Maeriberii Haan Posted October 1, 2013 Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 2 level 9 monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; select all cards in the same column as this card. During your end phase, destroy them. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can move this card into an empty monster card zone on your side of the field, then gain 1000 life points. It's a whale. Really. Also, it seems that I have a fetish of making WATER monsters lately.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted October 1, 2013 Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 I liked it, but felt I should comment on the perfection that is the card you posted. Great job. Balanced, useful, creative. All the love. I noticed your fetish, also, and your constant having of images with black backgrounds. Might as well correct OCG 2 Level 9 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; during this turn's End Phase, destroy all other cards in the same column as this card. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can move this card into an empty monster card zone on your side of the field, then gain 1000 Life Points. Only minor errors, like : and ; placement as well as specification and capitalization. Sorry I have no CnC, it is pretty much great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted October 1, 2013 Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 It's kinda mediocre: really slow +1-2 destruction over which you have relatively little control coupled with a Senet effect isn't good enough for a rank 9 IMO. I'd destroy the cards outright and also bump the ATK up to 3100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOMY_25 Posted October 1, 2013 Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 Quite rare to have cards with Senet effects (effect that involves field column) in the TCG/OCG, this one is kinda interesting. Not sure about the Ranks though, not so many Level 9 monsters, the viable one that I notice would be Moisture Creature, Big Whale and Azure-Eyes Silver Dragon (unless if supported by cards like "Galaxy Queen's Light"). Still playable, depending on what kind of ways used to make its Summoning a bit faster. My suggestion for the OCG fix for this card: Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target all cards in the same column as this card; destroy those targets during your End Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can move this card to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone, and if you do, you gain 1000 Life Points. I think delaying the destruction effect till the End Phase kinda weakens this card a bit, since it's quite hard to Xyz Summon it at the first place. The rest seems fine and balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted October 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2013 Thanks for the suggestions guys, will fix this when I'm back on my PC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted October 2, 2013 Report Share Posted October 2, 2013 This is a Senet effect done well. The monster looks great, but I'm not a fan of the black background. 2 Level 9s is not that hard. This card already payed for itself when it first makes the effect. Having it not just move, but move as a result of another action, increases this card's fun value greatly for me. It's like a giant titan that is slowly approaching to kill your most important column. It makes it strategic where a player places their cards and where this card is Summoned. Not just the column with more cards, but with less of YOUR cards, or that is adjasent to a future important target for it. Oh I just noticed it doesn't move 1 space like other Senets, but rather places itself at another of your Monster Card Zones of your choice. Is it too silly that I wanna say "unfair"? xD Maybe it's just me, but I'd rather use this card than Dyson Sphere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted October 2, 2013 Report Share Posted October 2, 2013 By Column do you mean the S/T card under it and the opposing Monster and S/T card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted October 2, 2013 Report Share Posted October 2, 2013 By Column do you mean the S/T card under it and the opposing Monster and S/T card? Exactly. Blasting Fuse operates on this same principle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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