Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Okay, let's try this again, this time with me not being an idiot. Also, sorry these aren't visual cards, I'm on my kindle right now and my computer is out of commission until I get a new charger cord. I'd like to say I am sorry for the first time I posted these cards. Also any messages to kill myself will be ignored and yes, I am somewhat fat, and yes, I am autistic. EDIT: I included the rest of the Allies. Card Name: Ivan Braginski: The Smiling DemonRank/Level: 12 | Atribute: Water | Type: Monster | Subtype: Ritual Effect: This card can only be summoned using the Ritual Spell Card, 'The Call of General Winter. This card gains the ATK and DEF points of all the sacrificed monsters used to summon this card, combined.ATK: ????/DEF: ???? Card Name: The Call of General WinterAttribute: Spell | Spell/Trap Type: RitualEffect: When this card is on the field, you may use all the monsters on your side of the field and in your hand in order to summon 'Ivan Braginski: The Smiling Demon' on to the field. Card Name: Alfred F. Jones: The Obnoxious HeroLevel/Rank: 4 | Attribute: Earth | Type: WarriorEffect: For each turn that this monster is on the feild, This monster gains an additional 200 ATK points.ATK: 1200/DEF: 2000 Card Name: Arthur Kirkland: The Mystical GentlemanLevel/Rank: 4 | Attribute: Dark | Type: SpellcasterEffect: When this card is summoned on to the field, you may summon an additional level 4 monster either from your Hand or from your Graveyard.ATK: 1600/DEF: 1400 Card Name: Wang Yao: The Elder of DisciplineLevel/Rank: 4 | Atribute: Fire | Type: WarriorEffect: For every monster on your side of the field, this card gains an additional 500 ATK and DEF points. Whenever a monster on your side of the field is targeted, the target of the attack becomes this monster instead.ATK: 1500/DEF: 1500 Card Name: Franciss Bonnefoy: The Charming BachelorLevel/Rank: 4 | Attribute: Air | Type: WarriorEffect: This effect can be used once per turn. Choose one monster from your opponent's side of the field, until your next turn, that monster can neither attack or change modes.ATK: 500/ 2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JessicaMuddy Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Woah, no one on this forum would say anything like that. Where do you usually get comments like that from?Anyway, onto the cards. The monster is quite simple, though has the potential to be extremely powerful. I like that the Ritual Spell doesn't specify a Level the tributed monsters need to be, as I think Rituals need to be more diverse, but the Ritual Spell does say to use "all monsters on the field" for the Summon, which is a big no-no. However, I think limiting it to just your own monsters should be alright. It's a beatstick that has the potential to grow to massive amounts of ATK and DEF, so I think not giving it protection is fine. Another idea may be to allow the Ritual Spell to tribute any number of monsters you want, so you don't have to tribute every single one of your monsters. I'm sure this would have its place in one Deck or another, and working with Pre-Preperation of Rites definitely helps it. Now, an OCG fix: Ivan Braginski: The Smiling DemonYou can Ritual Summon this card using "The Call of General Winter". Must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the combined ATK and DEF of the monsters tributed for the Summon of this card, respectively. The Call of General WinterThis card is used to Ritual Summon "Ivan Braginski: The Smiling Demon". You must also tribute all monsters in your hand and that you control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Oh, Stupid, I knew something was off when I said that out loud, I meant it to be the cards in your hand and the cards you controlled, that was just bad thinking on my part. Also there is a reason why you have to sacrifice all the monsters you currently have, this card is actually based on a character from one of my favorite animes, it makes more sense if you understand who the character is. Also, what is Pre-Preparation of Rites? EDIT: never mind looked it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Oh, Stupid, I knew something was off when I said that out loud, I meant it to be the cards in your hand and the cards you controlled, that was just bad thinking on my part. Also there is a reason why you have to sacrifice all the monsters you currently have, this card is actually based on a character from one of my favorite animes, it makes more sense if you understand who the character is. Also, what is Pre-Preparation of Rites? http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Pre-Preparation_of_Rites Basically a faster way to get this card and its corresponding Ritual onto the field. ----But yeah, I know I critiqued the previous version earlier and fixed the OCG accordingly. If it is based on an anime character you like, then you may want to leave a link to said character; as it stands now, don't know which one you're talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 I thought Links weren't allowed?Anyway, the character I am referring to is one Ivan Braginski, AKA, Russia.You heard me right, Russia.He comes from the anime Hetallia which actually translates to Italy, which is whom the show mostly focuses around, then again, the show switches focus a lot from country to country, and most episodes are 5 minutes.Then again, you used a link just now so... http://hetalia.wikia.com/wiki/Russia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 I thought Links weren't allowed?Anyway, the character I am referring to is one Ivan Braginski, AKA, Russia.You heard me right, Russia.He comes from the anime Hetallia which actually translates to Italy, which is whom the show mostly focuses around, then again, the show switches focus a lot from country to country, and most episodes are 5 minutes.Then again, you used a link just now so... http://hetalia.wikia.com/wiki/Russia Links are forbidden if they're leading to someone's personal site or advertising another product. If it's linking to where you found a picture, information about a card (i.e. like what I did to show you Pre-Prep) or other sources of information, it's fine. In a nutshell, Wikia links and stuff are fine. ----Also another thing; Ritual Monsters and their corresponding Ritual are classed as a single card and can be posted in the Singles section. Basically, it does us no good if you only provide one card, but not the other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Really? Huh...I actually Didn't know that...So do I copy and paste this into the right section or...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 I can change this topic's name and add more hetallia cards if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 I moved it for you, but can put it back in the Multiples area if you plan on adding more soon (and looks like you are). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Card Name: Alfred F. Jones: The Obnoxious HeroLevel/Rank: 4 | Attribute: Earth | Type: WarriorEffect: For each turn that this monster is on the feild, This monster gains an additional 200 ATK points.ATK: 1200/DEF: 2000 Reference: http://hetalia.wikia.com/wiki/America Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Oh, yah, I decided this would be a Multiples. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 12, 2016 Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 For future reference, make the additions to the main post so it's easier to read. (Also a note about the 12-hour bump period in Custom Cards between your own posts; if you need to make updates before then, simply make the changes and let us know later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mochi Posted November 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2016 Oh, ok, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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