Progenitor Posted February 5, 2015 Report Share Posted February 5, 2015 [spoiler Monsters] Mecha Phantom Beast Dyna-Soar Machine-Type | WIND | ***** 1000 ATK | 1900 DEF Synchro/Tuner/Effect 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Must first be Synchro Summoned. During the turn this card is Special Summoned: All "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters you control are unaffected by your opponent's card effects once each. Once per turn, you can Tribute any number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters from your field or hand; Reduce the level of this card by the number of cards Tributed, until the End Phase. If you would Synchro Summon a "Mecha Phantom Beast" Synchro monster by using this card as Synchro Material, you can banish this card and any number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters in your Graveyard whose total levels are equal to the level of that Synchro monster as Synchro Material for that Synchro Summon. Inspired by the Boeing X-20 Dyna-Soar Mecha Phantom Beast Tigershark Machine-Type | WIND | *********** 3300 ATK | 2700 DEF Synchro/Effect 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" Synchro Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type Synchro monsters Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can Special Summon any number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" Tokens (Machine-Type/WIND/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0), up to the number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters that were used as non-Tuner Synchro Materials for the Synchro Summon of this card. At the start of the Battle Phase, you can Tribute any number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" Tokens you control; This card can make additional attacks this turn, up to the number of Tokens Tributed. When this card declares an attack, your opponent cannot activate card effects, except cards that resolve on the field,until the end of the Damage Step. When this card leaves the field: You can target 1 Synchro Monster in your Graveyard OR one of your banished "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters; Special Summon that target. Inspired by the Northrop F-20 Tigershark [/spoiler] [spoiler Spells] Rank Modulation - Phantom Force Quick-Play Spell Target 1 "Phantom" Xyz monster you control and Tribute any number of Tokens you control to activate 1 of the following effects: * Special Summon, from your Extra Deck, 1 "Phantom" Xyz monster whose Rank is greater than the Rank of the target monster by the number of Tokens Tributed for this card's effect, by using it as Xyz Material (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) * Special Summon, from your Extra Deck, 1 "Phantom" Xyz monster whose Rank is less than the Rank of the target monster by the number of Tokens Tributed for this card's effect, by using it as Xyz Material (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) Emergency Reinforcements Quick-Play Spell Discard every card in your hand (min 1); Special Summon any number of "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters in your Graveyard or Banished Zone, up to the number of cards discarded for this effect +1. For the rest of the turn, reduce the levels of all "Mecha Phantom Beast" monsters you control by 3. Lag Displacement Roll Quick-Play Spell You can only activate 1 "Lag Displacement Roll" per turn. During the End Phase of the turn this card was activated, if you control a "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster: draw a number of cards equal to the number of Tokens that were Tributed for a card effect this turn, then Shuffle a number of cards from your hand into the Deck, based on the number of cards you drew: * 1: Shuffle 0 cards * 2: Shuffle 1 card *3+: Shuffle 2 cards. Inspired by the Aerial Maneuver of the same name. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Basic_fighter_maneuvers#Lag_displacement_roll [/spoiler] It's no secret to anyone that I am a big fan of Mecha Phantom Beasts, but they are slowly getting consumed by the power creep. I made some more support, and will continue to do so over time. Still working on: More Xyz monsters to work with the Spell a Delta Accel Synchro (cuz if you notice, Emergency Reinforcements > Dyna-Soar + Concorunda + Jaculsan = Exactly 12 levels) Balancing. Please give me feedback on balancing Some new Traps Some new Main deck monsters to increase speed. More cards to increase consistency. Card art. iz hard 2 find. [spoiler EDIT1] Tigershark can only SS Tokens based on non-Tuner MPB. So only 1 if you use Concoruda, thus lowering him minimum attacks that turn to 2 Emergency Reinforcements now gives +1 to the number of cards discarded. So you at least can SS 2 now, allowing you to actually make a play with the heavy cost. Previous downside to Lag Displacement Roll made this card pretty much useless late game; changed to a Sylvan Charity effect based on the number of cards drawn. It could also be just a normal discard instead of a shuffle, if y'all would think that would be more balanced.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Progenitor Posted February 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2015 Bump plz I waaantz teh fedbek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Highlander Posted February 7, 2015 Report Share Posted February 7, 2015 Mecha Phantom Beast Dyna-Soar seems odd, requiring 2 tributes to be able to summon Tigershark with concoruda, I would recommend to allow it to adjust it's level without tributes/ one tribute (reducing to 1-4). Mecha Phantom Beast Tigershark seems a bit too strong, being a win condition, after all one would get a monster which is immune to card effects (Mecha Phantom Beast Dyna-Soar, unless you meant "you currently control") and which could attack at least 3 times, prevents floating and has 3300 atk, if he could instead only get a second attack after destroying a monster via a battle, then he could even live with a semi-nomi summon condition (restricting the last effect to "When this synchro summoned card leaves the field"). Currently there is not much to state considering Rank Modulation - Phantom Force as there are currently no targets for it. Emergency Reinforcements might be better if it would allow Summons equal to the amount of discarded cards +1, it is currently a bit too expensive to be effective. Lag Displacement Roll seems to be one of the most interesting cards you made, allowing the player to replace used resources, however it is amusing how this card rewards a player for using scapegoat during the opponent's end phase, then using token icecream during the own turn and then normal summoning tetherwolf or aerosguin or activating aerial recharge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Progenitor Posted February 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2015 Mecha Phantom Beast Dyna-Soar seems odd, requiring 2 tributes to be able to summon Tigershark with concoruda, I would recommend to allow it to adjust it's level without tributes/ one tribute (reducing to 1-4). Mecha Phantom Beast Tigershark seems a bit too strong, being a win condition, after all one would get a monster which is immune to card effects (Mecha Phantom Beast Dyna-Soar, unless you meant "you currently control") and which could attack at least 3 times, prevents floating and has 3300 atk, if he could instead only get a second attack after destroying a monster via a battle, then he could even live with a semi-nomi summon condition (restricting the last effect to "When this synchro summoned card leaves the field"). Currently there is not much to state considering Rank Modulation - Phantom Force as there are currently no targets for it. Emergency Reinforcements might be better if it would allow Summons equal to the amount of discarded cards +1, it is currently a bit too expensive to be effective. Lag Displacement Roll seems to be one of the most interesting cards you made, allowing the player to replace used resources, however it is amusing how this card rewards a player for using scapegoat during the opponent's end phase, then using token icecream during the own turn and then normal summoning tetherwolf or aerosguin or activating aerial recharge. Tigershark is level 11. I should have made that more clear, so you only need 1 token tribute Yeah shark might be a bit OP. I think it can be fixed simply by changing it's SS condition to only the non-Tuner Synchro Monsters. That way he only gets 1 Token from his summon, and only if you use Concoruda. Dyna-Soar only protects all you MPB this turn once each. All that means is that your opponent needs 2 answers to fully stop it on the turn it's summoned, Tigershark can't stop S/T effects, and has no protection on your opponent's turn unless you have Jaculsan out at the same time. The last effect does not need the restriction clause, as Tigershark can only be SS by Synchro Summon (1st Clause on the card), so the restriction would be redundant. Rank Modulation only targets ATM are Dracossack and Phantom Fortress Enterblathnir. I do have plans for a rank 6 and a rank 4 though. Still working on 'em. Noted and changing for Emergency Reinforcements. I'm not sure I see your point. You only get the draws for the tokens you Tribute. Yeah EP Scapegoat lets you go wild next turn, but even with an extensive play you are only probably going to tribute around 4-5 tokens on a good day. But then you would take 1600-2000 damage for that draw 4-5, which if you are not careful could game you. Although, now that I think about it, that kinda promotes a "win-moar" mentality. Maybe I should instead put in a Sylvan Charity-ish Discard / Shuffle after the draw base on how many you drew? Like draw 1 = 0, 2-3 = 1, 3+ = 2? Thanks for the input! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HomoSapientissimus Posted February 13, 2015 Report Share Posted February 13, 2015 What MPBs need is something like my card Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera: Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera Monster/WIND/Machine/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1400 When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 2 "Mecha Phantom Beast Tokens" (Machine-Type/WIND/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). While you control a Token, this card's Level becomes 7. You can Tribute any number of Tokens; draw cards up to the number of Tokens you Tributed. Once per turn: You can send 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster from your Deck in face-up Defense Position, and if you do, its Level becomes 7. Call it broken and a generic Pot of Greed if you want, but the deck is so bad that this is what it needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Progenitor Posted February 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2015 You posted this months ago, and as I recall the feedback was negative. Thank you for self advertising this broken piece of crap once again on this post instead of actually offering constructive criticism and feedback. Call it broken and a generic Pot of Greed if you want, but the deck is so bad that this is what it needs. Is that why I've beaten every meta deck with them except Qli cuz I have no way over killer? Obviously you have no idea how to play them. There is a difference between bad and flawed. Please learn it before you throw words around. Now, if you would kindly, get out sir, and good day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 13, 2015 Report Share Posted February 13, 2015 HomoSapientissimus, DO NOT advertise your cards in another member's thread; especially one that's already been marked as broken by other members. I believe that I've also told you what was wrong with them, and in great detail too. Progenitor plays MPBs, so he knows how they play and what they need. Yours is something that they don't need right now; or rather, shouldn't. (P.S. You might want to check the recent card exam things) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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