my deck

[Jake Skull]

my deck has.

1.Gladiator Beast Heraklinos 

2.Master Gig

3.Rose Tentacles 

4.Photon Leo

5.Psychic Snail

6.Swallowtail Butterspy

7.Blade Bounzer

8.The Six Samurai- Irou

9.Double Coston 

10.Pandaborg

11.The Creator Incarnate 

12. Lava Dragon

13.The Creator Incarnate

14.Shocktopus 

15.Lucky Pied Piper

​16. Invitation To A Dark Sleep

17.Karakuri Soldier 236 Nisamu

18. Oni Tank T-34

19.The Six Samurai- Nisashi 

20.Mirage Dragon

21.Banner Of Courage

22.Poison Of The Old Man

23.Lucky Iron Axe

24.Attraffic Control

25.Card Of Safe Return

26.Detonate

27.Mirror Of The Ice Barrier

28.Scarlet Security

29.Malice Dispersion

30.Ballista Of Rampart Smashing 

31.Junk Barrage 

32.Sword Of Kusanagi 

33.Junk Barrage 

34.Card Rotator 

35.Evo-Miracle 

36.Fifth Hope

37.Jar Robber

38.Ego Boost

39.Dicephoon

40.Dark Mambele 

41.Ribbon Of Rebirth

42.That Wacky Magic

43.Big Wave Small Wave

44.7 Completed 

​45.Enchanted Javelin

46.Fake Feather

47.Reckoned Power

48.Gamushara 

49.Damage Vaccine Omega Max

50.Wattkeeper 

51.Scrap Crash

52.Psychic Reactor

53.Trap Of Board Eraser 

54.Non Aggression Area 

55. Fatal Abacus 

56.Fish Depth Charge

57.The Eye Of Truth 

​58. Ultimate Offering 

59.Destruct Potion 

60.Damage Deit

61.Mirror Mail

62.Fish Rain

63.Rivalry Of Warlords 

64.Evo-Branch

65.Zenmailstorm

66.Small Piece Golem

67.Fox Fire

68.Invasion Of Flames

69.Clock Resonator 

70.Jar Turtle

71.T.G. Catapult Dragon

72.Karakuri Strategist 248 Nishipachi 

73.Hieratic Seal Of The Dragon King

74.Flare Resonator 

75.Pyramid Turtle 

76.Shiens Advisor

77.Planet Pathfinder 

78.Inferno

79.Dark Mimic LV1

80.Harpie Lady 1

81.Monkey Monkey King

​82.The Immortal Bushi 

83.Cloudian-Smoke Ball

84.Naturia Marron 

Thats my entire deck hope you like it. :) ps im new 

 

[Jake Skull]

everyone is allowed to comment on my deck anything said i either will care or don't care. i'll tell if i don't care

[Toffee.]

Aside from the fact you are at least 20 cards over the deck limit-
What exactly are you trying to accomplish with this?
And don't say "Just beat down my Opponent". That's a lazy excuse.

[Sander]

everyone is allowed to comment on my deck anything said i either will care or don't care. i'll tell if i don't care

 

You're going to receive so much shit for this, I can guarantee you that.

[Jake Skull]

Aside from the fact you are at least 20 cards over the deck limit-
What exactly are you trying to accomplish with this?
And don't say "Just beat down my Opponent". That's a lazy excuse.

nothing i spent $20 bucks on 4 packs that have 21 cards in them i was not expecting that many cards. 

You're going to receive so much shit for this, I can guarantee you that . bro shut the f**ck up so i have alot of cards you are full of sh*t so f**ck you bitch!!!

 

Aside from the fact you are at least 20 cards over the deck limit-
What exactly are you trying to accomplish with this?
And don't say "Just beat down my Opponent". That's a lazy excuse.  nothing i spent $20 bucks on 4 packs that have 21 cards in them i was not expecting that many cards. 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

You do realize that this section is made for actual Decks that are being used IRL or on Dueling Network and the like. Given what you've posted thus far, it would fit more in a recent pulls thread (though I don't recall seeing such a thread around here)

 

That being said, Armz has already mentioned you're 23 cards over the maximum Deck limit (not counting Heraklinos b/c that belongs in Extra). Hopefully, you know that the legal deck limit is 40-60 cards. I'll just treat this as an actual one for the sake of this post, though Armz pretty much noted what I was going to say.

 

- Cards are random and don't offer any synergy to each other. I'll be frank: There is absolutely no way you can compete with the cards you've posted (maybe if you play against your friend or something at home, you may have some chance at winning but that's it.)

- Brain Control is banned + Jar Robber is near useless b/c source card is also banned.

- Certain cards in the Deck are useless b/c none of the cards they are supposed to help are in there.

- More than 60 cards.

 

In short, unless you have a distinct theme of how you want your Deck to run, there isn't much that can be said about how it can improve or not. If you take a look at most, if not all of the other threads within this section, have a distinct theme of how they are supposed to run (focusing around an Archetype). As mentioned earlier, this section is for Decks that have competitive use (or in a general sense, something that follows the rules of deckbuilding and has a decent chance of surviving against a normal player)

 

Zanda does have a point though. If you consider this to be a Deck, don't expect the comments to be nice, especially when it violates the min/max card requirements and no clear theme. If you wish to make a Deck here, make sure it has some degree of playability, a theme (how is this Deck supposed to work) and conforms to the deck limits. Also make sure you check the ban list (the stickies at the top of forum should help you). A lot of the members who frequent this section play competitively, so the standards are higher.

 

Also, I'd highly advise you lay off on the cussing. You might not like what the above mentioned, but it's a warning to what other members may say about what you got here (some of the other members are harsher than this). If you continue to keep that attitude here, there is no guarantee your stay on YCM will be an enjoyable one.