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5 level 10 monsters

 

You can also Xyz Summon this card using a "Wargreymon" and "Metalgarurumon" you control as the Xyz Material. This card's Xyz Summon cannot be negated. When Xyz Summoned, detach all xyz material. Send 15 card from your opponent deck to graveyard. Banish this card during the end phase

 

my 1st card in this forum , how about the effect of wargreymon and metalgarurumon? welcome to commend and give idea !!

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I can edit effect for you:

 

5 Level 10 Monster

You can also Xyz Summon this card using a "Wargreymon" and "Metalgarurumon" you control as the Xyz Material. Unaffected by other cards' effects. When this card is Xyz Summoned; detach any number of Xyz material from this card, send same number of cards from  top of opponent's deck to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect.

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I can edit effect for you:

 

5 Level 10 Monster

You can also Xyz Summon this card using a "Wargreymon" and "Metalgarurumon" you control as the Xyz Material. Unaffected by other cards' effects. When this card is Xyz Summoned; detach any number of Xyz material from this card, send same number of cards from  top of opponent's deck to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect.

 

Hey buddy thanks for reviewing my card and i love your idea! hmm...my opinion is that the effect was less efficiency.... since maximum potential just milling 5 cards. people might rather choose to use needle worm because it have similar effect.. if the card would stay on the field to attack for next turn.. i might need to create another magic card to modified its attack. ( original attack was ? ). no offend buddy just kinda different from what my idea previously on this card.

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5 Level 10 Monster

You can also Xyz Summon this card using a "Wargreymon" and "Metalgarurumon" you control as the Xyz Material. Unaffected by other cards' effects. When this card is Xyz Summoned; detach any number of Xyz material from this card, send same number of cards from  top of opponent's deck to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect.

 

OCG fixes do NOT count as a proper review, nor do any changes to the effect without explanation. In this case, you have done the latter. Why have you made these changes?

 

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@TC: I'll give a review based on what you have, and not what this user has given. 

 

First of all, we don't have Wargreymon and/or Metalgarurumon, so how do we know what those two do? Secondly, its requirements are almost NEVER going to be met regularly, and while it is a target for Astral Force off Felgrand, why would you do this? Yeah, milling 15 cards hurts, but against a lot of Decks nowadays, you're just helping them do more in the long run. Granted, this will kill off a lot of other Decks that aren't BAs or use the Graveyard heavily for their plays, but otherwise milling isn't a great strategy (though I suppose in this case, it will hit more things that I'm giving credit for). 

 

Right, and people don't even bother with Needle Worm nowadays; as I mentioned before, milling is actually beneficial nowadays due to Graveyard strategies. 

 

In all, we have no idea of how easy/difficult the alternative summoning method is, nor is this card going to do much for its summon requirements otherwise. I also don't know why this has ? ATK. 

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OCG fixes do NOT count as a proper review, nor do any changes to the effect without explanation. In this case, you have done the latter. Why have you made these changes?

 

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@TC: I'll give a review based on what you have, and not what this user has given. 

 

First of all, we don't have Wargreymon and/or Metalgarurumon, so how do we know what those two do? Secondly, its requirements are almost NEVER going to be met regularly, and while it is a target for Astral Force off Felgrand, why would you do this? Yeah, milling 15 cards hurts, but against a lot of Decks nowadays, you're just helping them do more in the long run. Granted, this will kill off a lot of other Decks that aren't BAs or use the Graveyard heavily for their plays, but otherwise milling isn't a great strategy (though I suppose in this case, it will hit more things that I'm giving credit for). 

 

Right, and people don't even bother with Needle Worm nowadays; as I mentioned before, milling is actually beneficial nowadays due to Graveyard strategies. 

 

In all, we have no idea of how easy/difficult the alternative summoning method is, nor is this card going to do much for its summon requirements otherwise. I also don't know why this has ? ATK. 

 

hey bro , thanks for reviewing my card. here is my update.. hope it will be more clear about how useful this card would be..

 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=I+am+alpha+and+omega&cardtype=Xyz&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=10&rarity=Ultimate+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F848107%2F512755315.jpg&circulation=1st+edition&set1=john&set2=0001&inset=on&type=Warrior&carddescription=5+level+10+monsters%0D%0AYou+can+also+Xyz+Summon+this+card+using+a+%22Wargreymon%22+and+%22Metalgarurumon%22+you+control+as+the+Xyz+Material.+Unaffected+by+other+cards%27+effects.+During+your+main+phase+1%3A+you+may+detach+all+Xyz+material+from+this+card+(minimum+2)%2C+banish+top+10+card+from+your+opponent+deck+You+cannot+conduct+your+Battle+Phase+the+turn+you+activate+this+card+effect.&atk=3000&def=3500&creator=JOHN&year=2017&serial=91001026

I am alpha and omega

5 level 10 monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card using a "Wargreymon" and "Metalgarurumon" you control as the Xyz Material. Unaffected by other cards' effects. During your main phase 1: you may detach all Xyz material from this card (minimum 2), banish top 10 card from your opponent deck  You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card effect.

 

The missing card for the requirement.

 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Wargreymon&cardtype=Ritual&subtype=normal&attribute=Fire&level=8&rarity=Secret+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fstatic.zerochan.net%2FWarGreymon.full.1961459.jpg&circulation=&set1=john&set2=0002&inset=on&type=Dragon&carddescription=Must+be+Ritual+Summon+with+%22Tai+Yagami%22.%0D%0A(1)+If+this+card+is+discard+or+send+from+your+hand+to+graveyard%3A+add+1+%22Tai+Yagami%22+from+your+deck+to+your+hand.%0D%0A(2)+Each+time+this+attacking+card+destroys+an+opponent%27s+monster+by+battle%3A+banish+1+random+monster+card+from+your+opponent+deck.&atk=2500&def=3000&creator=john&year=2017&serial=44162736

Wargreymon

Must be Ritual Summon with "Tai Yagami".
(1) If this card is discard or send from your hand to graveyard: add 1 "Tai Yagami" from your deck to your hand.
(2) Each time this attacking card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: banish 1 random monster card from your opponent deck.
 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Tai+Yagami&cardtype=Spell&trapmagictype=Ritual&rarity=Secret+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F848107%2F790973744.jpg&circulation=&set1=john&set2=0004&inset=on&carddescription=This+card+is+used+to+Ritual+Summon+%22Wargreymon%22.+You+must+also+Tribute+monsters+from+your+hand+or+field+whose+total+Levels+equal+8+or+more.+During+your+end+phase%2C+you+may+banish+this+card+from+your+graveyard.+Add+1+%22Wargreymon%22+from+your+deck+to+your+hand.&creator=&year=2017&serial=39968430

Tai Yagami

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Wargreymon". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 8 or more. During your end phase, you may banish this card from your graveyard. Add 1 "Wargreymon" from your deck to your hand.

 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Metalgarurumon&cardtype=Ritual&subtype=normal&attribute=Water&level=8&rarity=Secret+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fwikimon.net%2Fimages%2F7%2F7d%2FMetalgarurumon_ex2_collectors.jpg&circulation=&set1=john&set2=0003&inset=on&type=Beast&carddescription=Must+be+Ritual+Summon+with+%22Matt+Ishida%22.%0D%0A(1)+If+this+card+is+discard+or+send+from+your+hand+to+graveyard%3A+add+1+%22Matt+Ishida%22+from+your+deck+to+your+hand.%0D%0A(2)+Each+time+this+attacking+card+destroys+an+opponent%27s+monster+by+battle%3A+send+1+random+spell+or+trap+card+from+your+opponent+deck+to+the+graveyard.&atk=2400&def=2800&creator=john&year=2017&serial=11241991

Metalgarurumon

Must be Ritual Summon with "Matt Ishida".
(1) If this card is discard or send from your hand to graveyard: add 1 "Matt Ishida" from your deck to your hand.
(2) Each time this attacking card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: banish 1 random spell or trap card from your opponent deck.
 

Matt Ishida

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Metalgarurumon". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 8 or more. During your end phase, you may banish this card from your graveyard. Add 1 "Metalgarurumon" from your deck to your hand.

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Next time, add the cards to the main posts so it's easier to see. You also need to reload the cards again, as the stats for the Rituals are missing. 

alright sir. just updated all the card with proper effect / words error. feel free to recommend my card. 

 

1 i am alpha and omega ( effect no longer send to graveyard. its is now banish and require minimum of 2 xyz material. maybe use cards like overlay regen to re-active the banish effect. ) 

2 wargreymon ( effect banish instead being send to graveyard  update atk point)

3 metalgarurumon ( effect banish instead being send to graveyard )

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