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[Nw] the way blood boils


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I feel this would be better with different dimensions. Just seems like a bit too much of empty space around the bottom. Plus the lighting around her chest draws away from the focal, making said dead space even more prominent.

 

Of course, this goes with my typical disclaimer for tags. I have no idea what I am talking about, so take what I say with a grain of salt.

 

EDIT: Looking at it again, I can see that a line is drawn from the bottom right leaf to the focal, with said light supporting it. That's actually pretty funking cool. Maybe just add a tiny bit more noise around the bottom left so it doesn't feel as empty?

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I love the uneasy feeling, with "the 97°F and the white lines [...] because they distract from the focal", and that "empty space around the bottom. Plus the lighting around her chest draws away from the focal, making said dead space even more prominent."


To add such a scale was truly THE good idea that would work with all these things...


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