Final Zero Dragon

[DuelFanta]

Hi Their i just needed some feedback on this card because i made it but im not sure what to do with it because its effect kinda goes against Traditional Yugioh and the soul way to play the game. So Let me know how you feel thanks and tell me what ya think. And you might see it in the 2099 but ill think about it. and here it is.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once per turn During either Player's turn you can Detach 1 Xyz material from this card to Double all Battle and effect damage either player takes this turn. If Zero End Dragon is Attached to this card as an Xyz material it gains the following effects;

 

1) Whenever a face up monster with 0 ATK declares an attack destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

 

2) Whichever Player's life Points Reaches 0 Wins the Duel.

 

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Tell me What you guys think :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

We don't know what this Zero End Dragon card does; without it, it's just a Rank 8 with very specific materials. With that in mind, only Deck that can probably make it is Hieratics (assuming they run Hieratic Seal of the Sun Dragon Overlord).

[DuelFanta]

Yea im going to post Zero End Dragon up soon. I just wanted see what everyone thought about the Xyz . But I guess i should have done the reverse. lol.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Well, the card can still be CnC'd, but just that its potential uses will be severely limited. But yeah, you should post the base form first. 

[Trebuchet MS]

Just gotta say that the second effect that stems off it having the base form is completely redundant, seeing that it's one of the basic rules of the game.

 

EDIT: Oops. Misread the card.

[Blake]

Just gotta say that the second effect that stems off it having the base form is completely redundant, seeing that it's one of the basic rules of the game.

the latter effect makes the one who hits 0 win

 

Not lose

[Trebuchet MS]

the latter effect makes the one who hits 0 win

 

Not lose

Wait what

 

How did I misread that badly?

[Gabriponte]

Fix OCG first.

 

Then the second effect (I don't know what do you mean) is useless, it's like saying "During your Battle Phase, this card can attack your opponent's monsters" or "During the End Phase: End your turn". When a player reachs 0 LP he loses the Duel, even without card effects.

 

Or maybe I misread the card, but with bad grammar I can't understand. (I'm from a non-english country).

 

tf

 

EDIT: I understood, then you mean "The player who reachs 0 LP wins the duel", if I'm not wrong.

 

With this card I may OTK paying all LP for Wall of Revealing Light, this card works well with Hieratic archetype. (I may Special Summon this card with Hieratic Seal of the Sun Dragon Overlord + Zero End Dragon)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

In a nutshell, if a player's LP reaches 0, they actually win the Duel as opposed to losing which normal circumstances would bring. So yes, you did read it correctly.

 

Just for the sake of cleanliness and understanding, here's a fix.
 

2 Level 8 monsters with 0 ATK and 0 DEF
Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; double any damage either player receives this turn. If this card has "Zero End Dragon" as an Xyz Material, it gains these effects. 
- When a monster with 0 ATK attacks: Destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

- When a player's LP reaches 0: They win the Duel.

 

 

Again, until Zero End Dragon is actually shown; most this card can really do is just double burn / battle damage and again, if/only if they do something like run double Hieratic Seal of the Sun Dragon or something. There are other cards that can be used, but this is basically throwing a Deck out there that can make this (if they even want to).