Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 This is my dragon... 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WIND monstersOnce per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand and pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 card on the field. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the Type of the destroyed card: Monster Card- Your opponent randomly discards 1 card. Spell Card- draw 1 card. Trap Card- Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. [spoiler=IMG Credit] http://media.photobucket.com/image/green%20dragon/babyred_75/4252725635.jpg?o=261 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 Major OCG failures. It's overpowered for starters... 2 cards each turn... No cost... UnbbalancedAnd it's 3200 ATK freak... Try making it's effect more reasonable. 5/10. Like the art - it's wickedly awesome (however, you take no credit for that). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 what are the major OCG failures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMOTSS Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 wayyyyyyyy tooo overpowered like hardcore5/10 try lowering the attack a buttload and having to have a cost for its effect to activate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Golden Chaos Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I like the image and the primary effect.However, the list is just too unwanted and 3200 is BIG.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 i will work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WIND monstersOnce per turn(don't need the comma) during your Main Phase 1, you can select up to 2 face-down cards on your opponent's side of the field and destroy them. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the Type of the card: Normal Monster- Destroy 1 face-up monster on the field. Effect Monster- Destroy 1 face-down monster on the field. Spell Card- Destroy 1 Trap Card on the field. Trap Card- Destroy 1 Spell Card on the field. Fusion- Destroy 1 Synchro Monster on the field. Synchro- Destroy 1 Fusion Monster on the field. the parts that are not extra black or don't have any change.. are the ones that don't have any errors...the all the above I agree..... OVERPOWERED... each turn you get to destroy 2 cards and depending on the type you get to destroy more cards....and you get to choose.WOW!!!and 3200 ATK ... is not that hard to match the conditions you stated...and there's an extra error.... you don't have to press "ENTER" everytime you write one of its effects.. that's why its imposible to read in the card...(the pic is good)... my suggestions are that you keep the summoning conditions, lower its ATK to around 2600 and make its effect more balanced..something like:Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand and pay 1000 Life Points to Destroy 1 card on the field. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the Type of the destroyed card: Monster Card- Your opponent randomly discards 1 card. Spell Card- Draw 1 card. Trap Card- Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.or something like that..your effect (in your card) is not even thought right (sorry for saying this)... destroying monsters, spells and traps gives you the right to activate great effects while destroying synchros and fusions (fusions less common) that should be like a bonus with a better effect is a little more useless... it should do more stuff when destroying a card that is more unlikely to be in every duel....(and you didn't write anything for rituals..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Major OCG failures. It's overpowered for starters... 2 cards each turn... No cost... UnbbalancedAnd it's 3200 ATK freak... Try making it's effect more reasonable. 5/10. Like the art - it's wickedly awesome (however' date=' you take no credit for that).[/quote'] ^This, and plus, it opposites stuff. Such as if it destroys a face-down Synchro, it destroys a Fusion monster. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 pic is cool but its REALLY unbalanced! 3200ATK and a once per turn effect. Gimmie a break! 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 opponent's =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 how is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 O_o !!! WOW! I didn't expect you would do all I said.......................................... the things I found were:Destroy = destroyDraw = draw but those are technically my errors ..... sorry ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daichi159 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Great effect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 thank you daichi159. and yea sleepy... i did use your effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Start a new line after :, good pic, change monster cards to you discard 1 card. You have to make it balanced. Plus, good Dark World Support. 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 bbbbbbbuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmppppppppp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.