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Seducing Nurse- Trap Monster PG-13 pic- FIXED


Future L

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Not commenting on the sheer sexiness of the picture would be a SIN!!!

 

...*cough* ahem... Okay now, let's see...:

 

Name: (This has absolutely no impact on your score, but maybe "Seductive Nurse" would make a little more sense... I have not a crumb of precedence on this, just go with what you think is right.)

 

Errors: (I do agree with DeMeNTeD that the grammar is solid, but errors include spacing between "a" and "Trap" and spacing between "/" and "DEF" should be eliminated. 'nuff said...)

 

Overall: 9.75/10 (An interestingly nice card. My overall suggestion is to continue the good work but look out for that extra spacebar press. The picture is definitely hot, good find!)

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I like all the people that said the OCG was all correct. I must have missed the point in time where "Spellcaser" became a Type.

 

It'll keep opponents staring at the picture, but the effect is alright. It's good for stalling out in a Spellcaster Deck, since you need to have one face-up for Secret Village. So, anything that can keep a Spellcaster alive longer is good.

 

1500/1500 isn't much for a token, so it's only use is Defense. If I want Defense, I'll use Metal Reflect Slime. He's pretty PG-13, I mean he's basically metallized... er.. yeah.

 

Decent utility card for Spellcaster Decks.

 

7/10.

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Skyson: Dammit! Another damned oversight on my part @_@; Good find...that does go to show that alot of people will overlook even the smallest details.

As for Future L: I see you changed the name. Once again you didn't actually HAVE to change it, since I don't have precedence over the chosen name of a card unless there were spelling, punctual, or grammatical errors. Even so, I do like that you gave my advice thought.

 

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Now let me get back to my staring...

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