375212']
Pretty good. Nothing really to say other than that. [b]Oh, I can say that the "This card can only be destroyed by battle with another "Number" monster." part of the effect isn't needed, since that effect is only Anime Only, meaning IRL Xyz don't have that effect.[/b]
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Perhaps he likes that clause, is perfectly aware of its absence in the actual game, and wanted to give this card that immunity? If he wanted to make it follow the anime more, than that's fine.

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311284583' post='5375412']
well what I'm saying is you can say once it has no XYZs it'll kill itself

but then you can also add an effect where it can add XYZ monsters to it

now obviously the adding part you make it slower so you can't abuse the burn effect
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That's actually a terrible suggestion. When Xyzs have no materials, they're typically just beatsticks, rendering this card nothing more than another BEWD. It's only Numbers that have the negative effect when they lack Xyz Materials, and destroying it when it runs out of materials is awful. This card works as a 3000 ATK Flare Wingman, so it's pretty good as it is.

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Burn effect = Good
Summon Conditions = Easy
Stats = Maxed
Battle Protection Effect = Not Necessary
Drawback = Needs a minor one. The "This card cannot attack if it does not have an Xyz Material Monster" clause sounds pretty good.

Overall rating: 8.7/10
Would run at least 1, kind of like Catastor.

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