Dragon Lord Of The Wind

[DragonCreator123]

Popped up with an idea.

 

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by having exactly 5 WIND monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy all Spell/Trap cards your opponet controls. You can only use this effect of "Dragon Lord Of The Wind" once per turn. If this card leaves the field, skip the Battle Phase of your next turn.

[death00]

so how exactly would he be summoned you say that he must be special summoned by having 5 winds in your grave, but do you mean you have to tribute them to your grave or that you discard them from the grave?

[Toffee.]

[DragonCreator123]

Yep :/ I just thought it was with too low ATK. xD

[Toffee.]

2800, by all means, is "too low".
You would be surprised by how many cards can be run over with that alone.

That aside, it's basically an exact Windrose copy-pasta, which just shows lazyness. No offense.

[death00]

zombie spike your card is basically his and again how exactly would he be summoned you say that he must be special summoned by having 5 winds in your grave, but do you mean you have to tribute them to your grave or that you discard them from the grave?

[Toffee.]

zombie spike your card-

Windrose came out in Lord of the Tachyon Galaxy; What are you talking about?

Also you just need 5 WIND monsters in the Graveyard, and you can freely Special Summon it from your Hand. Not sure how that's hard to understand.

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

Dude might've never seen windrose, and who cares? If he never saw it, that shows he has true genius with card making. And if I had to choose one, i'd choose the dragon.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

[quote name="CrystalKing" post="6298687" timestamp="1383450047"]Dude might've never seen windrose, and who cares? If he never saw it, that shows he has true genius with card making. And if I had to choose one, i'd choose the dragon.[/quote] I'd take Windrose. More flavor, more balanced and isn't a stupid Dragon card. To OP: Your card is a more OP'd Windrose. That is all. Go give it a new effect, please.

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

Whats with 5+ star members being crazy about rookie cards? 

 

Go give it a new effect, NOW!!!

 

also, thanks for the new mock quote. 

 

Back on-topic:

I get it is slightly OP, but it's a rookie's card.

One of a rookie's early cards at that. 

I think that you high levels should ease up on the rookies, and be more supportive.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

At least I'm giving him constructive criticism, which is infinitely more helpful than your post was. You offered no advice whatsoever, and that doesn't help OP's card making skills at all.

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

All that is different is (basically) 400 ATK. =.=

Seriously.

And if he wasn't "lazy" he would have to go through some insane amount of channels and make a REAL card. 

People use this site for fun, not to play yugioh with whatever card they can imagine, and you do realize that it's a free, open to all card maker.

he can make a Squirrel-Type version of Windrose for crying out loud.

I mean seriously, ease up.

[Zextra]

Whats with 5+ star members being crazy about rookie cards? 

It's not that we're against rookie cards; but the fact that all DragonCreator123 did to make this card was copy and paste Windrose's effect (and change the name in the card text), give it more ATK, and make its type far more abusable is not the way to make cards. 

 

@ DragonCreator123 - honestly, I understand that you're trying to "improve" on an existing card, but if you do so, do it in a more original way - simply copy and pasting an effect and making everything else better is obviously heavily looked down upon. So with that said, please edit your card so it isn't an almost word-by-word copy of Windrose.

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

Yeah, ok.

 

You guys just seem harsh. Like a bit too much. Also a tad snooty. (and i won't name who i'm thinking about)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Like everyone has pretty much said in this thread, card is essentially a 400 ATK stronger Dragon-Type variant of Windrose; which isn't very creative.

It's okay if you want to base your card off of an existing one, but don't copy/paste its effect to the letter and then change its stats/typing. 2800 is actually a decent amount of ATK power considering what Windrose has going for it, like Armz/Spike mentioned.

 

As a suggestion, you could change it to banishing the S/T cards instead, though if you decide to go with that option, don't have it take out all of them (3 should be enough). But with all due respect, it's up to you to decide what you should edit the effect to (I just gave that suggestion if you want to keep it similar to what you posted originally). Just think of something that doesn't make this a clone of Windrose or anything.

 

@CrystalKing: Keep in mind that this is the Realistic Card section, which hypothetically contains cards that could possibly be printed if Konami ever came around for ideas. With that said, the standards are higher than what you should expect in AoC. At the minimum before coming, you should know some of the cards that exist in the meta; however, that doesn't imply that you have to play in Regionals/Nats or be a frequent user in this site's TCG area to post here. (Looking over there may prove useful to cardmaking, so you know what cards exist so you can try to avoid making another copy of them). Yes, it's a bit harsh for newer members to know all of this stuff before coming into RC (which is why that other forum exists; so they get used to things before moving up)