ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Personally I think your duel length is just fine, I did notice chap 11 a little bit shorter than it should have been though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Just caught up with all chapters. Very good, very interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 chap 16 is great. 8.95/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I tried posting Chapter 16' date=' but for some reason it didn't post right. Maybe it's because I ran out of characters or something. That sucks because I wrote a very good chapter, too. I'll post it on my next part of my fan-fic post. The link for Part 2 of my fan-fic is: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-90401-post-1501474.htmlpid1501474[/quote']Well, I tried making another place to put my fan-fic, but Umbra is all like "Keep all your chapters in one thread. Locked.". I don't mean any offense to you, Umbra, I know your just doing your job, but I can't make any more fan-fic because I ran out of characters on my thread or something. I don't know how I'll continue my Fan-fic. Any ideas, anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 you need any more new characters/decks/cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 you need any more new characters/decks/cards? Not entirely what I was asking for in my previous post, but I probably will. Why'd you ask? I meant that I can't continue my fan-fic because, when I try to put the next chapter into the post, only part of it gets written. I have quite a few more ideas left in my head, but I could always use some filler duels to stretch out the fan fic and keep the storyline chapters from getting absolutely huge. So thanks for your offer ragnarok1945.Anyway, if you want, if you post a character, please use this format:Name:Age:Gender:Appearance (Not necessary unless the boy looks like a girl, or the girl looks like a boy, or if appearance is significant):Background (isn't really necessary, but it stretches out a Chapter some):Personality: Characters you make will most likely only be minor characters, though, Ragnarok. But trust me, I have some a cool plot line in my head. But I just need to figure out how I will post future chapters without them getting locked on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 *shrugs* I might. Was always interested into seeing how machine decks can now work, but most fics I've seen people didn't use Cyber Dragon. Cyber Twin, Cyber End, or Chimera Overtech because they all said was too broken and as a result they were all given crap decks. You got any ideas for a good machine deck yet to come? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 You can use a Final Countown Deck too ^^ I just love Final Countdown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 does that actually work? Most duels nowadays don't even make it past the 10 turn mark, much less 20 (or 19 if you're going to use Pyro Clock of Destiny) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Or you can use someone elses cards they created on the forum for your Fan Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Or you can use someone elses cards they created on the forum for your Fan Fic. Wait, what was that? It sounded like you said something involving using cards that people post on this thread or something like that, but no one has yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 basically just go to the realistic cards section and look up all the cards created there. See which ones fit your fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Yeah, what ragnarok1945 said or you can go to the Written Card section of the forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 *shrugs* I might. Was always interested into seeing how machine decks can now work' date=' but most fics I've seen people didn't use Cyber Dragon. Cyber Twin, Cyber End, or Chimera Overtech because they all said was too broken and as a result they were all given crap decks. You got any ideas for a good machine deck yet to come?[/quote'] I got 2:1. Gadget deck with a Cyber Dragon and Overload Fusion thrown in to create another possible OTK.2. Ancient Gear deck with a Cyber Dragon, Future Fusion, and Overload Fusion thrown in for multiple OTK possibilities. Maybe even with Jinzo - Returners and Jinzos thrown in for 1 MORE OTK possibility. Also, thanks for the tip about the Realistic cards, Ragnarok and Haou. Also, LarryCotter, I'll have to think about Final Countdown. Most of my duels don't last that long, maybe 15 turns at the most, I really don't keep track of turns gone by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 well, it's not that OTK are too hard to pull off, but don't do that for every duel. Makes your opponent look utterly weak and useless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I was just making some good machine deck ideas is all. Also, I forgot to mention VWXYZ cards. They may not be good, but they are fun. Plus, John won't be using the OTKs. John WILL lose in the fan-fic at least once (otherwise he would have a way too good win percentage), but not necessarily to an OTK. I'll try my best to be sure that John isn't as much of a "canon sue" as Jaden, if John is/will be one at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I have rarely seen fics use the versatility of VWXYZ, most just use the XYZ dragon cannon because its effect suits them just fine, and 200 atk difference isn't that great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I'll probably have the duelist get out VWXYZ anyway just because it is huge. But we'll see what happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 really? I thought it's only slightly bigger than XYZ, which wasn't that big Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 VWXYZ has 3000 ATK points. That's pretty big. XYZ is 2800 ATK. Plus, VWXYZ can do all sorts of crazy stuff that is sometimes very helpful. One such is changing a Marshmallon to Attack Position. XYZ would simply blast through it at the cost of a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 you can do that with a simple Stop Defense anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Yeah. Or Card Rotator. But, plus, you said you haven't seen VWXYZ in many fan-fics. I myself want to see what V-Z can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 that'd be good. I'll look forward for the next chapter then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 I never said it was in the next chapter. I just happened to bring up VWXYZ decks being fun and then you started talking about how many people use XYZ, and then I said how someone will use VWXYZ in a duel. Bad news is that I can't even post Chapter 16 in my thread. When I tried adding it onto the first post (where are my other Chapters are), it wasn't finished. I must've ran out of space in my first post. I don't know what I can do to post the others! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 can't you just edit your other posts and insert the chaps there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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