Naruto RPG: The Empyrean Luminary Chronicles [ Doutaini Tournament Arc | On Hiatus | Double C4 & KCNameless are the Co-Hosts ]

[BLUR]

a couple things you still have to fix:
-Capitilization, you have a bunch of words that should be capitilized but are not
-Naruto Teminology, you have spelling errors on the naruto terms that spellcheck can't pick up on, such as Taijutsu
-The form of your app, which is very unorganized

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Regardless, accepted. Champster, if you will (I mean attempt to organize the app). Also, Cherry, just wondering, but are you a guy or a girl? I want to know so that won't be confused or hated at by you for making a mistake (Did that once by confusing a guy with a girl).

[BLUR]

Alright, I'm guessing Champster didn't already have a story prepared for Cherry, so the IC will probably start Wednesday, but hopefully tommorow. And I'm sure Cherry is a guy, due to the fact that I was involved in another rp with him and his name was sirluke at the time.

Also, upon a second look, i don't think that Cherry was actually finished with his app, since he hasn't included his appearance or finished his jutsu.

[ListenToLife]

I'm sure there wouldn't be that much of a problem with having all the currently accepted characters start, and having cherry's character start later on.

[Champster]

Yes, about that... I'm actually having difficulties with writing them. Maybe it's inspiration or something that I lack, I don't know. But what I seem to write doesn't quite... Hmm, sound right. Or something. Perhaps it's something to do with my preferable language, I'm not sure. But it would seem as though I've hit a wall, like a writers block thingy (Although I don't consider myself one).

And it's not like I'm gonna give up or anything. Just thought I'd give everyone a heads up. We're not postponing, either.

[BLUR]

so when do you think the ic will be up?

and don't worry about the writers block, just think of everything you've done up until now, and let it be your inspiration not to let that go to waste

[Champster]

I'm thinking today or tomorrow, maybe, based on whether or not I should try and rewrite what I currently have or simply post right now with what I've got. Decisions, decisions...

[ListenToLife]

I probably haven't got long left tonight, but If you start it within the next hour or two I might be able to get off 1 post. Other wise you'll have to until about 9am GMT, 12 hours from now.

[Cherz]

Name: Yuki kisho

Backround: Yuki Kisho was born to the head of the Kisho clan of Iwagakure(Village Hidden By Rocks).
As a young boy he had dreams of being the tsuchikage of the village and being able to rule the land. When he was six years old he started training with his father who was a very famous retired ninja. His father had very high expectations and yuki often failed to meet them. At the age of 14 he surpassed his father and learned his clans kekki genki, the storm release. Yuki's father went out one day and never came back. Two weeks later, he was found dead. His father was killed by Ninnai. Yuki then went to ninja academy and graduated as a Chunin.He joined the shinobi allience in order to avenge his father and bring peace to the land.

Difficulty: chunin

Personality: When ever Yuki starts a mission on is told to do somthing, he dosent stop untill he gets the job done. Yuki will somtimes neglect his teamates if he thinks that they are doing a poor job, or if they get in his way. He can make friends very easly if he wanted to. Yuki respects his teachers and masters to his fullest. He will try every idea he comes up with to win a fight even if it mean putting his life on the line.

Clan backround: The Kisho Clan was a mighty family who was known throught the the village. They were founded during the second shinobi world war and were feirce wariors. Rivial clans were jeleas with the clans popularity and often declared war on them. The kisho clan won many of these wars, but they knew that they could not keep this up. In the treaty of Iwagakure, It forbid any clans from declaring war without an emergency crisis. Tensions colled for awile until a disease was swept upon the clan. It was known as the welch disease. Yuki and his family fled for the caves and didnt come back untill the disease stopped. By then most of the clan was wiped out. Yuki is the only child of his clan as of now.
Unique ability: The kekkei genkai storm release is what his clan was known for. The awe inspireing strom release is the fusion of 3 chakra natures, water, wind, and lightning. It is an increadibly hard release to pull off, but verry effective.
Age:14
Village:Iwagakure/stone
fraction:shinobi allience
skills:ninjutsu,taijutsu,Kekkei Genkai, wepenary
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picture: [img]http://cdimg1.crunchyroll.com/i/spire3/05062008/f/0/2/e/f02e1e8778a9f0_full.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=jutsus]
[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091021173341/naruto/images/thumb/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg.png[/img] Lightning Release Shadow Clone [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: This technique allows the user to make a Shadow Clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.
Effect: Decreases 25% less damage taken from attacks by 20% chance. Opponent is unable to Attack or Block effectively for 1 post only by 25% chance.
Cost: -35 Chakra. -5 Fatigue

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water Release: Snake's Mouth [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: This technique allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping maw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.
Effect: 20 Damage dealt to opponent.
Cost: -30 Chakra

[url="http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_Release"][img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165449/naruto/images/thumb/d/dd/Nature_Icon_Storm.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Storm.svg.png[/img][/url]Storm release: Eye of the Hurricane [Lv1]
Type:Element, ninjutsu
Detail: after a series of hand signs the user sourounds him/her and the opponent in a hurricane, damaging the opponent. The user is unaffected by any damage during this jutsu.
cost: 20 chakra
effect:20 damage done to opponent

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012163151/naruto/images/thumb/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg.png[/img] Wind Release: Petal Dust Dance [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: This jutsu allows the user to summon a cyclone of petals to attack their opponent. The user can remain in one spot for the use of the jutsu, because he or she can direct it anywhere they desire. Therefore, the user can control the direction and power of the technique to the max as a last resort.
Effect: 25 Damage dealt to opponent. Opponent is unable to Block effectively for 1 post only.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -10 Fatigue.

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012163151/naruto/images/thumb/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg.png[/img]Wind Kunai Blade
Type: Element, Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Detail: The user exhales wind chakra onto a Kunai which expands into a sharp blade shaped like a scimitar which can penetrate a human body with ease. One advantage with this is that it retains both the light weight and versitility of the knife while gaining the length of a sword.
Effect: Weaponry damage is increased by 10% for 2 posts only.
Cost: -30 Chakra.



[url="http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_Release"][img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165449/naruto/images/thumb/d/dd/Nature_Icon_Storm.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Storm.svg.png[/img][/url]Storm release: laser circut [lv1]
type:element,ninjutsu
detail:This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. The user is able to alter the beams direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy.
Effect: 20 damage
cost: 25 chackra

[url="http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_Release"][img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165449/naruto/images/thumb/d/dd/Nature_Icon_Storm.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Storm.svg.png[/img][/url]Storm release: ultimate storm jutsu [LV1]
detail:The user combines water,wind,and lightning together to deal damage to opponent. The jutsu can hit multiple opponents on the battlefield. the user can control where this jutsu hits.
Effect 110 damage dealt to opponent. Has 40% chance of paralising opponents.
Cost:-100 Chakra, -50 Fatigue

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091021173341/naruto/images/thumb/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg.png[/img] Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, then shoot bolts of lightning, immobilizing the target and possibly doing damage to them.
Effect: 20 Damage dealt to opponent. Opponent is unable to Block effectively for 1 post only.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -15 Fatigue.

Shadow Shuriken Technique [LV 1]
Type: Weaponry
Detail: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fuma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency.
Efffect: Does 15 DMG to a target for 2 posts.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -15 Fatigue.

Leaf Great Whirlwind [LV 1]
Type: Taijutsu
Detail: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks.
Efffect: Does 20 DMG to a target.
Cost: -40 Fatigue.

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[BLUR]

why did you make another app? If I remember correctly you were only allowed one character

[ListenToLife]

Definitely only one character. It's been that way since after the Beta RP.

[spoiler=More critiscisms]1) Seriously, just copy and past the App off the first page. Highlight it, right click, press copy, press the post box at the bottom, right click, press paste. Simples (*Squeak*)

2) Spelling. It's not getting much better.

3) Capitalization. There are barely any capitals, at all.

4) Naruto terminology. As said before (By BLUR) you need to have the correct spellings for Naruto terminology, such as Chakra, not chackra.

5) The organisation of your app. Use spoilers. [code][spoiler=(Name of section)] (Stuff inside spoiler) [/spoiler][/code] Use these on your appearance.

6) The techniques, on both apps, are not exactly perfectly laid out. Plus, Lava Release on your first app, and Storm release on this app are both Kekkei Genkai, yet you haven't mentioned it in the unique ability section on either app.

7) Background. They dont really make much sense. In your first app, your character pushes his brother out of a tree randomly, and it manages to kill him? Then his father doesn't show that much anger and hatred? He randomly learns how to fashion Kunai, he randomly gets taken in by a Shinobi and randomly decides he must redeem his family name? Even though said name doesn't need to be redeemed?
With the second app, it's much worse. Your clan back ground is a line. He surpasses his father, a man who is supposed to be a legendary ninja, and yet he is still in the Ninja academy. Not only that, he surpasses him by learning a Kekkei genkai, which his father presumably would have. And before he even does that, he fails at everything and doesn't live up to his father's expectations.


The second app isn't going to be accepted anyway, it would be breaking the rules, but I'm just giving my thoughts on your apps. Because to be frank, they disappoint me slightly. I'm not trying to be mean or insult you, because I like the fact that you didn't give up on the app, and you obviously have enthusiasm, but you need to work on how you present said enthusiasm. Do that and you could become a good RPer.[/spoiler]

Oh, and I realised that the Fire blade Technique description was the one used from the previous RP, and that I had edited it with the unused app on here.

Anyway, if you can, could you change the detail on the Fire blade in Kazuki's app to this:

This technique gathers large amounts of Fire Element Chakra around the user's hand, enveloping the arm in a thick layer of flames, extending down to the elbow on the arm, and extending outwards 2 foot. This technique doubles the user's speed and strength, and creates a large destructive force from their arm, at the cost of being unable to use hand seals. It is a highly powerful Fire Release technique with many secret variations.

[Cherz]

This character is for my brother who want to join but he is having trouble with his acount. I am letting him use my account and champster approved of this. He said that he was going to talk to you about this.

[ListenToLife]

Oh, Okay. You should've stated along with the app.

At any rate, you should still listen to the advise given. The main thing is the layout of the app, because you should be using the app on the first post.

[TotalObelisk]

Minor nit-pick, you have Kasumi listed as 'Kasumo' on the first page

[Champster]

@ TotalObelisk, Really? Well, I was just copying what you had on your spoiler... It's listed as "Kasumo Harukara". I'll get right to it once I have some spare time.

I'm currently waiting for Double C4 to return so that we may discuss something rather urgent that needs attention. I believe he's returning either today or tomorrow. Once he gets back to me and after we solve it (Which should take very little amount of time in doing so), I'll start posting the IC thread. And I apologize for delaying the start of the RPG. It's just one problem after another.

[TotalObelisk]

Huh, so I had....Well that's embarrasing ><

[ListenToLife]

Grrr, everything's going so slow.

[Cherz]

It is. But, we need to be patient.

[Champster]

Since we're currently waiting for Double C4, or at least I am, I've added a few NPCs and fixed a few errors. I have others that need to be finalized before I can add them. And I mean a whole LOT more. Since everyone is waiting, or if you have the time really, you could create NPCs that are either related to your character somehow or others in particular. They will be considered and judged by the (Co-)Hosts at first, of course, before they become added to the NPC list. Also, now that I realize it, I love how almost everyone included those little images before a Nature Release.

BLUR, your partner within the Remnants is Shinobu Metsuki. You'll find his profile at the very bottom of the Remnants section.

[ListenToLife]

We had to. You put it there, and copy/paste is so easy, so as Naruto fans we had to.

And I notice that all the Konoha NPCs are the original NPCs with different names. Tons of originality there champster

Oh, and could I change my character's difficulty to Jounin?

EDIT

Another minor nitpick. I was reading through the NPCs and noticed that Shinobu's clan were 'second only to the Uchiha clan in Genjutsu'.

I thought I already claimed the strongest Genjutsu users?

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Sorry, guys. I was out for 3 days (Plus like 8 hours if you wanna get technical). I was living a simulated experience of camping in Paicho Village (That's in Uganda). I had to deal with camping there for [b]30 hours[/b]. I walked in painful, bumpy terrain, had to deal with almost getting frostbite overnight, and a whole lot of other things.

Other than that, it was a big experience for me.

Champster, I'll look at the NCPs later. I've gotta get back to getting used to being on YCM.

[ListenToLife]

[spoiler=Here's an NPC we could use(Maybe)][b]Name:[/b] Seni Kawaguchi
[b]Age:[/b] 17
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Village:[/b] [s]Kirigakure/Mist[/s] (Resides in Konoha)
[b]Ninja Rank:[/b] Chuunin
[b]Element(s):[/b] [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water & [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091021173341/naruto/images/thumb/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg.png[/img] Lightning
[b][spoiler=Appearance/Description[/b][b]:][/b][img]http://i370.photobucket.com/albums/oo145/billkaulitzfanforever13/Anime%20guys/OC__voodoo_ninja_by_Ninjatic.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] Seni is a relaxed and intelligent boy with a gift for tactics and puzzles. Despite being raised in Kirigakure, a village made famous under the name 'The Bloody Mist', Seni was actually quite a peaceful person, showing disdain for violence and preferring to settle matters in a peaceful manner. He much preferred to learn and study than to practice fights, like most of his other classmates, and was often seen alone in the corner of the Mist's ninja academy, reading or practicing hand seals.
He was also a very modest and talented ninja, being proficient in Ninjutsu, and excelling at Taijutsu.
After leaving Kirigakure due to a resentment of the current Leaders, he has found many friends among Konoha's nin, and enjoys working as a Konoha tactitian a lot. He enjoys relaxing on the Hokage monument with the members of team Muri, who he is good friends with.
[b]History/Background:[/b] Seni was a lonely boy while in the Kiri ninja academy. While the rest of his class mates were all focussed on learning different techniques and how to defeat people, Seni was studying and reading, focussing on his intellect. As such, he was commonly called names such as 'nerd' or 'Geek'. Not that that effected him - 'A ninja must never show emotion' - but it did leave him a social outcast among the students and faculty.
Of course, he was never actually challenged - the students attacked him verbally rather than physically. No-one dared challenge him. This was due to an immense amount of talent he had, much more than any other student. He could perform Ninjutsu that even many Chuunin struggled with while in the academy, such as the water clone technique, and his Taijutsu was well respected, being noted that while it wasn't quite on the level of a Jounin, it would still out match an average Chuunin. His genjutsu was never any good, but he was talented enough to escape most basic Illusions.
As such, he didn't spend long in the Academy, starting aged 6 and leaving aged 8. He was assigned to battle focussed team, consisting of a Weaponry specialist, a Lava release Kekkei Genkai, and a Balanced jounin. His fellow genin were very violent and loved the thought of battle, and as such didn't get along with Seni, and although the Jounin was not exceedingly violent, he had heard about Seni and chose not to get too involved.
They went on many mission over many years - rarely Ds, usually Cs, occasionally Bs and one A - and succeeded in every single one. Their team work barely improved, but they were each talented enough in their own right to work seperately.
Around the age of 12, Seni and his team were put forward for the Chuunin exams. They did quite well initially, until they were ambushed by a group of mysterious ninja that weren't part of the exams. His team was all but eliminated, Seni barely surviving. He had a couple of encounters alone in the forest of death, defeating or fleeing from them, and suceeded in finishing the forest.
After the events of the Chuunin exam left them unable to finish, Seni had made friends with many of the other Genin, mainly the group of Team Amagai/Muri, and was able to help them confront their master. After is escape, he decided he would stay in Konoha, defecting honourably from Kiri and becoming a Konoha-nin. He has since become a Chuunin, and is a vital part of Konoha's strategic department, while remaining friends with those he met 5 years ago.
[spoiler=Jutsu][img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water Prison Technique [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Detail: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned.
Effect: Both user and a desginated opponent are unable to Attack, Dodge or Block effectively for 2 posts only.
Cost: -40 Chakra.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water Clone Technique [LV 3]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Detail: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control.
Effect: Decreases 40% less damage taken from all attacks by 30% chance.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -20 Fatigue.

Body Flicker Technique [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu
Detail: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds.
Efffect: Decreases 30% less damage taken from Ninjutsu attacks by 25% chance.
Cost: -25 Chakra. -35 Fatigue.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water Release: Shark Tooth Technique [LV 3]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Detail: This Jutsu creates up to thirty sharpened missiles from water around the user and freezes them. Then these Missiles are thrown at the opponent at high speeds, such as that it's nearly impossible to miss.
Effect: Deals between 20 and 75 damage. Cannot be avoided. Has a 20% chance of disabling opponent ninjutsu for one turn.
Cost: -40 Chakra. -20 Fatigue.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Spinning Ice blade Technique [LV 4]
Type: Element, Taijutsu, ninjutsu
Detail: This technique mixes Taijutsu with Water Style Ninjutsu, freezing the hand of the user to a point, turning the Users hand into a sword. Was originally developed by the 2nd th Mizukage, and Seni is the only other Ninja known to be able to use it, cementing him in Kiri's history.
Effect: Deals 45 DMG each turn for 3 turns. User cannot use Ninjutsu for three turns.
Cost: -50 Chakra x turns. -50 Fatigue x turns.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Spinning Ice Blade: Blizzard Form [LV 3]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: This Variation of the Spinning Ice Blade Technique is activated by holding the Ice Blade straight infront of you, with palm facing down, drawing chakra into the hand and twisting 180 Degrees Clockwise, so the palm is facing up. The Ice of the blade splits off, creating a small blizzard infront of the user, heading towards the opponent. The Spinning Ice Blade Technique is negated when this technique is used.
Effect: Can only be used during the three turns Spinning Ice Blade Technique is active. Deals 35 Damage to Opponent and negates the effects of Spinning Ice Blade Technique.
Cost: -30 Chakra, -25 Fatigue.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Spinning Ice Blade: Mace Form. [LV 2]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Detail: This Variation of the Spinning Ice Blade technique is activated by raising the encased arm to the sky and performinbg a single hand seal with the other hand. The Blade thickens out near the top of the blade, so that the only edged point is the tip, and spikes of ice erupt out of the arm.
Effect: Deals 50 Damage to the Opponent for 2 turns. The user cannot use Ninjutsu for 2 turns.
Cost: -45 Chakra. -55 Fatigue.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091021173341/naruto/images/thumb/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg.png[/img] Lightning Release: Bullet Punch [LV 2]
Type: Element, Taijutsu
Detail: The user imbues lightning element chakra into their fist, increasing their speed and the strength of the impact, and punches their opponent, usually in the stomach, releasing the stored chakra.
Effect: 50 DMG to opponent. Opponent is unable to Attack for 1 turn.
Cost: -30 Chakra. - 50 Fatigue

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091021173341/naruto/images/thumb/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg.png[/img] Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. [LV 2]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, then shoot bolts of lightning, immobilizing the target and possibly doing damage to them.
Effect: 50% Chance of Dealing 30 Damage to opponent. Opponent cannot Attack, Defend or Dodge Effectively four 2-3 turns.
Cost: -40 Chakra, -20 Fatigue.

[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012165925/naruto/images/thumb/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg.png[/img] Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks. [LV 3]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks. The sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with each consecutive attack. In the anime, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.
Effect: Deals 55 Damage to All Opponents. 40% Chance of opponent not being able to dodge or defend effieciently for 2 turns.
Cost: -50 Chakra, -25 Chakra.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[Cherz]

isnt ice a Kekei Genki?

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Wait, wait, HOLD IT CHAMPSTER!! I just read Chizu's NCP app, and...

YOU SAID SHE AND KIBUTO ARE DATING!?!

*Sigh* I actually wanted to create the building of their relationship ON MY OWN! You sort of ruined that chance. Just pointing that out.

[ListenToLife]

[quote name='Cherry_Blossom' timestamp='1334415520' post='5913435']
isnt ice a Kekkei Genkai?
[/quote]

Depends what type of Ice you are talking about. Haku's is a Kekkei Genkai, while the residents of Yukigakure also use it, not as a kekkei genkai.
Besides, it's not Ice release, it's Water release, just frozen. I doubt it would be that difficult to freeze the water with chakra.
And that character's been in it since the Beta, and it was never questioned then.