xColdXandXDarkx Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Well I have two actually. Suggestions are greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 they are interesting and have some minor errors. the second one is a bit op'ed. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xColdXandXDarkx Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Well any suggestions? I guess a 7/10 isn't bad for my first card I made... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 TOO MUCH OCG ERRORS FOR ME!!! And overpowered slightly. 5/10 because you are new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 I also think that these cards must have an 7/10, legendhiro. The cards have text errors and some details on the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 well first, try to stay clear of original monster types. people don't like those. make him "Dark Lord - Harbinger of Chaos" instead and make him a fiend. the divine attribute is okay since there is a divine attribute monster now in the OCG that can be used in a duel. give his first effect more of a cost, like one spell card. and make his second effect only if your life points are higher than your opponent's or if your opponent's are higher than yours. one or the other. or have it be that its attack becomes the difference between the life points at the moment that he is summoned, but then they stay there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xColdXandXDarkx Posted January 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Suggestions? I don't know what else to change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 plus you should use photoshop or such to edit text out of your images, and you need to put a link to the pic you used or at least credit the artist or something. and read through the ocg thread. it really does help, believe me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky 13 Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Harbinger of Chaos should be easier to use since he is almost like The Agent of Force - Mars. Big Bang Magician looks like a lot of fun. With Second Coin Toss it could possibly be an OTK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Needs some Image Credit Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 the ATK on the second card should be "?"if X000 is the ATK and X is the difference of life points... I don't think you mean that 2000 Life Points Differense means = X000 = 2000000 just a suggestion... it should be "?" ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlojozel Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 the ATK on the second card should be "?"if X000 is the ATK and X is the difference of life points... I don't think you mean that 2000 Life Points Differense means = X000 = 2000000 just a suggestion... it should be "?" ^-^" i dun think Chaos-Lord is accepted as a card type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Please provide image credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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