Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 How's 1400 ATK for ''Zombie Warrior''? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Elsandero, if the ATK stacks, then you have to explain it in the effect in some way, Curse of Vampire's: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Curse_of_Vampire effect says the same thing but it's ATK resets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Shall I add then that ''Each time this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by it's effect, increase this cards ATK by 300. '' I need wording help with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 ''Each time this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by it's effect, increase it's ATK by 300 more than it's ATK was when it was last sent to the graveyard." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I need help with this card. It's called "Invisible Air, Barrier of the Wind King" it is a Continous Trap that is equipped to Saber. "This card can only be equipped to a "Saber - The Noble Servant" on your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, select one card on the field, the selected card is then destroyed." I feel like it needs something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 OK, the ones that I had to fix NB! I changed ''Zombie Warrior's'' effect and ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I think they are better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 What's the problem Sushi? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I need help with this card. It's called "Invisible Air' date=' Barrier of the Wind King" it is a Continous Trap that is equipped to Saber. "This card can only be equipped to a "Saber - The Noble Servant" on your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, select one card on the field, the selected card is then destroyed." I feel like it needs something else.[/quote'] That, oh and how is my Dark Saber card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Sushi, can you post the effect of that monster card, then I could edit it to be more realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I've fixed Dark Saber myself. "This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Saber - The Noble Servant" on your side of the field. This card is not destroyed by battle if this card is equipped with a "Dark Excalibur, The Sword Of Worlds End". By removing as many "Servant-Type" monsters on your side of the field from play, increase this card's ATK by 600 for each card removed from play by this card's effect until the end of your opponent's next turn. This effect can only be used during your turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Dark Saber - The Evil ServantThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 ''Saber - The Noble Servant'' on your side of the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if equipped with ''Dark Excalibur, The Sword of Worlds End'' (damage calculated normally). By removing an number of Servant-Type monsters on your side of the field from play. Increase this cards ATK by 600 for each Servant-Type monsters removed from play by this cards effect''. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Overall though. Whatcha think? I haven't decided what Dark Excalibur itself will do though. But this is it's picture. However the normal Excalibur has this effect."This card can only be equipped to a "Saber - The Noble Servant" on your side of the field. A monster equip with this card that battles with another monster during the Damage Step increases it's ATK by half of the opponent monster's ATK untill the end of the Damage Step." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Maybe change the ATK gaining to 300 or 400, If your remove 3 Servant-Type Monsters from play, it automatically gains +1800 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Only problem is. Almost all the Servants are above 6 Stars. So that is why her ATK boost is higher. For example. Archer and Rider are 8 Stars. Therefore she only gets a 1200 ATK boost. So if I gave her a 400 ATK boost per Servant then she would only gain an extra 800 by the time you've tributed 4 monsters. Get it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 oh, then it's AWESOME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I'm still unsure for Archer's ability though. I came up with a really silly effect and I need something better. This was the effect I came up with originally. "When this card attacks, you may Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field, this card may then attack your opponent's life points directly." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 ''By tributing 1 monster on your side of the field, this card can attack twice this battle phase''. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Well you see Archer is a long ranged attack type of person. That's why I thought of the direct attack part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 yeah, maybe tribute 1 monster and discard 1 card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 I would all academy opinions on this card (especially Soul' date=' GK and STL). Is this card overpowered in anyway? If so, how could it be changed to become less overpowering. Also, if you see anything wrong with the card itself (pic quality, spelling, grammar, capitalization etc.), let me know so that I can edit it. Thank You: If you can't read the effect, here it is:This card may only be activated from the Graveyard during your Main Phase. By removing this card from play, you may activate 1 of the following effects:1- You may return 1 monster from your Graveyard to your hand (if you choose a Fusion monster, that monster returns to your Fusion Deck).2- You may activate 1 Spell or Trap card from your Graveyard (regardless of field conditions). Remove from play the card you activated with this card's effect.You don't need to include that bit about the Fusion Monsters, as its implied they go to the Fusion Deck. I would take out the Spell Cards from the second effect because all we'd have here is another Diamond Dude. "By removing from play this card while it's in your Graveyard, select and activate 1 of the following effects:-Add 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard to your hand. -Remove from play 1 Normal Trap Card in your Graveyard. Then, If the timing of the activation of the Trap Card is correct, activate its effect. Kaze, it's Regenerating ZombieI was thinking that once it's destroyed at 1300, it comes back with 1600 and so on and so on Zombie Spellcaster - Will do Zombie Warrior - What should I change then? Sorry about the name mix-up. No, I don't think he should get 300 more ATK attack added on each turn. Just that 1 bonus of 300 would do. I'm not sure how you should change Zombi Warrior. I guess just lowering his ATK to 1400 or less would work. I need help with this card. It's called "Invisible Air, Barrier of the Wind King" it is a Continous Trap that is equipped to Saber. "This card can only be equipped to a "Saber - The Noble Servant" on your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, select one card on the field, the selected card is then destroyed." I feel like it needs something else. Ok, a mistake in your last sentence. I think its effect should only activate if its destroyed while an Equip Card. Not only that, but destroying 1 card while the equip card itself doesn't have to be "destroyed" is a little bit much. I would either limit it to monsters or spell/traps."Equip only to a "Saber - The Noble Servant" you control. When this face-up card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destry 1 monster on the field. Then, if the destroyed monster was a Servent-Type monster, draw 1 card." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Er...it only activates it's effect when it's destroyed. I also added that on the card your opponent draws a card afterwards. Take a look at the whole lot in Pop Culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Er...it only activates it's effect when it's destroyed. I also added that on the card your opponent draws a card afterwards. Take a look at the whole lot in Pop Culture.Sorry I couldn't help. I'll check them out later, I have more threads I need to visit first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 19, 2007 Report Share Posted August 19, 2007 Well can you at least help me with that trap card I asked for help with yesterday. One that can go with the description of the Phantasm. "By using her blood as a material component, Rider is able to create a crimson dome-shaped barricade around her foes. Victims trapped within this enclosure are dissolved into a slurry of blood and organic ooze, which is later absorbed by Rider as Mana. Although such a Noble Phantasm is effective at cutting off escape routes for fleeing enemies, its primary function is the accumulation of Mana. Use of this Noble Phantasm damages the Mana circulation of an area, limiting its usage in a single area." EDIT: Oh and look at this horrible edit I did to try and recreate a Token, although it seems Tokens don't have any Attribute or Stars on them, oh well. And the Star/Attribute thingy still has some yellow around it from editing it off a Normal Monster, so yeah it's a really crap and quick edit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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