Envoy of Twilight Posted August 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 The story is good, however the chapters and duels seem kind of short. Nice work, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envoy of Twilight Posted August 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Why, thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envoy of Twilight Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Well..due to low views/ comments and that review on page one ( ouch... ) I will probably stop writing this..any objections...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 ive been waiting for an episode 5, do NOT stop this, im begging you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='BrandonSparkman' timestamp='1312521833' post='5415858'] Well..due to low views/ comments and that review on page one ( ouch... ) I will probably stop writing this..any objections...? [/quote] pfffft. Take it like an Internet man-child. Flame me. Keep writing. I want to read about how it's totally possible for you to lose due to paying Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='機皇神龍アステリスク' timestamp='1312572575' post='5417254'] I want to read about how it's totally possible for you to lose due to paying Life Points. [/quote] [url="http://www.4kidstv.com/yugioh5ds/episode/trouble-for-team-5ds/2623"]http://www.4kidstv.com/yugioh5ds/episode/trouble-for-team-5ds/2623[/url] 20:06. Apparently, Akiza was able to pay 800 LP for Wicked Rebirth to bring SDD back, so it's possible. And how many LP did she have left? 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Dont let one review keep you from writing, take everything he said and learn from it. FIll in the mising information he pointed out in later episodes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envoy of Twilight Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Alright, I shall continue onward. And Advocate, thanks for that bit of proof there, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envoy of Twilight Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Episode 5 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1312574501' post='5417314'] [url="http://www.4kidstv.com/yugioh5ds/episode/trouble-for-team-5ds/2623"]http://www.4kidstv.c...r-team-5ds/2623[/url] 20:06. Apparently, Akiza was able to pay 800 LP for Wicked Rebirth to bring SDD back, so it's possible. And how many LP did she have left? 0. [/quote] The anime writers being lazy is no excuse for you to be. EDIT: Whoa, for some reason I thought Brandon was the one who had replied, but no, this is a third party. A more detailed response is in order. Point 1: You just cited the anime. That was your first mistake. Point 2: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Maintenance_cost Point 3: And just in case you dared to make a reply like "it dun hav 2 b purfectly reelistik", let me remind you: [quote]The anime writers being lazy is no excuse for you to be.[/quote] PS: Dueling genius is knowing when to activate your Solemn Judgment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supermanglide Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I was steering out over a limb, saying that he experienced no usable credit rating cards in hand, but maybe that was as well appreciably of the risk. using the emotion part, I'll definetly purpose on that. Duel length; well, they will grow, depending inside the enemy. many thanks for that comment! [url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/]Cheap Gucci Shoes[/url]|[url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/gucci-boots-c-59.html/]Cheap Gucci Boots[/url]|[url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/gucci-dress-shoes-c-58.html/]Gucci Designer Shoes[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envoy of Twilight Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Supermanglide' timestamp='1312874496' post='5427106'] I was steering out over a limb, saying that he experienced no usable credit rating cards in hand, but maybe that was as well appreciably of the risk. using the emotion part, I'll definetly purpose on that. Duel length; well, they will grow, depending inside the enemy. many thanks for that comment! [/quote] ...what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 I dont think english is their main language, but they said that emotion is getting better, duel length should always depend on the enemy and he appreciates otheres commenting and hopes you like his comment. He said that duels also shouldnt depend on the number of cards in the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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