khailo123 Posted October 27, 2014 Report Share Posted October 27, 2014 okay i always loved Siegfried's Valkyrie deck in the official anime so i decided to create a less op'ed version (in my opinion) more monsters and with more support. The names of most of the monster cards are original Nordic names of the Valkyries. The play style of this set revolves around manipulating your opponents deck so they cant get cards they need into their hand, also a sub style is to try to get the Aurora Borealis (Northern Lights in English) field spell as quick as possible to get the full effects of each monster. I tried as hard as possible to give most cards draw backs so the set isn't to overpowered. There are more cards to add but for now i already think there are so many things happening in the set that i don't want add to much to it. Please give your feedback. Thanks for viewing my cards. Eternal Valkyries [spoiler='Main Cards'] Lore: When this card battles a Dragon-Type monster: Destroy it without applying damage calcutation. "Aurora Borealis" must be face-up on the field to activate and resolve this effect. When this card battles a Defense Position monster: Place it on top of your opponent's Deck. When this card is send to the Graveyard, banish it. Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 1 face-up "Eternal Valkyrie" monster and 1 "Aurora Borealis" you control and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn: Excavate the top 3 cards from your opponent's Deck; your opponent loses 500 LP for each monster excavated, then return the cards to the top of your opponent's Deck in any order. Lore: This card is also treated as Fairy-Type while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field. When this card is detached from an Xyz Monster: Send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard; during the End Phase, attach this card as an Xyz Material to that monster. Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters, 1 from each, your hand, side of the field and Graveyard. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card and declare a card type (Monster, Spell or Trap Card); your opponent excavates the top 5 cards from their Deck and sends all cards of the declared type to the Graveyard. Place the remaining cards back on the top of their Deck in any order. Lore: As long as this card remains face up on the field, increase the ATK of all other "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters by 300. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle; You can pay 500 LP, place this card on top of your opponents deck. Lore: This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field. Discard 1 monster. This card gain ATK equal to the Level of that monster x 100. When this card is destroyed by battle, place the monster that destroyed it to the top of your opponent's deck. Lore: If "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field; Special Summon this card (from your hand) if you have 2 or more Banished "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters. This card gains 200 ATK for each monster you have removed from play. If this card is destroyed by card effect; Add 1 banished monster to your hand and banish this card. Lore: While you control an "Eternal Valkyrie" monster other than "Eternal Valkyrie, Randgrir", your opponent's monsters cannot target this card for attacks. If this card is destroyed. Target 1 Level 4 or lower monster in your graveyard, place it on the top of your deck. Lore: While "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field have your opponent reveal 2 cards in his/her hand. Set 1 card and place the other to the top of your opponents deck. You may only activate this effect once per turn. Lore: Once per turn the controller of this card declares a card type (Monster/Spell/Trap), both players excavate the top card of their decks. Any card that is the declared card type is placed to the bottom of the player's deck. Lore: Once per turn have both players excavate the top 3 cards of your deck. Both players select 1 from their opponent, both players add the selected card to their hand. The controller of this card may place the remaining cards on top the players deck in any order. When "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field and this card destroys a defense position monster, do piercing damage to your opponent. Lore: When this monster attack your opponent directly, Select 1 random card from your opponent's hand, place it on the top of their deck. If "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field; You may look at the card. Lore: Send a number of cards from the top of your deck to the graveyard (max 3.). Your opponent must send cards from the top of his/her deck to the graveyard equal to the number of cards you sent to the graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Support'] [spoiler='Spells'] Lore: You can only control 1 face-up "Enchanted Ring- Andvaranaut ".The equppied monster gains 200 ATK. Once per turn during your opponent's Main Phase; Declare 1 card type (Spell,Trap or Monster). Your opponent excavates the top card of his/her deck. If the card is the declared card type send it to the graveyard and your opponents ends his/her turn. Lore: You can only control 1 face-up "Enchanted Arms - Tyrfing". This card can only be equipped to monsters with "Eternal Valkyrie" in its name. The equppied monster gains 300 ATK. Each time the monster equipped with card does damage to your opponent; They must excavate the top card of their deck. Lore: Once per turn you can switch the top card of your deck with 1 card in your hand. You must pay 200 Life Points to activate this effect. When this card is removed from the field add 1 "Aurora Borealis" from your deck to your hand. Lore: Banish 1 "Eternal Valkyrie" from your deck. After 2 turns special summon it. You cannot normal summon the turn you Special Summoned the monster. Lore: Activate this card during your Main Phase 2. Discard 1 "Eternal Valkyrie" and special summon 1 "Eternal Valkyrie" at least 2 Levels highers than the card discarded. Lore: This card gains effects depending on how many face-up "Eternal Valkyries" you control. +1: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. +2: Halve "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters ATK, you can attack your opponent directly. +3 or more: You can draw two cards per turn. as long as you reveal 1 card to your opponent. Lore: Discard all cards in your hand. Destroy all cards on the field. Your opponent takes damage equal to x 300 for each "Eternal Valkyrie" destroyed by this effect. Lore: "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters are unaffected by Spell Cards then turn this card is activated. Lore; Excavate the top card of your deck, if the card is an "Eternal Valkyrie" monster, add it to your hand. If not send the card to the graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps'] Lore: Activate when your opponent declares an attack on a Fairy-Type monster you control. Target 1 Level 4 or lower Fairy-Type monster in your graveyard. Add half it's DEF points to 1 face-up Fairy-type monster you control ATK points. Lore: Activate when a face-up "Eternal Valkyrie" or "Valkyrie Apprentice" is targeted by your opponent. Swap the targeted monster with 1 monster in your in your hand. Your opponent draws 1 card at the End Phase. Lore:Return to your deck all cards sent from your deck to the graveyard this turn . Shuffle and draw 2 cards Each time a card is sent from your deck to the graveyard; Place it to the bottom of your deck during your End Phase of turn. Activate when an effect is activated where you must send a card(s) from your deck to the graveyard. Your opponent must discard cards equal to the amount of cards send from your deck to the graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Support Monsters'] Lore:When this card is destroyed, Add 1 "Aurora Borealis" from your graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or higher "Eternal Valkyrie" for your hand or deck after 2 turns. Lore:When this card is summoned and "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field; Special summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Eternal Valkyrie" monster from you hand or deck. Lore:This card cannot be special summon from your deck or hand. When this card is sent to the graveyard. Randomly reveal 1 card in your hand to your opponent, then add 1 "Eternal Valkyrie" to your hand. If you have no cards in your hand you cannot resolve this effect. This card is always treated as a Warrior-Type monster. When this card is used as an Xyz material monster for an "Eternal Valkyrie" monster, you can send the top card of your deck to the graveyard and have this card treated 2 Xyz material monsters (only while it is attached to the Xyz Monster). [/spoiler] [spoiler='Extra deck'] Lore:1 "Eternal Valkyrie" + 1 or more Fairy-Type monster(s) Must be Fusion Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card gains ATK and DEF x 700 for each Fusion Material monster used to summon it. Each time this card does damage to your opponent; Randomly banish 1 card in his/her hand. Lore: 1 Fairy-Type Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-tuner monster(s) When this card is Synchro summoned; Destroy all face-up Dragon-Type monsters. When this card destroys your opponents monster by battle you can place it to the top of their deck instead of sending it to the graveyard. Lore:2 Level 4 monsters This card gains 200 ATK for every "Eternal Valkyrie" Xyz material monster attached to it. Once per turn, detach 1 Xyz material monster and have your opponent excavate the top card of his/her deck. Your opponent adds the top card of his/her deck to their hand and places 2 random cards from their hand on the top of his/her deck. Lore: 3 Level 4 "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters This card gains 500 ATK during your opponent's Battle Phase. Once per turn; You can detach 2 Xyz material monsters from this card and target 1 card in your opponent's graveyard: Place the targeted card on top of your opponents deck and add 1 card from your graveyard to your hand. Lore:2 Level 7 "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Eternal Valkyrie" Xyz Monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.)Detach 2 Xyz Material monsters from this card and destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponents side of the field then your opponent excavates the top 5 cards of his/her deck, Target 1 card and add it to his/her hand. Send the remaining cards to the graveyard. Lore:1 '"Eternal Valkyrie" monster + 1 Fairy-Type monster + 1 Warrior-Type monster This card gains 100 ATK for every "Eternal Valkyrie" in your graveyard. Discard 2 cards, target 1 card in your opponent graveyard and add it to your hand. When this card is destroyed and "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field, special summon (from the graveyard) 1 of the fusion material monsters used to summon this card. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted October 27, 2014 Report Share Posted October 27, 2014 the pictures don't work. I like that archetype aswell but you should note that they're really far from being overpowered. You can play test them on YGO Pro, they are very inconssistant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 27, 2014 Report Share Posted October 27, 2014 Next time, just use the card generator to post pictures. It's not that hard to do so. Anyway, I'm moving these to Written Cards until you properly post the card images. (There are several guides on YCM for posting cards/images; I advise reading one of them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khailo123 Posted November 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2014 *BUMP* Updated: -Changed card art - Edited card effects -Added cards -Removed cards I tried to make them more cohesive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos_Deck Posted November 16, 2014 Report Share Posted November 16, 2014 I really like the idea of this deck although i think is very hard to Summon some monsters... either way is you change some cards it might work perfectly... one thing i noteced are the texts... they are preatty bad... i took some time and corrected some of them but i can't do them all.. try and compare the corrected ones with yours and fix the mistakes ;) every thing inside [...] are my comments... Herfjotur: When this card battles a Dragon-Type monster destroy it without applying damage calcutation, "Aurora Borealis" must be face-up on the field to activate and resolve this effect. When this card battles with a Defence Position monster, place it on top of your opponent's Deck. When this card is send to the Graveyard, banish it. Byrnhildr: Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. This card must be Special Summoned by banishing 1 face-up "Eternal Valkyrie" and 1 "Aurora Borealis" [from your side of the field?]. Once per turn, excavate the top 3 cards from your opponent's Deck; your opponent looses 500 Life Points for each monster excavated, then place the cards on top of your opponent's Deck in any order. Geirahod: (This card is also treated as Fairy-Type while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field.) This card's effect is only activated when detached while an Xyz Material. When this card is detached from an Xyz Monster, send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and attach this card as an Xyz Material to the Xyz Monster during the End Phase[can't really get how this effect works..] Hrist: Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. This card must be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Eternal Valkyries" 1 from each, your hand, side of the field and Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card, declare 1 type of card(Monster, Spell or Trap Card), your opponent excavates the top 5 cards from his deck; all cards of the declared type are sent to the Graveyard. Place the remaining cards back on the top of his deck in any order. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 17, 2014 Report Share Posted November 17, 2014 I really like the idea of this deck although i think is very hard to Summon some monsters... either way is you change some cards it might work perfectly... one thing i noteced are the texts... they are preatty bad... i took some time and corrected some of them but i can't do them all.. try and compare the corrected ones with yours and fix the mistakes ;) every thing inside [...] are my comments... Herfjotur: When this card battles a Dragon-Type monster destroy it without applying damage calcutation, "Aurora Borealis" must be face-up on the field to activate and resolve this effect. When this card battles with a Defence Position monster, place it on top of your opponent's Deck. When this card is send to the Graveyard, banish it. Byrnhildr: Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. This card must be Special Summoned by banishing 1 face-up "Eternal Valkyrie" and 1 "Aurora Borealis" [from your side of the field?]. Once per turn, excavate the top 3 cards from your opponent's Deck; your opponent looses 500 Life Points for each monster excavated, then place the cards on top of your opponent's Deck in any order. Geirahod: (This card is also treated as Fairy-Type while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field.) This card's effect is only activated when detached while an Xyz Material. When this card is detached from an Xyz Monster, send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and attach this card as an Xyz Material to the Xyz Monster during the End Phase[can't really get how this effect works..] Hrist: Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. This card must be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Eternal Valkyries" 1 from each, your hand, side of the field and Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card, declare 1 type of card(Monster, Spell or Trap Card), your opponent excavates the top 5 cards from his deck; all cards of the declared type are sent to the Graveyard. Place the remaining cards back on the top of his deck in any order. If you're going to fix OCG, please make sure you are capable of doing it properly. (Read Zazi's guide for it) Additionally, you need to give at least 3-4 sentences related to its playability (given what you've done so far); OCG fixes do not count, neither will bolded comments (you haven't given enough) Just so my posts aren't all moderator-related business, I'll review some cards in here. Herfjotur is pretty much a Dragon killer in all senses of the word (though it needs the Field Spell to be capable of doing it). Randgrídr essentially blocks itself from being attacked; given it is also an Eternal Valkyrie for its own effect. I would suggest changing the effect to "1 or more other "Eternal Vakkyries" Sváva has some discrepancy issues; card itself allows it to pop S/T cards because of self-mill; underneath lore says to have your opponent discard the same amount. Either one is potentially devastating; if I would suggest the lesser of the two, take the milling one. (Although in that regard, it's counterproductive against certain Decks) Why would you pay 500 LP to give your opponent another monster (Kara)? Granted, it may/may not delay them drawing a combo piece or something, but you know that it can be used against you. Ruins of Asgard's last effect is unnecessary; if you reach MP2, you can't attack anyway. Remove that one. Geirahod's effect is essentially a regenerating Xyz Material for whatever monster you used it for; assuming you have enough cards in Deck to fuel it. You also need to work on OCG, but you'll eventually learn. (I'll correct the first four that above user attempted to fix; you should read Zaziuma's thread on writing it properly) Herfjotur: When this card battles a Dragon-Type monster: Destroy it without applying damage calcutation. "Aurora Borealis" must be face-up on the field to activate and resolve this effect. When this card battles a Defense Position monster: Place it on top of your opponent's Deck. When this card is send to the Graveyard, banish it. Byrnhildr: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 1 face-up "Eternal Valkyrie" monster and 1 "Aurora Borealis" you control and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn: Excavate the top 3 cards from your opponent's Deck; your opponent loses 500 LP for each monster excavated, then return the cards to the top of your opponent's Deck in any order. [LP is official OCG now, effective with YS14] Geirahod: This card is also treated as Fairy-Type while "Aurora Borealis" is face-up on the field. When this card is detached from an Xyz Monster: Send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard; during the End Phase, attach this card as an Xyz Material to that monster. Hrist: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Eternal Valkyrie" monsters, 1 from each, your hand, side of the field and Graveyard. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card and declare a card type (Monster, Spell or Trap Card); your opponent excavates the top 5 cards from their Deck and sends all cards of the declared type to the Graveyard. Place the remaining cards back on the top of their Deck in any order. -- There's a lot of cards in here, so not grading them all now. Might do the rest at a later time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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