nedxo Posted February 21, 2020 Report Share Posted February 21, 2020 Just made a custom card and poorly drew the art for it, based on Shining Friendship and Poki Draco. Like they are friends and S. Friendship watches over P. Draco. In the card art poki was just about to be bullied or something by a high level dragon but shining friendship came to the rescue and scared of the big dragon while restoring the lost faith of poki. Trap card (maybe continuous) Before damage calculation, if 1 of your monsters with 1000 or less ATK would get destroyed in a battle with a monster that has at least ATK equal or higher than double the ATK of your monster, return your monster to your hand and banish the opponent's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted February 21, 2020 Report Share Posted February 21, 2020 Let me tell you this is cute as hell, and please don't say you did poorly, what you did was your best, and I like it. By the way, I own a small collection of Poki Dracos and even made a card for a bingo-like game in japanese some years ago By the way, I personally think the effect is relatively mild, so I'd say it's fine if you make it a Continuous Trap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nedxo Posted February 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2020 7 hours ago, Rayfield Shade said: Let me tell you this is cute as hell, and please don't say you did poorly, what you did was your best, and I like it. By the way, I own a small collection of Poki Dracos and even made a card for a bingo-like game in japanese some years ago By the way, I personally think the effect is relatively mild, so I'd say it's fine if you make it a Continuous Trap. First of all, thank you for the feedback! by poorly drawn I mean drawn in 5 min rush, It really wasn't my best at all but I had fun doing it. ( i first drew it on notebook then took a pic and edited in PS. thank you for the compliment tho, it was really drawn from heart uwu) I love such cute cards and I love that you also love Poki Draco! I also have 3 of those funkers and use them to bring out dark magician/girl knights :))) And yes, the effect is nothing in modern dueling so I thought of editing it. since it restores Poki's faith after all now it gains courage once back on the field! (also did you notice that S.Friendship acts as a peacemaker here as it says on the actual card's description??) I think continious is sure thing for this trap and maybecould even be competitive?! I also made a slight different version in which the effect is more focused on the fact that poki is dissapointed in himself for being beaten by another dragon: if 1 of your monsters with 1000 ATK or less would get destroyed in a battle with a monster of the same type that has double the ATK of your monster or more, return your monster to your hand and banish the opponent's. When you summon it, the returned monster gains the ATK of the banished monster during damage calculation in a battle. you deffinitely cheered me up with your comment, I didn't expect such support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted February 22, 2020 Report Share Posted February 22, 2020 Bit rough clean up: Once per turn, When a monster you control with 1000 or less ATK would be destroyed by battle with monster that either has the same type as your battling monster OR it has ATK equal or higher than double the amount of your battling monster ATK: note both battling monsters name; You can return your battling monster to your hand revealed and then Banish the opponent battling Monster. Keep the card(s) revealed while this card is face-up. Whenever you summon a monster(s) that revealed in your hand by this card effect, that monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of monster that banished by this card effect which has its name noted at the same time as your summoned monster Its very situational, but the idea lorewise is quite cute. The last part is a bit too complicated even i not really sure on the clean up since it require to combine some of rarely used irl wording just to deliver its intended effect clearly. At least i can ease up the situational trait a bit by separate the activation on the battle effect into double trigger (rival trigger via type and bully trigger with monster with big attack). At least with rival trigger you can combo it with DNA Surgery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted February 22, 2020 Report Share Posted February 22, 2020 Wow, I'm glad you feel that way . I have a weakness for cards that have an story behind, so combine that with the fact that it's a touching card with a nice name, a personal drawing, an anti-bullying message and Poki Draco and you got a bomb, haha. You say that I cheered you up, but seeing this also encourages me to go forth in an idea I've been pondering of making an archetype with my own drawings, so we're even. I'm in the middle of a project that still should take a while, but when I'm done, I really want to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nedxo Posted February 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2020 I'm lookin forward to see it, Rayfield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nedxo Posted February 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2020 10 hours ago, Dr. Jolly Glot the III said: Bit rough clean up: Once per turn, When a monster you control with 1000 or less ATK would be destroyed by battle with monster that either has the same type as your battling monster OR it has ATK equal or higher than double the amount of your battling monster ATK: note both battling monsters name; You can return your battling monster to your hand revealed and then Banish the opponent battling Monster. Keep the card(s) revealed while this card is face-up. Whenever you summon a monster(s) that revealed in your hand by this card effect, that monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of monster that banished by this card effect which has its name noted at the same time as your summoned monster Its very situational, but the idea lorewise is quite cute. The last part is a bit too complicated even i not really sure on the clean up since it require to combine some of rarely used irl wording just to deliver its intended effect clearly. At least i can ease up the situational trait a bit by separate the activation on the battle effect into double trigger (rival trigger via type and bully trigger with monster with big attack). At least with rival trigger you can combo it with DNA Surgery Yeah thanks for the clean-up, I tried making the text as small as possible, but yours is more clear of the idea XD although I didn't want it to look like modern cards with paragraphs on them Not that situational - It becomes a great card if you use it in a deck with cute low ATK cards like poki or Petit Angel... With some more support cards I could try to make it a real competitive deck xD Maybe the next card of this kind should be a defender from effects. It could be a retrained version of Shining Friendship. It could be both retrained versions of Shining Friendship and Petit Angel powering up the field once they're together like those swamp brothers Lots and lots of ideas.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted February 23, 2020 Report Share Posted February 23, 2020 14 hours ago, nedxo said: I'm lookin forward to see it, Rayfield Got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 23, 2020 Report Share Posted February 23, 2020 I find the concept to be a super cool one. Non-targeting banishing is a pretty good form of removal, and not being a once per turn deal is great. Though being battle reliant and restricted to the ATK parameters of both sides keeps it casual fun without making it necessarily bad. Best thing is that you get to keep your own monsters, so maybe it is for once potentially a good excuse for a Pendulum engine that would aim to consistently bring back non-Pendulum monsters from hand. A few things bring it down though. It not being searchable/recyclable, and the sheer amount of battle damage it'll cause to run such strategy. One could otherwise very well design a build with a monster line up that takes advantage of it. Huh... I might need to come back and think of this more later. Something tells me the OP is not up to date with updates made along the thread, and also I can't actually think of currently existing in-game monsters that could combo with it beyond a Puddingcess... but I saw the "before damage calc" so I'm gonna consider if it even works.... Still I'm on board with the concept. I saw a glimpse of a clause down there that boosts your monster to equal the banished one next time you put him back on the field? that sounds a bit wordy to get through. Finally, the art. That's lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami Kiniko Posted February 23, 2020 Report Share Posted February 23, 2020 I may put it in my YGO: CM FD (Yugioh Card Maker Fan Dual) App Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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