xlotus Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/qeMgb.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Lore Fix: Once per turn, send 1 card from your hand to the graveyard to take control of 1 face-up DARK-type monster your opponent controls till the the end phase of this turn. Edit: I think it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fooly000 Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Not worth it. Level is so high and the effect so specific that it would be useless against most decks unless you had card that made monsters into dark monsters. The idea is there just more tweaking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 I think it would be a pretty good level 4 or lower. And what if you battled decks that don't really use Darks. But I like the idea a bit. 5/10. If it was a level 4 or lower, I would rate it like a 7 or 8/10. But for your first card; not bad. [b]BTW:[/b] where'd you get the pic? Its cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlotus Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/9T5Dp.jpg[/img][img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Shadow%20Stalker&cardtype=Ritual&subtype=normal&attribute=Dark&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Ultimate%20Rare&picture=http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/291/9/a/the_deacon_by_alterton-d4d9tx5.jpg&set1=002&set2=001&inset=false&type=Warrior&description=This%20card%20cannot%20be%20normal%20summoned%20or%20set%20this%20card%20can%20only%20be%20summoned%20using%20the%20ritual%20card%20Ritual%20Of%20The%20Night&circulation=&atk=2800&def=2300&creator=&year=2012&serial=71395455[/img][attachment=35156:createcard.jpg]I got all my pics from deviantart.com[attachment=35157:createcard (1).jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Newest grammar in cards would be something like this: [b]During your Main Phase: You can discard 1 card and target 1 face-up DARK monster your opponent controls; Switch control of that target, until the End Phase.[/b] I don't really like it. -Your effect doesn't suggest that its "once per turn". -It's biggest use is for winning the turn you Summon it because of how it was designed. -I'm not sure what it's ATK should be, but 3000+ sounds a bit much to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 [quote name='Sleepy' timestamp='1344467838' post='6001465'] Newest grammar in cards would be something like this: [b]During your Main Phase: You can discard 1 card and target 1 face-up DARK monster your opponent controls; Switch control of that target, until the End Phase.[/b] I don't really like it. -Your effect doesn't suggest that its "once per turn". -It's biggest use is for winning the turn you Summon it because of how it was designed. -I'm not sure what it's ATK should be, but 3000+ sounds a bit much to me. [/quote] Amazing, all down checked. Well how would you rate it Sleep? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 [quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1344468179' post='6001469'] Amazing, all down checked. Well how would you rate it Sleep? [/quote] Well, it sucks that it has that much ATK and is not restricted from attacking after controlling, and that it can keep controlling cards as long as it has something to discard. Then, a balancing factor is that it only targets DARKs, though it's an auto-win against them so it's not a good balancing factor, in more than one way. A more real balancing factor is being a 2 Tribute Main Deck monster. I don't usually like giving ratings, but if I had to absolutely give a rating, it'd be a around [b]5/10 or 6/10[/b] from me. It's either too strong against it's intended purpose, or practically effect-less in any other situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Tetsu Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 I would like it much much much more if the monster was Level 3 or 4. I could also maybe see it as a Flip Effect. I personally give it a 5/10. Level, power and wording brought the score down tremendously, but the name, pic, and overall effect boosted it. The pic is awesome! You said it came from dA? Who was it? Who all do you go to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 So all that would be need would be adding "[b]If this card was Tribute summon[/b]" so that if it was Special summon it would be on limit. I see it that i would play and on real terms t would be limited, having all nothing to do with other card makes it less play able but a side line card. I liked the thought, if it had just a bit more do, having it as a lower level it would have to be a 6th level nothing less due it's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Make it unable to be Special Summoned or make it's effect once per turn only. Because if not, then this thing is broken as f*** for having 3400 ATK (which is unforgivable for a monster with no restrictions) and being able to take control of DARKs multiple times in one turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted August 9, 2012 Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 [quote name='★Toyo-tan★' timestamp='1344470019' post='6001486'] Make it unable to be Special Summoned or make it's effect once per turn only. Because if not, then this thing is broken as f*** for having 3400 ATK (which is unforgivable for a monster with no restrictions) and being able to take control of DARKs multiple times in one turn. [/quote] Though if it was Un- to be Special then won't that slow the card's use. I find that with it's Atk, it card can level with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Dark_Creator"]The Dark Creator[/url] so soon i find some-where it might fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted August 9, 2012 Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 [quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1344470460' post='6001492'] Though if it was Un- to be Special then won't that slow the card's use. I find that with it's Atk, it card can level with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Dark_Creator"]The Dark Creator[/url] so soon i find some-where it might fit. [/quote] 3400 Is too high for a monster with no restrictions. I'm just suggesting that there should be a restriction or summoning condition so that it's ATK can be justified. Or if you don't want that, reduce the ATK down to 2400 and make it a level 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 9, 2012 Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 Oh oh oh! I got something =0 Maybe you could do all these: Make it's ATK 2800. Let it keep the discard=control DARKs effect. Add a "discard to turn a monster into DARK" effect to make it not as bad against other Decks. Give it a "This card cannot attack during the turn a monster switches control this way". effect. ^I think that would balance it without killing it's ulitity, and also not make it broken the few times you do use it's effect. Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlotus Posted August 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 i have created a new topic because I am unable to post pictures on this thread anymore It is called My Cards feel free to look and I also fixed some problems with my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted August 9, 2012 Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 [quote name='Sleepy' timestamp='1344471219' post='6001505'] Oh oh oh! I got something =0 Maybe you could do all these: Make it's ATK 2800. Let it keep the discard=control DARKs effect. Add a "discard to turn a monster into DARK" effect to make it not as bad against other Decks. Give it a "This card cannot attack during the turn a monster switches control this way". effect. ^I think that would balance it without killing it's ulitity, and also not make it broken the few times you do use it's effect. Just a suggestion. [/quote] Well done, i guess this topic is much AS DONE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.