[Written] Black Rose Valkyrie

[Thomas★Zero]

Black Rose Valkyrie

Level 8 DARK

Fairy/Synchro/Effect

1 Tuner Monster + 1 "Black Rose" Synchro Monster

Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Synchro Summoned: Destroy all other cards on the field, then your opponent takes 400 damage for every card destroyed by this effect. Once per turn, during either players turn: You can target 1 Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; return it to the hand. The targeted card cannot activate its effects in response to this card's activation. This card cannot attack directly during the turn it was Summoned.

ATK/2800 DEF/2400

[Arimetal]

Is the destruction effect suppose to be optional?

[Thomas★Zero]

Is the destruction effect suppose to be optional?

The effect is activated when its summoned where all other cards are destroyed where this remains, though it can't make direct attacks during the turn it was summoned.

[Arimetal]

Ok, I see. Overall pretty fair card. 

 

You should say return not send.

 

Again though, pretty solid card. Not much I would change.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Any specifics you like about the card, XOXO. (I am going to be updating the section rules in a bit, but yeah AC says that you need to give some specifics)

 

1 Tuner Monster + 1 "Black Rose" Synchro Monster
Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Synchro Summoned: Destroy all other cards on the field, then your opponent takes 400 damage for every card destroyed by this effect. Once per turn, during either players turn: You can target 1 Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; return it to the hand. The targeted card cannot activate its effects in response to this card's activation. This card cannot attack directly during the turn it was Summoned.

 

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So what we have here is basically a Black Rose Dragon evolution that it sorely needed (well, and maybe the other Signer Dragons but that's another story). But yeah, unlike BRD, it's a mandatory field nuke that burns. Suppose you can just use it to finish the game if opponent overextended too much and is within kill range for burn, or just wipe out their board (and subsequently, yours), then summon another monster(s) to finish things if necessary. I will have to admit that the bounce effect is pretty nasty to an extent, especially given how SS-oriented the game has become lately and that you can't chain anything (except Notice and stuff). Admittedly, while I'd personally recommend that it be non-targeting to get over stuff like the Kozmo ships (considering presence), it's going to be too much.

 

I'd probably recommend just making the field wipe effect an optional thing.

 

Deck-wise, not really sure what can feasibly run this; I'd probably say Speedroids or something, but they'd likely want to go Clear Wing instead of Moonlight nowadays.

[Arimetal]

(Gonna say this is the main reason people don't often get CnC on solid cards, but whatever)

 

For it's summoning condition, it's pretty fair in what it does. Only black rose syncs we have are basic and moonlight. Both which aren't really being ran right now.

 

I guess it's atk is a bit low, even 2900 would be better. 

 

Also, why fairy?