Kiiny14 Posted October 8, 2014 Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 Hello!! :D Is a card and ... Full Art was created by me. [Dragon/Effect] This card can not be Special Summon or Set. So can be invoked when banishing 5 FIRE type monster from your graveyard.For each type FIRE monster on the field, this card receive 500 attack points. When FIRE type monster is destroyed the field points of attack are taken off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinny Posted October 8, 2014 Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 Where even is its attack points? The art is fantastic btw. OCG fix •For each type FIRE monster on the field, this card gains 500 ATK.When a FIRE-Type monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard negate this cards effects until the end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiiny14 Posted October 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 The art is still being created, I am adding gradually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiiny14 Posted October 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 prompt :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 8, 2014 Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 Where even is its attack points? The art is fantastic btw. OCG fix Please follow the Advanced Clause in this section. All you did so far is comment on the artwork and fix OCG; not add anything related to its playability or design. Anyway, hopefully you realize that this is an extremely powerful and also splashable Level 8 Dragon monster that has a great amount of support to look forward to; including stuff like Red-Eyes Darkness Metal (which can drop this without problems). I would advise adding a (semi)-Nomi clause of sorts; maybe banishing 5 FIRE monsters in the Graveyard or something. (It effectively has 4000 ATK just for existing) I suggest raising its Level to 10, since 35/30 is high for a Level 8, especially one without restrictions on its summon. We have Level 8s with equivalent/higher stats, but they all possess some form of limitation effect [either you need to wait a certain amount of turns, tribute specific monsters or a specific card effect must summon it). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiiny14 Posted October 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2014 I'm sorry, I'm quite beginner and do not know much about balancing, but thanks for the tips and really liked it. I will now edit monster thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 9, 2014 Report Share Posted October 9, 2014 I'll fix the OCG though; there's a thread in this section that'll help you write it better. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned by banishing 5 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for every FIRE monster on the field. Banishing monsters in the Graveyard to summon this card is classed as a Special Summon; if you want it to be a hard Nomi, you'd use "Must be Special Summoned by (method) and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways)". Last part of the effect was cut off, since the stat gain is continuous and will change on its own when a monster is added/leaves. And no problem; that's what I'm here for (and the rest of the veteran members who frequent this section). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiiny14 Posted October 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2014 I'm using Google translator, I am Brazilian and I am still learning D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Progenitor Posted October 11, 2014 Report Share Posted October 11, 2014 I'm using Google translator, I am Brazilian and I am still learning D: In case you didn't correctly get Sakura's fix, here it is in Portuguese: Não pode ser Normal Summoned / Set. Deve primeiro ser Special Summoned por banir 5 monstros fogo em seu cemitério . Esta carta ganha 500 ATK para cada monstro FOGO no campo. Hope that helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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