History Maker Dragon - Fullart Orica #1 [Toyo Single]

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

1 EARTH Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters
If this card battles a monster: It inflicts no battle damage. All face-up non-EARTH monsters lose ATK equal to their ATK. Once per turn, during either player’s turn, when a card effect is activated on the field: You can tribute this card; Return that card to the bottom of its owner’s deck.

 

Ah, the end of time has come once again.

[FairGamer]

wording is bit off. I think it should be like this - If this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent takes no battle damage. All face-up non-EARTH monsters lose ATK equal to their original ATK. - rest seems fine to me.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

wording is bit off. I think it should be like this - If this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent takes no battle damage. All face-up non-EARTH monsters lose ATK equal to their original ATK. - rest seems fine to me.

Original ATK and ATK are different things :o

[FairGamer]

I know it's different, and the wording is still off. So what you want is - While this card is face-up on the field, ATK of all face-up non-Earth monsters becomes 0. I just didn't understand the effect you wanted.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

any further OCG comments will promptly be ignored, thank you~

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I know it's different, and the wording is still off. So what you want is - While this card is face-up on the field, ATK of all face-up non-Earth monsters becomes 0. I just didn't understand the effect you wanted.

Keep in mind that OCG fixes don't count as a proper review; you need to make a note on the design/play implications this has.

 

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But yeah, let's see.

 

I am assuming you wanted this card to NOT deal battle damage if it battles a monster, but if it attacks directly, regular damage applies.

Above user's wording cuts it off from dealing any damage at all.

 

Regarding second effect, I also don't get the effect you were trying to go for here. It says ATK, so that implies that whatever values a monster has at present, you subtract it. Or for that matter, just write that non-EARTH monsters have their ATKs reduced to 0. I will assume that is what you were going for here; current ATK value, not original.

 

In any case, it is pretty potent, which effectively neuters most of the Decks that exist nowadays in terms of power. IDK, maybe X-Sabers/Scraps or something can run this as an option to run over stuff that they normally can't. Out of fairness, besides Qlis (which I don't think have space to even run Synchros; even without the lists) and some other random stuff, pressed to figure out relevant Decks that can use this effectively.

 

I am a bit iffy on this card weakening up everything else on the field for the most part, even with the requirements.

 

Last effect is fine though; suppose you can use this to bounce Pendulum Scales or whatever monster or something, so they're gone for a while.

Still won't block the effect from triggering though for the most part though, but that should be obvious.

 

Material-wise, while there exists a good amount of Tuner candidates, not sure which ones would really be usable considering what exists in the gamestate at present.

 

Maybe you could switch the requirements (EARTH non-Tuners and whatever Tuner you want), but given this card already zeroes out most monsters in the game (again, going from your wording), probably better if you keep it as-is. Looking at the EARTH pool that can Synchro, most of them probably wouldn't mind either way if the requirements were switched.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

The effect of making everything to 0 is basically Catastor but applied to EARTH instead of DARK if you think about it.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

funk it bump again