Culminating in a DIVINE Monster?

[Cierfrost]

 

Fair enough Sakura. 

... evidently the death proxy is still a fusion. whoops.

[Toffee.]

Breathes Death is a Fusion.
Herpderp.

Corrodes should actually say the opponent takes 1000 damage, since I assume you want them to still be able to loose LP even if they are below 1000. Add to it, the last bit of it's text should just say "You can only use the (2) effect of [name] up to twice per turn". Makes more sense that way. Also, you might want to say it decreases all other monster's ATK/DEF, and not include itself. If onl because you dont want people to call bullshit and say that it kills itself.
Said Divine Beast should actually say something like "If this Synchro Summoned card is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon it". Yours seemis like it was missing a few words.

That aside, these looks pretty silly. But in an amusing way, because they have some partial half-stall half-beatdown idea going on.

[Cierfrost]

Oh... I thought about it for a second. I want "She Who Breathes Death" to be a fusion with that exact effect. In this way it can utilize its own effect while still being synchro fodder for "Triumph Over All" without any serious shenanigans.

 

I'm worried about Corrode because if it says "takes 1000 damage", it might break it more than it probably already is.

[Cierfrost]

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[Supreme Gamesmaster]

Er. "She Who Breathes Death" would appear to still be a Fusion Monster... that can't be Summoned except by Xyz Summon... that doesn't make any sense. You can't Summon it at all!

Even besides that, she hardly breathes death, does she? She just sends a few cards to another dimension. If she "breathes death," you'd think she'd have something to do with the Graveyard. You know - the place you send dead people.

"Sower of Eternal Bloodshed" is much better flavour-wise - forcing battle is cool and fitting - but I think you're overstating the conditions for battle there. I'm pretty sure there's a way you can phrase your effect that forces two monsters to battle no matter what. There's also a sentence that starts with "Can be sent to the graveyard from your deck that would..." that's so ungrammatical I have no idea what it's supposed to mean.

What's with the numbering on "That Which Corrodes Life?" If there are Yu-Gi-Oh! cards that have that type of numbering, I'm not aware of them. As it is, I have no idea when one might activate its effect. All I know is that it destroys itself with its own effect, rendering it kind of pointless.

I'm not sure how those three incredibly evil cards somehow combine into "Triumphant Over All." Also, you misspelled "Triumphant." Again, not sure what's going on with that numbering - is that like a, "Once per turn: select and activate one of the following effects:" type deal, or...? If this is some thing that recent cards have been doing and I'm out of the loop, sorry about that, I don't pretend to be super up-to-date, but I must admit I've never seen that before.

In general, I guess I'm just confused about the matchup between flavour and text. That, and the Fusion Xyz monster. That too.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Sorry for the move Icy; basically DIVINE stuff remains in Casual since we can't really do much with them in Advanced.

Probably should've noted this earlier.

 

That being said, Triumphant over All and She Who Breathes Death sort of violate their respective summoning conditions.

Synchros require a Tuner, which none of them are.

 

As above mentioned, it's better fit as a Fusion Monster, or a specific Effect Monster.

 

 

She Who Breathes Death should be changed to an Xyz Monster that requires Level 6 stuff, or just have it use regular Fusion Materials.

 

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As for the numbering, they're used in the OCG cards to denote certain effects; makes it a lot easier to say which effects are hard OPT instead of putting the phrase "once per turn" in front of them.

 

It'll be hard to do it in the TCG though, but yeah now you know.

[Icy]

Er. "She Who Breathes Death" would appear to still be a Fusion Monster... that can't be Summoned except by Xyz Summon... that doesn't make any sense. You can't Summon it at all!

Even besides that, she hardly breathes death, does she? She just sends a few cards to another dimension. If she "breathes death," you'd think she'd have something to do with the Graveyard. You know - the place you send dead people.

I have stated that it is a fusion monster for the sake of rulings regarding "Triumphment/Triumphment Over All". You can modify the summon type, having ranks without stating as levels is another story.

You do have a valid point regarding the flavor though. Hmm...

 

"Sower of Eternal Bloodshed" is much better flavour-wise - forcing battle is cool and fitting - but I think you're overstating the conditions for battle there. I'm pretty sure there's a way you can phrase your effect that forces two monsters to battle no matter what. There's also a sentence that starts with "Can be sent to the graveyard from your deck that would..." that's so ungrammatical I have no idea what it's supposed to mean.

Basically it can be sent to the graveyard by ANYTHING that could send a card from your deck to the graveyard. The numerous DARK millers, something like that one rock trap. etc.

 

What's with the numbering on "That Which Corrodes Life?" If there are Yu-Gi-Oh! cards that have that type of numbering, I'm not aware of them. As it is, I have no idea when one might activate its effect. All I know is that it destroys itself with its own effect, rendering it kind of pointless.

It would not destroy itself via its own effect. It has to reduce, hence why all the Horsemen have 0 ATK and DEF, so Corrodes doesnt immediately remove it from the field.

 

TriumPHANT Over All is Conquest. The videogame equivalent of the biblical horseman Death. Its there as a kind of amagalmation of all of them. Not meant to be played seriously but there if you want.

All of its effects are meant to be continuous if separate.

Sakura covers the numbering concern.

 

Sakura, there is at least a couple of Synchros that violate their own summon conditions. But fair enough. Sower could be made a tuner if thats the case, or even She.