Sckorpio Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 well i was thinking it was time defence took the stage so i created some cards built to defend player's life points so that you could last to bring out your offence i might make others some time but everything starts somewhere so lets end the intro. [img]http://i.imgur.com/HYxVh.jpg[/img] Activate only when your oponent attacks directly. sumon 3 gate of darkness tokens 3000DEF 0ATK destroy these on the oponents next standby phase. Insted of sending this to the graveyard shuffle it into your deck if you use this in the right way it can be quite effective [img]http://i.imgur.com/P1onp.jpg[/img] Can only be special summoned by sacraficing kuriboh, Winged kuriboh,kuriboh lvl 8 and kuriboh lvl10(it cannot be set or normal summoned) This card is imune unless one of the sacraficed monsters is out of the graveyard. This is the only monster your oponent can attack. This card cannot attack. you know you like it lol! [img]http://i.imgur.com/Pb6n1.jpg[/img] all life point damage for the next 3 turns becomes 0. Note:This card doesn't stop Attacks. feel free to leave coments and ideas. end of main post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 What the heck? (and not in a good way) firstly the Trap card: what is the Type, Attribute and level of the tokens? anyways i don't like how you can just recycle it instead of sending it to the graveyard, sure its original, but it gets repetitive after a while 4.5/10 the second card: utterly useless because of the effect "This is the only monster your oponent can attack. This card cannot attack." also how does it get its DEF? becasuse unless you explain how it get its DEF, it might as well have 0 DEF not to mention its only redeeming factor being its going to be difficult to get out. Also i know its invincible, but i assume the controller would take battle damage if it was attacked 2/10 the third card: stall stall stall, it's even worse card design than One Day of Peace, Final Countdown would abuse the hell out of it 1.5/10 EDIT: ninja'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Um... WTF is this broken/stupid sh*t?[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Now for actual reviewing:[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Darkness behind the Gate: Broken. 3 free tokens with 3000 DEF? Even Gorz isn't like this.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Kuriboh and Jaden w/e: Who on earth would have all of them? This is too hard to summon and it's pointless.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Winged Blood Shield: Horribly broken. 3 turns? That's an incredibly long amount. .-. Where's the cost? Who's LP? Your's? Or your opponent's too? Either way, broken.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Anyway, learn to spell. And check up on the new OCG. If these are in RC, all these already listed errors should be fixed at least partially. REALISTIC. Not friggin stupid. And change the SCKORPIO thing to KAZUKI TAKAHASHI, and the 2012 to 1996 (I think). Also, the 67584-98876, SUPER-CARD, and DEF-DEF is unrealistic. It should be either: (4 capital letters)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9) or SD(2 random numbers 0-9)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9).[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]0/10[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted May 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote] [quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote]for the 1st one: i tried using infinity but it kept turning to 5[quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote] [quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote]for the 1st one: i tried using infinity but it kept turning to 5[quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote] [quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote]for the 1st one: i tried using infinity but it kept turning to 5[quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote] [quote name='T - Abhorrence' timestamp='1338128356' post='5947685'] 1st: What are the Type, Attribute, and Level of the tokens? As for the shield thing, Shield And Sword is a bad, but interesting combo (so is Inverse Universe). Make them die at the end of the turn they're Summoned. 2nd: Tribute 4 monsters for a unkillable shield? Way too hard to get out, and the "unstoppable" part of this is too much. Chances are your opponent can't remove one of those cards from the Graveyard, so the duel will be at a stalemate until you turn it around. 3rd: There's this new card out called "One Day of Peace." It's broken because it stops all damage for [b]1[/b] turn. [b]ONE[/b]. This... is just worse. Defensive cards are bad for the game because of OTKs, burn, and decreased player interaction. Just saying. [/quote]for the 1st one: i tried using infinity but it kept turning to 5i keep on acidentaly re-doing stuff cause this computers spagy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [color=#000066][b]WTH. You're gonna make tokens that are infinity level/attribute/type? [img]http://i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/000/554/facepalm.jpg[/img] HURR DURR. [img]http://static.fjcdn.com/comments/It+s+dangerous+to+call+Link+Zelda+Take+this+_6928754b4e514330f73c736717363fd8.jpg[/img] Did you know there's a thing called common sense? Ya know, you should use it maybe.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted May 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [quote name='.nova' timestamp='1338128689' post='5947688'] [color=#000066][b]Um... WTF is this broken/stupid sh*t?[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Now for actual reviewing:[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Darkness behind the Gate: Broken. 3 free tokens with 3000 DEF? Even Gorz isn't like this.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Kuriboh and Jaden w/e: Who on earth would have all of them? This is too hard to summon and it's pointless.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Winged Blood Shield: Horribly broken. 3 turns? That's an incredibly long amount. .-. Where's the cost? Who's LP? Your's? Or your opponent's too? Either way, broken.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Anyway, learn to spell. And check up on the new OCG. If these are in RC, all these already listed errors should be fixed at least partially. REALISTIC. Not friggin stupid. And change the SCKORPIO thing to KAZUKI TAKAHASHI, and the 2012 to 1996 (I think). Also, the 67584-98876, SUPER-CARD, and DEF-DEF is unrealistic. It should be either: (4 capital letters)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9) or SD(2 random numbers 0-9)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9).[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]0/10[/b][/color] [/quote]just saying winged shield works both ways and doesn't mean you cant attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [color=#000066][b]You know, because that makes everything so much better. 3 turns of complete damage invincibility. Oh hurr durr. I just won with FC/Stall/etc because they couldn't damage me for 3 turns. [img]http://boards.420chan.org/howto/thumb/1330682778589s.jpg[/img][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 .Nova does have a point, that card makes One Day of Peace seem kinda fair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [quote name='.nova' timestamp='1338129832' post='5947695'] [color=#000066][b]You know, because that makes everything so much better. 3 turns of complete damage invincibility. Oh hurr durr. I just won with FC/Stall/etc because they couldn't damage me for 3 turns. [img]http://boards.420chan.org/howto/thumb/1330682778589s.jpg[/img][/b][/color] [/quote] Quit acting like a dumbass troll who knows every goddamn thing, you douchebag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CameronBarton Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 Or.... instead of all of this.. how about having a couple Wabokus ready? Unless it's banned for some ridiculous reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [color=#000066][b]@Cameron: Nope. Waboku is unlimited. And besides, this card called One Day of Peace helps greatly, although all these stall-supporting cards are usually bad for the game, as it promotes just waiting out turns, instead of gameplay as usual.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNE Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 bad OCG, OP, bad artwork, etc... 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XDXDXD12 Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 [quote[quote name='PHEONIXPaladin.pcm' timestamp='1338127343' post='5947681'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/P1onp.jpg[/img] Can only be special summoned by sacraficing kuriboh, Winged kuriboh,kuriboh lvl 8 and kuriboh lvl10(it cannot be set or normal summoned) This card is imune unless one of the sacraficed monsters is out of the graveyard. This is the only monster your oponent can attack. This card cannot attack. [/quote] [quote name='~Dark Soul~' timestamp='1338128502' post='5947687'] the second card: utterly useless because of the effect "This is the only monster your oponent can attack. This card cannot attack." also how does it get its DEF? becasuse unless you explain how it get its DEF, it might as well have 0 DEF not to mention its only redeeming factor being its going to be difficult to get out. Also i know its invincible, but i assume the controller would take battle damage if it was attacked 2/10 [/quote] the immune part is likely refering to having X000 def points its like any X000 card and raregold armor when hes immune. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name='XDXDXD12' timestamp='1342108665' post='5975430'] the immune part is likely refering to having X000 def points its like any X000 card and raregold armor when hes immune. [/quote] What yo talkin bo'ut? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SidewinderX7 Posted July 15, 2012 Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 [center][img]http://www.kraproom.com/pacman/aod/gallery/d/6992-1/picard-wtf.jpg[/img][/center] I was going to try and review these, but since they aren't supposed to be realistic I'll just say this: Fix your grammar and spelling mistakes, fix their just horrible balancing issues, and fix how abstract the effects are and get rid of all the "invulnerable" crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BacoTaco Posted July 15, 2012 Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 Did anyone notice that there is no winged kuriboh lv8. Theres a lv 9 but no level 8, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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