Death Satan The Hell Lord

[Eternal_Sleepy]

[-Berserker-]

Very bad OCG, guy. Try to read effects of other cards to learn it.

[Sander]

The fact that you just made Satan look bad makes me want to punch you.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Very Christmasy. XD

 

Can you post the card's effect? It's rather small, thanks. =P

[Sleepy]

first: God is not a real Type... I suggest Dragon, Pyro or Fiend

Second: I don't understand the effect very well ^-^" sorry

 

what I think could work ^-^" but not sure:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro, Ritual, Efect or Normal Monster).This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATKs of the Tributed monsters. This card cannot declare an attack unless you discard 3 cards from your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to make this card attack directly this turn.

[Spire]

OCG errors:

 

life point = Life Points

 

Make it a real type, i'd say Dragon or Fiend

[~ Chidori-Kun]

What does the ATK =?

[Last Wish]

first: God is not a real Type... I suggest Dragon' date=' [b']Pyro[/b] or Fiend

Second: I don't understand the effect very well ^-^" sorry

 

what I think could work ^-^" but not sure:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro, Ritual, Efect or Normal Monster).This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATKs of the Tributed monsters. This card cannot declare an attack unless you discard 3 cards from your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to make this card attack directly this turn.

 

Thnx for the effect. But i would suggest fiend, Pyro, or beast. It looks nothing of a dragon. I really do not want to comment on this card because im afraid i'll blurt out something very negative.

[Force_Flex]

first: God is not a real Type... I suggest Dragon' date=' [b']Pyro[/b] or Fiend

Second: I don't understand the effect very well ^-^" sorry

 

what I think could work ^-^" but not sure:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro, Ritual, Efect or Normal Monster).This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATKs of the Tributed monsters. This card cannot declare an attack unless you discard 3 cards from your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to make this card attack directly this turn.

 

Thnx for the effect. But i would suggest fiend, Pyro, or beast. It looks nothing of a dragon. I really do not want to comment on this card because im afraid i'll blurt out something very negative.

FINNALY!!!! someone with self control!!!! ive been standing up for people who have to take online abuse and FINNALY!!! self control!

like the others it needs some ocg and uh... post the effect...

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The fact that you just made Satan look bad makes me want to punch you.

why? are you satinist?

[Lord Smeagle]

This card fails in so many ways...the OCG is bad, the name is ridiculous, the concept is unoriginal and the effect is overpowered. Fail x2/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro' date=' Ritual, Effect or Normal Monster)[/b'].This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. You must discard 3 cards from your hand to attack with this card. During each of your Battle Phases, you can pay 1000 Life Points to attack your opponent directly with this card.

 

Fixed, except for the part in bold & italic. That, I'm unsure how to reword.

[Eternal_Sleepy]

What is OCG?

[Last Wish]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro' date=' Ritual, Effect or Normal Monster)[/b'].This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. You must discard 3 cards from your hand to attack with this card. During each of your Battle Phases, you can pay 1000 Life Points to attack your opponent directly with this card.

 

Fixed, except for the part in bold & italic. That, I'm unsure how to reword.

 

That part in Bold i unneeded so yea, just get rid of it.

[Professor Cobra]

Change to may to can, Life Points, This card cannot be Summoned except by, shorten the effect. Lower Level to 10, ATK to 4000, DEF to 0. 1/10

[Seta]

Official

Card

Grammar

 

Like this - don't state normal summoned, state Normal Summoned.

 

Same thing goes with many other things.

 

Start by checking the OCG thread.

 

- GD

[Sleepy]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fusion Monster or 2 different Types of monsters (Synchro' date=' Ritual, Effect or Normal Monster)[/b'].This card cannot be targeted by card effects.This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. You must discard 3 cards from your hand to attack with this card. During each of your Battle Phases, you can pay 1000 Life Points to attack your opponent directly with this card.

 

Fixed, except for the part in bold & italic. That, I'm unsure how to reword.

 

That part in Bold i unneeded so yea, just get rid of it.

 

is not unneeded because if you take that out... Types is : zombie, Spellcaster, dragon, etc. .... not Synchro, Ritual, Effect, or normal monster .............thats why I wrote it ^-^"