Hikari-chan Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 if i made any mistake pls tell me, im new to this board :) thx to Dark Strawberry for doing that OCG fix for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 yea u made some mistakes. i will just spot the important one: there's no "i" in card text. it should be "you". but i cant fix all of that card's text so u should w8 for some old members to do OCG fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Strawberry Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Welcome to this site. I hope you have a good time. I like your card, it's a nice card but you've put "i" in the card text, which doesn't appear on Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. I would suggest correcting the text like so: When a monster your opponent controls declares an attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you do, monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle this turn. During the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect: Gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that declared an attack at the start of this card's activation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Welcome to this site. I hope you have a good time. I like your card, it's a nice card but you've put "i" in the card text, which doesn't appear on Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. I would suggest correcting the text like so: When a monster your opponent controls declares an attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you do, monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle this turn. During the End Phase of the turn you activated this effect: Gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that declared an attack at the start of this card's activation. Thx u very much, i will edited it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Strawberry Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Thx u very much, i will edited it now No problem and you're welcome. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 14, 2013 Report Share Posted November 14, 2013 Hmm, a monster that can protect your monsters from being destroyed and a LP bonus at the end. Plus being a Level 4 Tuner to set up for Synchro Summons (or Xyz if you need to) The protection effect is nice, since it can prevent you from taking direct attacks and save monsters for Synchro/Xyz Material. In terms of its LP gain effect, you could possibly gain 2-3k (depending on if you SS this in response to a high Level) but that's situational. It might not be much in some cases, but LP recovery is a good thing. It's a nice first card, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2013 Hmm, a monster that can protect your monsters from being destroyed and a LP bonus at the end. Plus being a Level 4 Tuner to set up for Synchro Summons (or Xyz if you need to) The protection effect is nice, since it can prevent you from taking direct attacks and save monsters for Synchro/Xyz Material. In terms of its LP gain effect, you could possibly gain 2-3k (depending on if you SS this in response to a high Level) but that's situational. It might not be much in some cases, but LP recovery is a good thing. It's a nice first card, keep it up. thx u very much :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 14, 2013 Report Share Posted November 14, 2013 It's a pretty great card for a first card. Not only that, but it's a very nice card in general. A Level 4 Tuner is always appreciated, especially being a sort of Waboku from the hand, that opens up room for some nice combos. Gladiator Beasts come to mind here. Even though this card is helpful in general. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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