Raelen Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]Yes indeed, an entire club devoted to poetry! (Because poetry is so EPIC, it deserves its own club) In this club you may post any poems you yourself have written OR you may post poems by famous poets and discuss them. I look forward to see who on YCM like poetry! Be sure, when people post their own poems, to give helpful C&C. Flaming is not appreciated. In fact, the rules are as follows,[/align] [align=center]Rules: All YCM rules apply.No spamming.No flaming.No trolling.Please, PLEASE be mindful of your language. (aka. Watch your mouth.) These are the members in The Poets Laureate:Members: [spoiler=Members].:Raelen//:Solo:. Opalmoon Kingduel1 HarbingerEvil Jericho Avanz Anime-Manga Lover siddiqiau00 .::Spawn::. Hunter Hioco .:Haruki Adachi:. Enrise BludMonkey Midnightwolf16 Supreme Gamesmaster Duckmasta2020 apple_cream ~~HUNTER STEEL~~ omega21109Essence I hope you enjoy your time here posting and writing poetry! ^_^Thaynx! .:Raelen//:Solo:.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 umm.... signup form much? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 umm.... signup form much? XD I don't require sign-up forms. I don't think they are needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Can I join? Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above your chamber door. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Can I join? Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above your chamber door. "Quoth the Raven, 'Nevermore.'" Okay, you're in. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 May I Join. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Joinage. Poetry = Win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 You are both in. ^_^Thaynx for joining! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 I'll join. I enjoy poetry. Especially dark poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 And you never thought once to PM me about this? Shame... :D Just kidding! I'll join this. :D And put my Desonance poem as on my list, "it's in my signiture" :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 I love the fact that I am in your sig :) Here's a poem of mine. Short, but I like it. MadnessMadness all envelopingSickeningly developingHellishly detailingAll the super-sensory ailingMaking such a dinIn sin it all curtailingThe frail, pale wailingOf the dark inside availing. What d'ya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 And you never thought once to PM me about this? Shame... :D Just kidding! I'll join this. :D And put my Desonance poem as on my list' date=' "it's in my signiture" :D[/quote'] Lol, I knew your "poetry radar" would find this club. ^_^ You & ΩMega are in! Harbinger, you might want to work on the scanning of the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Here I sitIn the hands of fateMy life consumedEnveloped by hate What's meant to beCan't be escapedI've been enlightenedThough my mind feels raped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Didn't I say for you to put Desonance, the poem in my signiture as one of my poems? Also, put this one in as well. :) You should really have a spoiler in the first post to display every member's works. :) [spoiler=Beyond Imagination]White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, reaching to me.Let me see.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineTaught by lies of corruption and treason.Close my mind. Let it conceal. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning that separates mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from opportunities, I have beenToo deep in memories far and wide above the horizon. White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, recollecting me.Let me see, there is so much more.Holding me to my unlimited possibilities.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineThe teaching of lies spread among one plain.Close my mind. Let it conceal the truth. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning separating my mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from dead memories from long ago,Pushing me towards the greater goal. Spare me the guilt and urge me across the line.Reach out to spare the random,Reach out to spare whatever may come. I embrace my desireTo feel the melody, to feel connectedEnough to step up instead of weep like widow.To feel encouraged, to fathom the power,To find the beauty, to drink from the fountain,To glide on the surfaceOf our divinity and still be human. With my feet above the clouds I may lose it allWithin the waves of open air and open sound to listen in.I feel it glaze across my face.I’m reaching out and I’m reaching up.I reach for the random and whatever intrigues meAnd follow the stars and comets; we may go just where no one’s ever been.We’ll ride the spiral to the end and may go just where no one’s beenAnd keep moving on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Didn't I say for you to put Desonance' date=' the poem in my signiture as one of my poems? Also, put this one in as well. :) You should really have a spoiler in the first post to display every member's works. :) [spoiler=Beyond Imagination']White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, reaching to me.Let me see.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineTaught by lies of corruption and treason.Close my mind. Let it conceal. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning that separates mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from opportunities, I have beenToo deep in memories far and wide above the horizon. White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, recollecting me.Let me see, there is so much more.Holding me to my unlimited possibilities.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineThe teaching of lies spread among one plain.Close my mind. Let it conceal the truth. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning separating my mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from dead memories from long ago,Pushing me towards the greater goal. Spare me the guilt and urge me across the line.Reach out to spare the random,Reach out to spare whatever may come. I embrace my desireTo feel the melody, to feel connectedEnough to step up instead of weep like widow.To feel encouraged, to fathom the power,To find the beauty, to drink from the fountain,To glide on the surfaceOf our divinity and still be human. With my feet above the clouds I may lose it allWithin the waves of open air and open sound to listen in.I feel it glaze across my face.I’m reaching out and I’m reaching up.I reach for the random and whatever intrigues meAnd follow the stars and comets; we may go just where no one’s ever been.We’ll ride the spiral to the end and may go just where no one’s beenAnd keep moving on. Lol, okay, I'll add it.Also, I like this new one! Maybe a bit long, though.. I think I may've found a grammatical error. "Enough to step up instead of weep like widow." Is that right?? But otherwise, I really like it! @ Ωmega: Ooh, very dark and rhythmical! I like it. Could you make it longer? But actually, I think it's nice how it's short! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 i wanna join but i might not post here that much cause its hard for poems to come to me. check out the poem in my sig. its epic!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Well i did have a sorta "Jam Session" on another forum..Still is alive..Can i join? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 i wanna join but i might not post here that much cause its hard for poems to come to me. check out the poem in my sig. its epic!! You are in. I like your poem! Good use of repetition. ^_^ You are in too, siddiqiau00. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Can I join? I like me some good poetry. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 heres another poem thats not too bad.A World Without PainFires burnStorms rageBut nobody is harmed Shots are firedItems explodeBut still nobody is harmed People diePeople liveAnd nobody is harmed sincerely, fit8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 heres another poem thats not too bad.A World Without PainFires burnStorms rageBut nobody is harmed Shots are firedItems explodeBut still nobody is harmed People diePeople liveAnd nobody is harmed sincerely' date=' fit8[/quote'] Can you explain the meaning of this poem? I don't really understand it. How is nobody getting harmed?? .::Spawn::., you are in. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 idk i just thought it would sound good. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 idk i just thought it would sound good. ^_^ Lol, okay. ^_^ I think next time you should make a poem that actually makes more sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 [spoiler=Beware]Some of my poems seem to have no point, but that's because it's kind of directed to me. ^Just a warning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 Didn't I say for you to put Desonance' date=' the poem in my signiture as one of my poems? Also, put this one in as well. :) You should really have a spoiler in the first post to display every member's works. :) [spoiler=Beyond Imagination']White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, reaching to me.Let me see.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineTaught by lies of corruption and treason.Close my mind. Let it conceal. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning that separates mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from opportunities, I have beenToo deep in memories far and wide above the horizon. White and grey are what I see in my pastRed and black then appear to me, recollecting me.Let me see, there is so much more.Holding me to my unlimited possibilities.As below, so above and beyond, I imagineThe teaching of lies spread among one plain.Close my mind. Let it conceal the truth. Beyond thinking, beyond reasoning separating my mind from body.Tarnishing my intuition. Absent from dead memories from long ago,Pushing me towards the greater goal. Spare me the guilt and urge me across the line.Reach out to spare the random,Reach out to spare whatever may come. I embrace my desireTo feel the melody, to feel connectedEnough to step up instead of weep like widow.To feel encouraged, to fathom the power,To find the beauty, to drink from the fountain,To glide on the surfaceOf our divinity and still be human. With my feet above the clouds I may lose it allWithin the waves of open air and open sound to listen in.I feel it glaze across my face.I’m reaching out and I’m reaching up.I reach for the random and whatever intrigues meAnd follow the stars and comets; we may go just where no one’s ever been.We’ll ride the spiral to the end and may go just where no one’s beenAnd keep moving on. Lol, okay, I'll add it.Also, I like this new one! Maybe a bit long, though.. I think I may've found a grammatical error. "Enough to step up instead of weep like widow." Is that right?? But otherwise, I really like it! @ Ωmega: Ooh, very dark and rhythmical! I like it. Could you make it longer? But actually, I think it's nice how it's short! Well, for one, it's completing the lines above it as a sentence. And long poems are more interesting. Why have a standard 4-line-4-Stanza poem when you can have a poem that is very wierd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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