Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 I just realized this but Duftmon's attacks are in German. >_> Hmmm Connection? I actually did not think of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Just readit and loved it. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Alex = Epic win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 On our new girl character' date=' shouldn't her name be Keiko Suzuki? It's more realistic, and I think you might've made a typo. :/[/quote'] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keiko_Suzuki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 XD i know thats probably why rinne got confused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Good chapter, very good. I really like those little pop-cultural things. Also, nice cameo. :D Then again, I noticed something that troubles me - you seem to have misread the metric system. Since the Digital World has roughly the same size as the Earth, the atmosphere should be at more or less the same height. And 250km is spacestation level. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Naaw, only a mentioning of Derek.:( But still, great chapter! Kinda lol'd at Magnamon's argue with Crusadermon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Naaw' date=' only a mentioning of Derek.:( But still, great chapter! Kinda lol'd at Magnamon's argue with Crusadermon.[/quote'] Derek will make a physical appearance soon. I'm going to have so much fun with Crusadermon's sexuality. That was a chance I could not ignore. Good chapter' date=' very good. I really like those little pop-cultural things. Also, nice cameo. :D [b']Then again, I noticed something that troubles me - you seem to have misread the metric system. Since the Digital World has roughly the same size as the Earth, the atmosphere should be at more or less the same height. And 250km is spacestation level. :/[/b] Thanks, I needed this. I'll edit it so that it's slightly taller than Mt. Everest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Naaw' date=' only a mentioning of Derek.:( But still, great chapter! Kinda lol'd at Magnamon's argue with Crusadermon.[/quote'] Derek will make a physical appearance soon. I'm going to have so much fun with Crusadermon's sexuality. That was a chance I could not ignore. This will be fun then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Preview of the next chapter. - The aftermath of Gallantmon vs. Barbamon from Barbamon's perspective.- Alex goes to watch Revenge of the Fallen at Daniel's house.- Omnimon meets with Yggdrasil.- The Royal Knights from the meeting search for Imperialdramon and the other Royal Knights.- More of Yuusuke and Hana!- A look at the Devas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 - Alex goes to watch Revenge of the Fallen at Daniel's house. For some reason, I believe bad stuff will happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 PM me what you have in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Holy sheet this is funking awesome! Roxas, you kick ass at fanfics. This is one of the best Digimon fics I've read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Vote Roxas for King of Fanfic Midwinter '09. I'm happy you like it Bel. Hallelujah and Youmu haven't read this yet.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 XD king of fanfic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Traveler Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 For the first Digimon Fan-Fiction I ever read, you did a rather good job. I literally started laughing out loud after reading the part with the German and Jewish Clubs. And the part with Crusadermon and the Di- Lol. Very interesting, keep up the humor and make this a good run. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I liked the part about Omnimon and Gallantmon...then when silence fell over the Royal Knights. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Alex will continue his paranoia later on, that much is certain. Since Crusadermon and Dynasmon were never seen apart in Frontier, I had to give Crusadermon a "friend". Everyone knows how strong Omnimon is. Didn't you notice that even Crusadermon was quiet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 So, where's Chapter 3, BTW? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 When I finish watching 5D's 63, I'll try to work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 XD thats roxas for yaps. i almost cryed when galant mon died but it feals un real galant mon is the 3rd strongest royal knight i was like "nuuuuuu"*sob* *sob* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I realize that there were several other Royal Knights I could have sent for Barbamon to kill, and Gallantmon is my favorite too, but I ultimately decided on him. Chapter 3 is now 1/6 done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I'm guessing you'll be done wiht it tomorrow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 tomarrow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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