Jluiz Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 This is my first try, so i'm not sure if the effects are well written, also please help me choose an effect for the Dr. Andonuts card i mentioned, of course it need to be hard to summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 First of all, I'm sorry to say this, but I believe this would fit better into the Casual Card section. Also, please do not use attachment to post your card, but use [img] insert the image's link here[/img] Thank you, and moved to Casual Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 You have done several things wrong, but you're new here, so I'll help out. For one, YCM does not use Attached images. Click the card itself in the card maker to generate an imgur link; use that entire thing. Secondly, this card is not suited for advanced cards and design. It has a fake type (Chimera), and has a really unrealistic effect of winning the game, but that depends on another thing you did wrong. The final thing you did wrong was not post the other card mentioned in the effect so that we may better critique this card. Fix these things, and then I might be able to help more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jluiz Posted January 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Sry, i didn't even saw it was only for REAL cards, i promise not posting anything here until i become better at this, by the way i need some help to decide what will be the way of summoning it, you can include chimera-type cards since i'm making more of those Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Here, let me get the effect wording for you. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by the effect of "Dr. Andonuts" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card is Cannot destroyed as a result of by battle or by the card effects of Spells, Traps, or effect monsters. At the start of the Damage Step, if this card battles a monster: Destroy that monster without applying damage calculation. At the end of the Damage Step, if this card attacks the your opponent directly: You win the game Duel. If this card is targeted for an attacked by a monster with 500 or less ATK: Banish or less remove this card from play, return it to the field in until your 2nd Standby Phase after this effect's activation. I've fine-tuned the effect a little to make it clearer and less clunky. The victory effect only happens at the end of the Damage Step, meaning you have to get the attack to "connect" to win (and the opponent can halt it with Negate Attack and stuff like that). Although this means that you can strap on something like Shooting Star Bow - Ceal and your opponent will have to deal with it very, very quickly. The temporary banish effect triggers in the Battle Step so that if your opponent swings at it with something tiny to trigger that effect he won't lose the monster. In any case, we can't work out how easy it is to pull this card out since we don't know what Dr. Andonuts does. Then again, exactly how he made the thing in-universe wasn't even discussed in the game. Since this thing's an indestructible walking ball of hax that eats almost everything that looks at it, it's going to need extensive effort to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jluiz Posted January 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 THANKS, really thats exactly what i wanted, maybe dr. andonuts shuold tribute some strong chimera monsters to summon it, since it is a combination of unknown DNA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 I've been having this idea of Dr. Andonuts being a monster who can "fuse" other monsters you control to put out the Chimeras. In a sense, a reusable Polymerization for Chimeras. You could make the Chimeras Fusion monsters, and have the Ultimate Chimera require the use of multiple Chimeras at once - making it a monster that needs multiple Fusions, and by extension, immense monster investment to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jluiz Posted January 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 great idea, i may do just that, anyway check the casual cards, i may post this dr. andonuts you suggested along with some other chimeras Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 As Nai already mentioned, Fake Types aren't allowed here, except for Experimental. Personally, you should be able to use one of the 23 existing Types for your card in most cases; chances are that it'll fit into one. Until you post that Dr. Andronuts card, we can't really say how abusable this card is; based on its summoning and whether or not the effect is worth it. For attachments, it's easier if you simply open the cardmaker in another tab, open the card and left-click it for an IMG code. Copy+paste that code in. Problem with attachments is that they will disappear after a while, and no one can see it; plus in the event of multiple cards, you run the risk of hitting the upper limit for uploaded pictures. There is no limitation for pictures posted using IMG tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jluiz Posted January 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 I've already posted the new version of this cards on the casual multiples part, i appreciate any help you can offer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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