Chrisfaa Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 I would love some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 You have more than one card in this thread, so should be in Multiples. In addition, don't use attachments; just copy/paste the IMG code from the card generator. Anyway, card 1's OCG is fine. As for card 2, here's the corrected one (next time, post lore under cards so it's easier to fix) When your opponent takes damage (either by battle or a card effect): Place 1 Phoenix counter on this card. Once per turn: You can remove from 1 Phoenix counter from this card; add 1 "Phoenix" card in your Graveyard to the hand. With that said, it looks like you prefer to capitalize the card names (don't do it unless you need to). Same with mentioning cards, you don't capitalize them unless the Archetype is like that (i.e. HEROs). Back on track to discussing these cards, Feralana's effect is essentially Elemental HERO Lady Heat, except for generic FIRE monsters (which in turn triggers Oracle's counter gaining effect). While being able to recycle monsters is nice, the fact that your opponent just needs to take damage to trigger counters and regain cards will result in a lot of counters on this card (though it is limited by the OPT clause). Overall, they're decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisfaa Posted January 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 Thank you so much for your feedback! I have never posted here before and didn't know where to post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 Nice pics, decent effects, not bad for a first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mokimoki Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 Nice cards for a first try, next time try using like smaller cases ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrisfaa Posted January 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 I don't understand? All of the actual TCG Yugioh cards use upper cases for their names? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mokimoki Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 I gutta show you an example lol here you go check name on this one and tell me what you c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 I don't understand? All of the actual TCG Yugioh cards use upper cases for their names? I had the same problem when I first made my cards. The card-maker will always show the name and type in upper cases no matter what, but what it DOES change, is that if you use lower case, the letters will appear smaller. It'll look more realistic if you do. I bet you also noticed how it kinda looks awkward the way PYRO is too outstanding from the word "Efect". Nice cards for a first try. My first try was really broken stuff xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted January 10, 2014 Report Share Posted January 10, 2014 Nice cards for a first try, though this should be in Multiple Cards like Sakura said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 10, 2014 Report Share Posted January 10, 2014 Oh andI'm pretty sure arche-types aren't supposed to be on this forum (Realistic-Singles) either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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